Sol Invictus - Chapter 1
Added 2021-03-27 18:59:17 +0000 UTCHello!
It's finally there.
The first chapter of my webcomic Sol Invictus. It's mostly meant to introduce the story.
This is my first webcomic so I welcome your feedback. Let me know what you like or dislike.
It will also be available on webtoon in a week or 2.
I swear this isn't a FF Tactics Advance Fanfiction (hehe).
A girl dies and gets reincarnated in the story mode of the last fighting game she played.
The problem is she gets reincarnated as the lowest tier character who also eventually gets killed. Unfortunately, she hasn't played story mode, only saw a few spoilers, and doesn't know what she must do to survive.
First, she must learn how to fight, change the fate of her character and eventually find out why she's here.
Let me know if there's any problem in the comments.
Comments
Hype as hell
Trailblaiswe
2021-03-29 16:13:28 +0000 UTCWonderful valedectory installment. I look forward to more!
Eggsburst
2021-03-28 15:53:51 +0000 UTCCongrats on the first chapter!! I've been looking forward to it since you mentioned starting work on it, it's a really solid and fun first chapter that explains your lore really well without being overwhelming. Learning with Adra is a really fun way to open up the story since she didn't read story mode either. Page 31 was my favorite LOL it's so cute, I love them!!! I think your expressions were really strong. Honestly I've got no critiques or dislikes, I'm just so happy you started your comic and we get to learn about your characters more!!!!! Good luck with work on the next chapter, I think the pages will look really cool once it's up on Webtoon!
henemimi
2021-03-27 23:25:54 +0000 UTCthank you!!
2021-03-27 20:35:24 +0000 UTCThis is pretty incredible, this is a really great and complete (and also really long wow congrats on that) first chapter. The character designs are amazing, the premise is well established and there's already moments that are super cute and dialogues that makes me laugh for real. How exciting
SingForAnactoria
2021-03-27 19:44:06 +0000 UTC
