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3.10 The Lost Apprentice 1 (Apprentice Access)

the mk1/draft of chapter 10 of book 3 of A New Player.

In this, Cam, having run into Quinlan (or more accurately had the Kiffar seek him out) agrees to help him find his missing Padawan: Aayla.

(Yes, this 2 chapter arc is adapted from the Republic: Dark Times comic Darkness.)

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/17VL1hDKm-FTkeANgQs2Cklv8paAJqxPEYveAwlFSfGc/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

He's not falling to the Dark Side, he's willingly walking into it. Gray Jedi are... not a real thing. Quin-Gon would be what one in-verse might call "grey" though they wouldn't use that term. Nor did they. Grey Jedi are a fanon creation, at least how 99% of people use the term. Both sides of the Force cannot be used at the same time. It is simply not possible. The Force is in conflict with itself. An eternal war between the light and dark though neither can destroy the other. The reason for that might well be when the Celestials merged with the Force, and thus irrevocably altered it with their 'mortal minds'.

USSExplorer

Yeah it really does feel like he's falling to the dark side. I know he wants to be more of a Grey Jedi but he's dangerously close.

Nomad

Cameron should go to a therapist. Dealing with emotions is kinda their job. He may only want to pretend it but he is slowly falling already.

Alnatura

Once again the jedi bury their heads in the sand and wave their collective asses in the air for all to see at this point I'd liken them to a public school constantly preaching about having a zero tolerance policy for bullying but at the same time sweeping everything under the rug so that they don't have to do anything about it until it's too late. Great chapter can't wait for the second and final draft here's hoping that cam gets some more allies out of this

Dos'Moram


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