The veiled beauty - part 2
Added 2023-06-04 20:56:11 +0000 UTCLink to repository: https://mega.nz/file/6IxSDRKD#GsNFVfxFRJYGRUKUfNjBvdW3Npu6SOXskic5Ywq4VN8
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Interesting but the "ending" certainly leaves it open for an "arranged" marriage
Christopher Haslop
2024-05-03 08:13:16 +0000 UTCThis was meant as the final part but I might add an extra part later with a fast-forward of a few months or years into their lives
Alex94
2023-06-06 07:18:22 +0000 UTCThank you!
Alex94
2023-06-06 07:15:43 +0000 UTCSuggestion (well, an idea, anyway!): if Samira and Jacob don’t work out, that means she would lose her US residency, yes? It would be dark, but maybe for the best if she was deported back to the Middle East - after all, that’s where she “fits in” best, now! And then everyone can be “happy” in their new lives. Pretty dark idea, but that would be my thinking, at least. Great work with this, so far, as others have said, anyway!
Miserena
2023-06-05 22:05:03 +0000 UTCVery well written with a lot of depth!
Chris S
2023-06-05 12:36:43 +0000 UTC
