Bottle Blondes 9: Relax
Added 2025-05-07 22:07:37 +0000 UTCSo, trying a couple of different upload formats on this, and just about none of them look perfect, so bear with me! I'm especially struggling with the indentation on the texts in .epub files (I swear to god we're gonna get there). Anyway! Thank you all for the support! It means a lot!
Typos and formatting revisions: 6/17/25
Comments
that kiss is gonna hit like crack
Stephanie
2025-05-12 04:00:37 +0000 UTCVery pleasant read and great chapter. Turmoil, partial resolution, good epub formatting. Thank you!
ellie
2025-05-08 23:40:51 +0000 UTCIf it makes you feel any better, you're not the first to be driven insane by sciveners (That's what I'm assuming you use, I think you mentioned it before) compile function. I've been tinkering with it for months and still can't get the .epub exports the way I want them. The text messages in the pdf look good here, at least!
Amelia J
2025-05-08 19:37:16 +0000 UTCThe epub indents look good, the only thing Iβd so is define an additional paragraph class to use for text message conversations so you can elide the indents there. You ought to be able to do that inside Scrivener and have it carry the formatting across to the export. (Give me a DM if you need advice etc.)
Alyson Greaves
2025-05-08 13:31:14 +0000 UTCI woke up in the middle of the night, looked at my phone, and saw there was an update on this. Then I went back to sleep and dreamt that I read it, and it was a really short chapter where Vi goes back to the other girls' room, says hi, and falls asleep. Glad it wasn't that. :p
Klairi Tasopoulou
2025-05-08 09:41:29 +0000 UTC"I just need to keep my head down for a bit" (30 secs later) "Oh, hi David!"
Caroline Debenham
2025-05-08 07:22:54 +0000 UTCit was a soft and gentle chapter, even though there was The Boymode (urgh) i hope viola finally gets her kiss at the party i hope we get to see viola explain to the girls that actually they need to go out for said boykissing to happen
AntinoΓ«
2025-05-08 07:05:30 +0000 UTCOh this girl is absolutely not showing up to that party as Seb. No fucking way.
July
2025-05-08 03:15:49 +0000 UTCthe man is everywhere who would be surprised honestly
Rhiannon Swanson
2025-05-08 01:59:29 +0000 UTCFWIW, I thought the text messaging looked fine in the epub version. And NGL, I swore that when Viola found that hidden spot in the bushes, I half expected Cam to stumble into them at any second! LoL
Ronni
2025-05-08 00:51:35 +0000 UTC:)
Rhiannon Swanson
2025-05-08 00:17:24 +0000 UTCI am SCREAMING at David's last words this chapter.
Laura Lemon
2025-05-07 23:19:06 +0000 UTCOh hell yes. Gonna read this in the morning π
Alyson Greaves
2025-05-07 22:15:09 +0000 UTC
