The Water Runs Red 1 Mk1
Added 2024-04-10 11:00:11 +0000 UTCDraft of chapter 36 of Game of Kingdoms.
This is the start of (currently) a 6-arc run of Cregan's moves against the Pirate Lords of Redwater. Before then, however, Cregan has to bring his squires in on his secrets, as without doing so he cannot fulfil the promise to Doran Martell for teaching Trystane magic. And then have one final body join the voyage to Redwater.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to those in 1st drafts.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zVyesgeBjz4NahpNuTcfaJZrev-iigMvwemi9p5xxvE/edit?usp=sharing
To help with tracking things, here's a map of the Stepstones as of the beginning of this chapter.
Comments
Thxs for the reply… good look forward to more adventures. I started the Star Wars story. Never been a huge Star Wars guy but I give it a try. I love swords so light sabers are close enough… (yea I know jape here when I see one) Bahhh…
Lord Dagen
2024-04-22 02:32:36 +0000 UTCYeah, spotted that after doing the draft. Altered mentions of the Iron Islands to Victorion as head of the Greyjoys and the Reader is Lord of the Iron Islands
USSExplorer
2024-04-21 12:04:33 +0000 UTCUuummm I just read that ch. 35 and then went back cause I could have sworn you killed Balon off and a brother not named… I was right ch. 14 about quarter down. So what’s all stuff about Balon then? Delete if you need too… but the question still stands?
Lord Dagen
2024-04-21 11:24:16 +0000 UTCsays its locked for me but thanks for pointing it out
Vincent Bernardo
2024-04-14 19:40:53 +0000 UTCIt was published last month https://www.patreon.com/posts/99454787
USSExplorer
2024-04-14 08:59:16 +0000 UTCwhere is chapter 35?
Vincent Bernardo
2024-04-13 20:30:26 +0000 UTCgood chappie
Elaine
2024-04-10 14:12:49 +0000 UTC
