Bottle Blondes 11: Four Hours and a Fortnight
Added 2025-06-05 22:14:47 +0000 UTCI've been itching to write this one for a while, and it turned out a lot trickier than I thought it'd be! Still, extremely fun to finally put to the page.
Formatting, continuity, and spelling revisions: 6/17/25
Comments
I binge read the whole story in two days and I love it so so soooooo much. And well, here I am. Feral for what comes next.
Jade Diaz
2025-06-23 04:41:16 +0000 UTCoh good catch! (i am currently bapping myself on the forehead) iβll fix that up this week
Rhiannon Swanson
2025-06-09 11:24:00 +0000 UTCidk if this is the place to do this, but i did notice what i think is an inconsistency in this chapter. In this chapter, it's implied that the night that David winds up in Anna & Lucys' room (where Viola is hiding under the bed) was 1 week before the frat party. However, I believe that it's supposed to be 2 weeks before the frat party, where the week in-between is where chapter 2 takes place.
Margot Wasserman
2025-06-09 10:15:59 +0000 UTC