Bottle Blondes 10: Presented for Your Inspection
Added 2025-05-21 01:02:07 +0000 UTCLonger one! I think I got the formatting to work on those texts better, but let me know!
Enjoy :)
Updated 6/17/25
Comments
Good fucking chapter
Alyson Greaves
2025-05-22 13:05:39 +0000 UTCYeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah. Yeah! ...yeah.
Alyson Greaves
2025-05-22 13:05:25 +0000 UTCnot on like a scene to scene basis! there are some little bits in all this tho the macro level is closer to the play than the micro
Rhiannon Swanson
2025-05-21 22:39:35 +0000 UTCevil evil evil i love it
baked
2025-05-21 15:52:34 +0000 UTCSo I have no information about Twelfth Night that isn't in this story, but from the way Anabelle talks about stuff I gotta ask: Is Viola just living through the plot of Twelfth Night right now? (if so, this must be the funniest thing from David's perspective)
Valerie Coburn
2025-05-21 14:42:41 +0000 UTCThis chapter was so great with so many great parts. I had dreams about it all night long.
Ronni
2025-05-21 12:13:51 +0000 UTCAAAAAAAAAAAA ITS SO CUTE!!!
Stephanie
2025-05-21 11:50:49 +0000 UTCOh my GOD that was perfect. (Except the part where Anna decided to enunciate a certain name a bunch. Hate that name.)
Amelia J
2025-05-21 10:14:04 +0000 UTCanabelle: do not get on boats viola: no problem! *dunks herself straight into the water*
AntinoΓ«
2025-05-21 10:01:47 +0000 UTCEvil cliffhanger! Typo first page - bus should be bush.
Caroline Debenham
2025-05-21 09:51:34 +0000 UTCOh dear! I guess it's time we get several answers about David, huh? I hope they'll be good ones. Somehow I can't imagine David not being nice but you never know⦠I also hope he won't have to take her to the hospital or something!
Klairi Tasopoulou
2025-05-21 07:58:12 +0000 UTCIncredible chapter. So much happened. So well paced and written. The cliffhanger kills me but I'll have to bear that pain. there's a typo somewhere that says "on's" instead of "one's"
ellie
2025-05-21 06:25:55 +0000 UTCaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Margot Wasserman
2025-05-21 05:18:16 +0000 UTCEeee this was *so* good π
Monica
2025-05-21 04:01:30 +0000 UTCYou had me CONVINCED it was going to burn longer
Matt Comeau
2025-05-21 03:48:53 +0000 UTCAAAAAAAAAAAAA it's perfect. it's all perfect
Matt Comeau
2025-05-21 03:47:46 +0000 UTC"Enjoy :)" YEAH OKAY.
Laura Lemon
2025-05-21 02:05:42 +0000 UTCOh I think I might ACTUALLY die with this
Laura Lemon
2025-05-21 02:03:47 +0000 UTCI *did* fantasize about if the runner in the early morning could be david, and especially after Sarah mentioned he runs...
Rainplosion
2025-05-21 01:55:11 +0000 UTCOhhhhhh my god ending the chapter here is so cruel
Rainplosion
2025-05-21 01:50:04 +0000 UTC
