The Living Planet 4 (General Access)
Added 2023-02-01 14:01:00 +0000 UTCChapter 4 of the arc, chapter 17 of ANP book 2.
The redrafted and semi-beta'ed (still has some work to go I believe) next chapter of Cam's adventures before the public release.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Vf972v08V3p5icUYIMk9qCFhjoyvdHeQFSgNalQAH1w/edit?usp=sharing
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Ok, my bad. Knightly Diplomacy isn't out in draft form yet (it will be in a few days though) but the arc's name does hint at what the near-future hold for Cam, which will allow him freedom from Fay, to a degree.
USSExplorer
2023-02-06 08:20:27 +0000 UTC“let me be clear when this fails, and it does,” should be will there not does? Also: Particularity should be particularly, few lines further down
Dragontaylor
2023-02-06 07:34:52 +0000 UTCThe next arc, which you'll have seen the first chapter of in draft form, is called Knightly Diplomacy. The name is a hint to how things will go for Cam ;)
USSExplorer
2023-02-06 07:33:33 +0000 UTCPlease tell me it won’t be long before Cameron breaks from the order or at least can stop listening to crap like Fay spouts?
Dragontaylor
2023-02-06 07:31:12 +0000 UTC
