Into the Unown Ch 159 + 160 (Epilogue) + Afterword

Author's note:

I decided to release these last two chapters of Part Two together since chapter 159 feels quite transitory.

Make sure to read the afterword at the end and thank you for sticking with me up to this point!

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Chapter 159: End of Part Two

The following days saw a slew of visitors come and go, one of which was Charlie, who came bearing a gift basket filled with Natto for some reason.

“Thanks…?” Nina drawled, her tone filled with skepticism. “I mean, why natto?”

“Hah!” Cole scoffed, shooting a look at Charlie that screams “I told you so.”

Nobita, who was also with them, laughed at the antics of his companions. “Charlie says that they're filled with nutrients beneficial for a recovering patient.”

Nina laughed. “I mean I’m being fed Chansey’s eggs every day, I doubt anything’s more nutritious than that.” In fact, the daily supply of Chansey’s eggs almost made Nina feel glad about being hospitalized.

“Hah! That’s what we told this dumbass, but he wouldn’t listen.” Cole chimed, taking a momentary reprieve from his bickering with Charlie.

“It is nutritious!” Charlie exclaimed. “And tasty too…” That last part was said in a barely audible murmur.

Nina smiled. “Boys, that’s enough. I appreciate the gift, and it’s the thought that counts.”

“That’s what they like to say when the gift is shit,” said Cole, provoking another round of arguments with Charlie.

Nina sighed, tuning out the unruly duo making a fuss in her room and turned to address Nobita instead. “So, how’ve you been? I imagine the past week hasn’t been kind to you.” Especially since Nobita, as the scion and a prominent executive of the Yamaguchi Group, was deeply implicated in his father’s dealings.

Nobita responded with a feeble smile. “It’s not too bad, the League is granting me clemency in exchange for my full cooperation. So we’re mostly just busy trying to round up all the crooks under our employ. The biggest issue is what to do with the business…”

Despite the Yamaguchi Group’s underhanded dealings, there was also a legitimate side to the conglomerate, one that was intricately tied to Celadon City’s economy and provided employment to thousands of residents. Residents who all have families to support. The collapse of such a massive entity would have a devastating effect on the city. It was no wonder that the Celadon City Council was so protective of it.

Nina nodded in understanding. “Yeah, this isn’t like Red and the Rocket Game Center where it’s just one little Game Corner.” The Rocket Game Center was quite lucrative, but it didn’t operate on the same scale as the Yamaguchi Group. “So what’s next then? I doubt the League would be so callous as to just let everything devolve into chaos.”

Nobita shifted in his seat and looked out the window. “My grandma is helping me sort things out, but basically we’re thinking of downsizing, selling off what we can and consolidating the rest. All the illegal operations will be shut down of course, I doubt the League will tolerate anything less.” 

The boy then let out a long, weary sigh. “It’s not going to be easy though. By the time we’re done with all the severance payments, there won’t be anything left. Not to mention our creditors…”

“What about the council then?” Nina asked with a scoff. “I doubt the League is gonna let them off scott free.” In fact, just from the snippets of news she saw over the past week, there had already been a slew of resignations from the Celadon City Council. And last she heard from Lilian, Erika had returned to the city and was now aggressively taking over the reins of governance with the full support of the Indigo League.

Nobita laughed. “Our good friend, Councilman Abe and the rest of the former Council are all under house arrest, pending investigation — which is going to be a struggle as well since the police have long been corrupted.” 

Unlike the other cities where the top of the police force consisted mostly of members from the Jenny clan, the upper brass of the Celadon police were mostly non-Jennys. Which was odd if Nina were to think about it. Usually such an uneven concentration of power in the hands of a single family was detrimental more often than not. 

In fact, part of why it took so long for the Elite Four to mobilise was because they needed to gather together a force from outside Celadon City. That and the fact that Yamaguchi HQ ended up being a Rocket den where most of Giovanni's most competent former executives were undercover as employees, a fact that even Nobita was unaware of, resulting in the fierce battle that caused devastation in the city. 

Honestly, it was a miracle that Alfred managed to get out of that mess with just a severed arm and a ruined suit. Maybe Nina’s theory that the Blackthorn clan had a team shadowing Lilian as a contingency was valid after all. Something that the girl was clearly ignorant about when Nina asked about it.

“What about you, Charlie?” Nina interrupted the boys’ argument, feeling a little annoyed at the commotion next to her sick bed. “How are you holding up?”

Charlie eagerly grabbed hold of Nina’s olive branch and turned away from Cole. “Yeah, good as new!” The boy rolled his previously injured shoulder and flexed his non-existent biceps.

Nina laughed. “That’s good. I’m really sorry for getting you hurt by the way. That kunai was meant for me…”

In response, Charlie just laughed and waved off Nina’s apology. “Nah, are you kidding me? Based on what I heard from the other girls, I’d say you did me a favor.” The boy then gestured towards Nina’s sorry state. She wasn’t as wrapped up anymore, affording her some space to move, but she wasn’t fully healed just yet. “Seems like you guys went through a lot while I was out of it.”

Nina sighed. “Yeah, tell me about it… Anyways, what’s next for you boys? Are you gonna continue on your journey? And I’m not sure if you noticed, but if you plan on challenging the conference next year, you’ll have to redo your Boulder Badge challenge since Gym badges only last for two years.”

Charlie looked towards Cole who just shrugged in indifference. “Yeah, I think we’ll take our time. I don’t mind redoing the Pewter Gym but I’m not so hung up on the conference anymore either.” Charlie then looked down in embarrassment. “I’m actually thinking it might be nice to become a Pokemon Ranger… What do you think?”

“That’s awesome!” Nina exclaimed with all the excitement she could muster without aggravating her wounds. “I’m proud of you Charlie! I think you’re gonna be a great Pokemon Ranger!”

“Thanks! I’ll do my best!” Charlie beamed a bright smile at Nina, the same sunny, toothy look that she was so used to seeing back when they were kids. 

***

Smack!

Nina shook her hand to dispel the numbness before winding it up again and going in for another smack. The girl revelled in the elastic bounciness she felt upon impact, almost like smacking a water balloon in that regard.

This was Nina’s new favorite game, where she competed with Brucey to see who could create the most appealing ripples on Nitey’s tubby belly. To the side Espy was acting as the judge while Sir Clodington was their reluctant referee. Each participant had three tries and Espy would grade them on their best attempt.

“Look, being stuck in a hospital is super boring, okay?”

Nina exhaled in exhaustion and shook her hand once more, her skin now a pale shade just like how it was years ago before she started diving. The doctor’s did a phenomenal job, and while she did feel overly sensitive during those first few days, that rawness had largely subsided by now.

The only caveat though, was the muscle spasms. The doctors assured her that the symptoms would fade over time, but so far that prediction had yet to come into fruition. 

“Alright Brucey, your turn.”

“Kukuku…” Brucey taunted Nina with a laugh as he hopped further back for a bit of a running start, before throwing himself towards Nitey with his back turned.

Nitey chuckled as Brucey sunk into his leathery pooch of a beanbag, before heaving and unceremoniously bouncing the Golbat off him and onto the floor, eliciting laughter from Nina. To the side, judge Espy shook her head in disapproval — while the impact was quite substantial, no ripples were formed, thereby disqualifying that attempt.

In truth Nina hadn’t gotten used to Nitey’s new appearance yet. She still maintained that a Dragonair had a much more aesthetic form than a Dragonite, which for all intents and purposes, was just an orange Barney the dinosaur but with wings.

But regardless of the massive shift in appearance, her silly Dragon was still the same inside and that’s all that mattered. And with that thought, Nina pulled her Dragonite in for a hug, his other new favorite activity and something that he could more easily do now that he had arms.

In fact, one of the things Nitey was most eager to try once Nina gets discharged later on in the day was to sleep with Nina in his embrace. Something that the girl was keen on doing as well, since she imagined laying on that tubby pooch would be like laying on one of those old school water beds. 

However, at the same time, she couldn’t help but think that her status as a trainer had been downgraded to just being Nitey’s plushie, as her partner did to her everything that she used to do to him back when he was still a little noodle boy.

“Nina, time to go home!”

The door to Nina’s room opened, to reveal the chiselled figure of Alias Jones with the rest of Nina’s family in tow. They all flew in from Cerulean City just to pick Nina up from the hospital today.

“Mom, dad, Uncle Ali!” Nina jumped up in excitement and threw herself into her uncle’s embrace, who picked her up and spun her around like always.

“Yowza, you’ve grown! They must’ve been feeding you good in the hospital huh?”

“Yup!” Nina beamed. “I got to eat Chansey’s egg for every single meal. It was great!”

“Nina, were you playing with poor Nitey’s tummy again?” Leanette, Nina’s mother, chimed as she gently rubbed at the red marks on Nitey’s pale abdomen.

Nina averted her gaze and pouted. “He’s fine, mom. Nitey’s a big tough Dragon.” In fact, one might even consider the big orange oaf an adult after what he did with Sapphire.

However, Nitey clearly didn’t agree with Nina’s sentiment as he nuzzled against Leanette’s bosom and started wailing like a cry baby. The tears were all fake of course, not that it stopped Nina’s mom from shooting an admonishing look at the girl.

Patrick laughed and took out his camera. “It’s fine, our daughter knows what she’s doing. Now, let’s all snap a picture to celebrate Nina’s safe discharge.” The man suggested, only to be met with vehement rejection from his daughter.

“No!” Nina ran to her bedside table to grab her hat which she pulled over her bald head. “I refuse to be photographed while looking like this!”

“Aww… C’mon sweetie, you look great. My daughter’s the cutest in the world, even without hair.” Patrick pleaded, only for Nina to glare at him while blowing her tongue out.

They kept the banter going for some time until a Nurse Joy came in to chase them out. Fortunately, Nina was spared from having her bald visage be captured for posterity.

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Chapter 160: Part Two Epilogue

Fallen leaves crunched beneath Nina’s feet, every step invoking the distinct scent of autumn; that of decay, musk and the sickening sweetness of overripe fruit.

Nina took in a deep breath, savouring the earthy smell permeating the air while throwing her head back to take in the golden orange canopy looming high above. A cooling breeze rustled her newly grown hair, just barely shoulder length and no longer bleached like it was until just a few months ago.

“So you gonna tell me where we are now?” Nina asked Hikari. The woman had previously offered to help Nina procure a Ghost Type Pokemon and Nina was here to cash in.

Hikari giggled and responded with an impish smile. “Why don’t you take a guess?”

Nina rolled her eyes with an exasperated groan. “Urgh. Mystics!” Instead of playing along with Hikari’s farce, Nina just pulled out her Pokedex and checked her map. Hikari had teleported them here without prior explanation, so Nina genuinely had no idea where they were.

“Wait…” Nina frowned. “We’re near the Hidden Valley Estate, Melanie’s brewery. Are there even Ghost Pokemon here?”

Hikari pouted, the worldly beauty somehow managed to make even such a childish expression look sublime. It’s a wonder why no one had murdered Bill in a jealous rage yet for keeping such a woman to himself.

“You’re no fun…” Hikari whined. “And to answer your question — yes, there is a Ghost Pokemon to be found here.”

Nina turned to stare at Hikari with a raised eyebrow. “A Ghost Pokemon? Singular?”

But instead of responding to the girl, Hikari just giggled once more, the tinkling of bell chimes accompanying her delicate voice as she continued to lead the way.

They kept walking until the air shifted, transitioning to a subtly ominous atmosphere that sent chills down Nina’s spine, accentuated by a distinct change in the scenery — the trees adorning this new stretch of the forest seemed unnaturally dried and withered. They weren’t dead husks per se, but there was a sickly shade to their barks, and the leaves were more barren than normal, even for the autumn season.

The girl frowned. “Something doesn’t feel right.” Yet at the same time, it was clearly a good sign for her purpose — this was an ideal environment for a Ghost Type.

There were a thousand questions that Nina wanted to ask, but didn’t want to deal with the headache of Hikari’s cryptic ramblings. So she held her tongue and just followed along, until they reached an inordinately barren area, one without even a single blade of grass in sight. Beyond which was a cave, its dark gaping maw exuding a discomforting aura.

Nina took in her surroundings with a wary gaze, particularly at the dark patches on the ground, now washed and faded with time. “Melanie’s friend, the Alpha Parasect. This was her former nest wasn’t it?” The girl asked, as she leveled an intense, no bullshit gaze at her companion.

Hikari nodded with a genial smile. “Indeed,” she responded, without any ambiguity for once. “You will find your new member within the cave ahead. But you must venture forth alone, without the company of myself or your Pokemon. That child is a little shy, you see.”

Nina took in a weak breath and exhaled. What Hikari was telling her to do went against every conventional wisdom when it came to dealing with wild Ghost Pokemon — never engage them alone and never within their lair.

On instinct, Nina grabbed hold of the Mew Gem dangling around her neck to reassure herself. For all intents and purposes, Hikari was Mew’s emissary. And so long as that gem remained on Nina’s person, it meant that the Mythical Pokemon still had use for her. Therefore, Mew wouldn’t allow Nina’s life to be forfeit just yet. 

For all that Nina complained about Justin’s protagonist luck, she herself wasn’t that lacking either. “Unless Mew’s intention is to feed me to whatever scary Ghost lives within that cave.”

With another deep breath, Nina steeled her resolve and marched into the imposing darkness of the unsettling cavern.

***

Nina turned on her flashlight as she waded through the darkness of her surroundings. The space she was in was eerily empty, not even the common moss or fungi in sight, just bare rock face all around.

Just like the exterior grounds, there were also dark patches of earth sporadically dotting the cavern floors — the only reminder of the tragedy that had once befell its previous occupants.

“Gosh, it’s been a long time since then huh? Maybe three or four years by this point?” Nina murmured out loud, mostly to ease her own nerves and offset the unnatural silence surrounding her. “A lotta stuff happened over the years. Can’t believe it’s been that long…”

The girl chuckled to herself. “I mean, I suppose I did wish for a more exciting life than my last. But I mostly meant lots of travel and getting to meet new and interesting Pokemon, not be graced by a mythical Pokemon and granted a fate-bending macguffin.” Her transmigration really did feel like a monkey’s paw at times.

A splash of water interrupted Nina’s musings. The cave was extremely damp, thanks to the autumn rain, resulting in droplets of water falling from the ceiling from time to time. The girl did a little hop to the side, to avoid stepping into a puddle of water on the ground. Based on her previous experience in the Safari Zone, Nina learned firsthand how deceptively deep those puddles may be.

As she landed with a quiet whoop, the flashlight in Nina’s hand shifted, its beams illuminating some markings on the wall by accident. The markings were located near the base of the wall, necessitating that Nina crouch down to examine them. Their position was so obscure that had Nina not made that little hop, she probably wouldn’t have ever noticed them.

The markings weren’t immediately comprehensible, like childish graffiti carved into the rock wall with a sharp implement. From what Nina could tell, it seemed to depict flowers and mushrooms, and a triangular stick figure with lines coming out of the base, looking suspiciously like a Parasect if Nina squinted hard enough.

Nina remained crouched for some time, running a finger through the markings and revelling in the coarse texture of the rockface. She was very careful not to apply any force, not wanting to accidentally erase any vestiges of history.

The girl imagined a scene; A group of mischievous Paras huddled around this wall, their stubby little claws clumsily scratching at the surface, to illustrate the sights that they saw that day. Nina shut her eyes and heard the excited chittering of the juvenile Paras, a field of flowers adorning the now-barren cave exterior, and a matronly Alpha Parasect, ever imposing, watching over her brood.

A salty taste invaded Nina’s lips, from the stream of tears flowing down her face. “I’m sorry. I’m sorry that I didn’t come sooner…” It wasn’t her fault of course, and Nina knew that. And yet, she couldn’t help but regret that she didn’t treat Mew’s Gem more seriously. “This entire time, I’ve just been stubbornly evasive, not wanting to get involved in any trouble…”

Nina sniffled and took in a deep breath, the girl clasped her hand together and channeled all her grief and lament in the form of a sincere prayer. “Arceus or Mew or whoever is listening. I don’t know if there’s a heaven in this world. But for all the suffering and injustice that occurred under your watch, I hope that you at least grant these wayward souls happiness in the afterlife. And may the wrath of Giratina descend upon the villains who perpetrated such an atrocity!”

Nina remained in prayer for some time, her shoulders trembling, not from grief, but from the mild muscle spasms threatening to overwhelm her, until she felt the touch of a chilling presence. 

The girl forced a smile, sniffling one last time before opening her eyes to peek to her side. “Hey there, buddy...”

The greyish purple ball of gas titled its head in intrigue and peered up at Nina with teary eyes, eliciting a warm look from Nina as she gently pulled the Gastly into her embrace.

The Ghost Pokemon was distinctly different from other Gastly that Nina had seen; grey flames, purple body and a perpetually sad frown on its face as opposed to the sinister grin that other Gastlys had.

“Must have been tough huh? Being all alone here, waiting for your family to return.”

Gastly lowered its gaze, its frown deepened as if trying desperately to recall some distant memory.

Nina smiled and nuzzled against the chilling ball of gas. The sensation of touching a Gastly was quite uncanny. The Gastly flames felt cold but scalding at the same time, almost like frostbite. While the actual body of the Ghost itself was incorporeal and weightless, with nothing for Nina to hold onto, just a persistent pressure that seemed to repel the girl’s touch from that sphere of negative space.

“Can’t remember huh?” Nina continued, her tears threatening to spill out once more. “I’m the same way — just a phantom body snatcher, a ghost from beyond the grave.” The girl chuckled in self deprecation. “Recently, I’ve been having trouble remembering what my parents looked like too — my original parents, Mile’s parents, not Nina’s.”

Nina laughed out at her own words. “Look at me, I must be going crazy. Miles, Nina, who am I even? I don’t even know anymore.” 

Gastly shifted, responding to Nina’s lament with an affectionate nuzzle. Or at least, Nina liked to think that it was affectionate. It was hard to tell since a disembodied ball of spectral gas didn’t have much in terms of body language.

“Say, are you a boy or a girl? I can’t tell?” Nina asked with her fist out, doing things the old school way since Espy wasn’t with her at the moment.

Gastly wavered, seemingly unsure of itself before hovering a little closer to Nina’s right hand, signifying that it might be female.

Nina giggled. “You’re not sure huh? No worries, it’s not that important anyway.” The girl then unfurled her fists and reached out to gently caress the Gastly. “Do you want to go see your mom by any chance? Maybe you’ll be able to remember something?”

Gastly perked up and gazed at Nina with big round eyes, eliciting another giggle from the girl. “Come on, let’s go. I’m sure I can get my friend to track down Parasect for us.”

***

As it turned out, Parasect hadn’t left the Sea Cottage yet. Bill’s researchers had wanted to conduct a few more studies with the Alpha and managed to convince it to stick around for a bit longer. In particular, they wanted to test if repeated shock exposure to an Alpha Pokemon’s distinct aura could unlock a domesticated Eevee’s dormant instincts.

Nina stood at a distance and watched in trepidation as Gastly hovered over to the Alpha Parasect.

Parasect was calm, having already been used to the comings and going of strangers in the Sea Cottage. But that in itself was also a bad sign. As Gastly approached, Parasect just looked on indifferently, no recognition in sight.

Gastly looked up at the Alpha Parasect with a timid gaze, unsure of what to do. While Parasect raised her claw and gently prodded at the little purple ball of gas in front of her in fascination. They remained that way for some time until Parasect got bored and walked away elsewhere, leaving Gastly to drift back to Nina with the same sad look that it always wore, brows deeply furrowed.

Nina bit her lip and pulled the Gastly into her embrace. “I’m sorry, maybe that was a bad idea…” She murmured, holding back her tears. It was evident that neither parent nor child recognized each other. But judging by the contemplative look on Gastly’s face, it seemed that at least the Ghost had recognized a tenuous connection, however fleeting it may be.

Gastly licked at the single teardrop that spilled from the corner of Nina’s eye, leaving behind a slight tingling sensation as per the paralyzing nature of a Gastly’s tongue.

Nina smiled at Gastly’s awkward assurance. “Thanks, I really should be the one comforting you. Not the other way around.” She let out a feeble laugh and held the gas Pokemon away from her to look into the pair of droopy eyes adorning the purple void. “Would you be willing to join my family, Gastly? You and I, we may never be able to regain our past lives, but there’s nothing stopping us from moving forward and forming new bonds.”

The girl then proceeded to tell Gastly about the rest of her family; the silly and adventurous Nitey, the noble but awkward Espy, the mischievous but loving Brucey, and the stoic and ever faithful Sir Clodington. She even talked about her parents, the Joneses, and her Uncle Ali, as well as Misty, Beverly and the rest of the Cerulean Gym.

“Oh, and can’t forget Kerry as well. She’s an apprentice nurse, we’ll be seeing a lot of her in the future because we promised to go out on our journey together.” Although Nina had promised to set out after summer, her injuries meant that their plans had to be delayed. Mostly because Leanette got a little anxious and refused to let Nina journey until she was sure that her daughter was fully recovered.

Kerry was very accommodating of the fact though. In fact, she even took Leanette's side in insisting that Nina rest for a little while longer. It all meant that the two girls agreed to set out in the new year instead, in keeping with a more typical schedule.

“So yeah,” Nina concluded. “If all of that sounds good to you, would you be willing to join my little family and go out to explore the world together?”

Gastly smiled for the first time since they met, the Ghost Pokemon’s frown literally turned upside down in muted happiness, prompting Nina to cry out and pull Gastly in for another hug.

“Now then, what should we name you…” Nina stared at Gastly in contemplation, feeling at a loss since she wasn’t even sure about their gender. The girl hummed. “Hmm… I think you’re a girl?”

“Gassy? Heck no. Pearly? Nah, Bev already has Pearl the Cloyster. Poil, maybe? Myrtle? Nope, too annoying.” As Nina continued to stare into Gastly’s beady pupils, her smile loosened, turning into a wry chuckle as she lightly shook her head.

“Nah, you know what? You can decide on your own name. This second life is yours, you have the right to decide how you want to live it. So one day, when you discover who you want to be, just let me know and that’s who I will address you as.” Until then, Nina will consider Gastly as a female and continue to call her by her species name, just for convenience.

Gastly beamed a wide smile and nuzzled up against her new trainer once more, eliciting giggles from the girl, whose skin was already beginning to lose sensation from the chilling cold.

“Gastly is great, but I probably can’t cuddle her to sleep. That said, she’ll be great to hold during summer time, so long as I don’t overdo it.”

“Alright, let’s head back. I can’t wait to introduce you to everyone.” Nina got up and walked back to the Sea Cottage with the newest addition to her team happily in tow.

***

Author's Note:

In case I didn't do a good enough job of describing it. Nina's new Gastly is a shiny. This is actually a homage to the first ever shiny that I remember capturing.

In fact, in the original draft of this story. Gastly was meant to be Nina's starter Pokemon while Brucey the Golbat was meant to be her secondary.

Why a Gastly you ask? Well, you'll have to keep reading the afterword to find out.

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Afterword

That's it, that's the end of Into the Unown: Part Two.

I keep racking my brain to think of something profound to say in this segment.

But let's just be honest here. None of you are interested in reading my sap. So instead, I though I would make this interesting for you guys with some fun facts regarding this story.

• Fun fact #1

I mentioned before that Gastly was originally meant to be Nina's starter in the timeline that she didn't catch a Dratini.

The idea was that Ghost Pokemon don't require much in terms of material sustenance. So a Gastly would be cheap to maintain. Not to mention, they could also hide in Nina's shadow, meaning she could sneakily keep him around without the need for a Pokeball and without her parents knowing about it.

In the original Safari Zone trip, Nina and the three boys would have gone on a little test of courage out in the forest as night, which was where Nina would have had an encounter with Gastly.

The original Gastly wasn't a shiny of course, but they did have a similarly timid personality which made them not as troublesome to handle as your typically mischievous and/or malicious Ghost Type.

And of course, in this timeline, Nina wouldn't have joined the Cerulean Gym. Though that option was open for consideration since she did do well in the Little League after all.

Honestly, I wouldn't know since I pivoted before I even got that far.

One thing is for sure was that Nina would have caught a Golbat at some point. Though that Golbat would have been more aggresive and combative compared to the quirky little prankster in the form of Brucey that we have now.

Why a Golbat? Because that's the first Pokemon that I thought of when it came to cave exploration. And also Golbats are common enough that they're just easy to acquire in this setting that's so hyper-fixated on practicalities.

• Fun fact # 2

So now that you know a bit more about the original idea I had. I'd like to draw your attention to the character of Purple Shadow/Hattori.

A girl with a Gastly and a Golbat as her starter meets a disgraced ninja.

So in lieu of being a mermaid, can you guess what my original intent for Nina was?

Nin-nin!

This is of course no longer the case. But I still wanted to involve Hattori in the story in some way. Though in hindsight, my execution was incredibly lacking.

• Fun fact # 3

As I mentioned before, I originally had envisioned a much more fulfilling school life for Nina.

We would have undergone a massive time skip after the intial Safari arc and straight to the start of Part Two.

So that lengthy prologue that I got so much complaint about? That was originally intended to be shorter. About 20-30 chapters at most.

This then resulted in the current Part Two suffering from a lack of content. Hence why it felt so winding and unfocused.

Honestly, if I had the choice, I would be tempted to pull back Part Two entirely and do a complete rewrite. But knowing how lazy I am, I'd likely not follow through with it.

The current Part One did undergo a lot of revisions though, about 2-3 rewrites if memory serves me right. But I was consumed with an irrational fervor back then, a fervor that I have since lost.

• Fun fact # 4

Did you know? Into the Unown wasn't the first Pokemon fanfic that I conceived.

The first Pokemon fanfic idea I ever came up with was an untitled one. Because I never released it and never really wrote it either.

***

The story revolved around a girl who got lost in a forest and accidentally crossed boundaries to find herself in the unfamiliar world of Pokemon, in a sort of Ghibli-esque spirited away style.

This was a girl who only had passing exposure to Pokemon in the form of her brother's obsession. So to her ignorant mind, Pokemon were like scary monsters that prompted her to run around in a panic.

Until she came across a little wooden hut in the dark and gloomy forest, one constructed right next to an ominous looking graveyard.

This was the hut of a retired Agatha, who had renounced herself from the world and hid away in a far off region away from civilization.

Coming home one day to find that a scared little girl had barged into her sanctuary, Agatha would, after some persuasion, agree to take on the girl as an indentured servant, exchanging food and accommodation for menial labour.

During the girl's time with Agatha, she would slowly come to terms with the world of Pokemon and make friends with the Ghost Pokemon surrounding the old woman's home. In particular, Terry, a young, mischievous, Haunter that Agatha took in at some point, and Grumpy the Gengar, the old trainer's original starter.

The girl would live her life in a hectic pace, with Agatha intentionally overworking her to distract the girl from homesickness and depression.

Ocassionally, Agatha bring her in to a nearby village comprised mostly of a community of genial old folks where the youngsters had migrated to the nearby city for work. Thus, the old people of the village would dot on her and pamper her in a way that the awkward Agatha could never.

As time passed, the girl slowly got used to her new life and even found happiness in her routine. That was, until Agatha abruptly collapsed one day.

Unsure of what to do, the girl used the little red device that was gathering dust on the shelf and called for help, which came in the form of paramedics that rushed over and air lifted the incapacitated Agatha to the nearest city for treatment.

Agatha would pass away peacefully in the hospital.

Left alone with no one to rely on in this foreign world, the girl wallowed in grief in the hospital lobby, until a man in a suit approached her, claiming to be the late Agatha's lawyer, here to discuss the woman's last will and testament with the girl.

The man explained to her Agatha's illustrious background, which the girl was previously ignorant of and that she was still unsure about since she didn't fully understand the hiearchy of the Pokemon League.

The man told her that Agatha had sensed her end approaching and made acommodations for the otherworldy girl that accompanied her in her final moments, reading to her a touching message that moved the girl to tears.

"Agatha's final wishes, should you choose to accept, was for you to bring her ashes back to her ancestral home in Kanto and scatter it to the wind."

In exchange, the girl could pick any Pokemon of her choosing among Agatha's retinue as a chaperon, except for her starter Gengar. Since Pokemon of the Elite tier were to dangerous for an untested trainer to handle.

And once she was done with the mission, the girl would be rewarded with the deed to Agatha's little hut and the surrpunding plot of land. And should she refuse, they would move her to the off route village and entrust her to one of the elders there.

And thus, in accordance with Agatha's wishes, the girl set off on her journey, with Terry the Haunter in tow, and Grumpy the Gengar stalking her in the background, to ensure the girl's safety. A seasoned Elite Pokemon like Grumpy could hardly be chained down by the Pokemon League after all.

This was a very unconventional story that follows the MC meeting various different characters thoughout the journey in the form of an anthology of sorts. One that explores the theme of loss and grief across all these different side characters. All the while, also serving as a medium for the girl to process the sadness she felt from the prospect of never being able to go back to her world and the loss of her only guardian.

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Ultimately, I didn't write this story on paper, despite already having an ending for it.

The reason being, depression was something that I've long struggled with throughout my entire life. And I recognized that, had I delved deep into this story, I would have been thrown into an endless spiral of negativity that I would struggle to recover from.

Hence why I shelved it. Though remnants of this story still remained in the form of Nina's Gastly.

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Anyways, that's it for my yapping. Thanks to anyone who made it this far.

Some minor announcement that I will also be making a seperate post about tomorrow.

Going forwards I will be making some changes to the Patreon structure;

• $10 tier will be getting 15 chapters in advance instead of sneak peaks and side stories and whatnot.

• $5 tier will remain unchanged from the original, still getting access to 10 advanced chapters. (Although I'm well aware that the number of advanced chapter releases had gone out of control recently.)

• Additionally, I will also be adding in a $2 tier that gives access to 5 advanced chapters.

I'll also set up annual payments that provide a discount, which is something I only learned I could do recently.

These changes are mainly to add more choice and also to make up for the fact that I haven't been very fair to my Coffee tier members for their outsized contribution.

I originally treated Patreon as only a tip jar of sorts with universal perks for all of your generosity. But since there's a good number of you now, I figured I should tidy up a bit and formalize some things.

Anyways, I'll be making a separate post about this as well which will also talk about future release schedules for Part Three.

Also, if you have any questions, feel free to comment down below and I'll do my best to answer.

Thank you all for reading and I hope to you again!