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sadness - something's missing

Tuesday, April 18, 2023 at 10:20 AM. this is going on the same split as the last song I just posted. I won't share the full lyrics but I'll share the part at the end so you can sing along to it. like I said in the last post I wasn't too in love with the harsh vocals I did yesterday and not sure if my voice just simply can't scream like that anymore or maybe it just wasn't a good day to record. I tried to make it work  but I may redo the vocals if in the future I feel like I can do them better. i'm probably going to start making instrumental songs from now on so I don't continue to be disappointed in my lack of vocal talent


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you fall asleep right next to me

i want to remember

just what it's like

to fall asleep

just like you

i'm right here with you

holding your hand

touching your face

you don't know how beautiful they are

the flowers that you're laying in

if i could i would find just one

why can't i remember

why can't i find the words

to just see you turn around

just for a single fragment in time

as you stand in the spring twilight

ive been here

waiting

like i always have been

Comments

why am i crying

Mancubus Void

Amazing. These are words I would have liked to have said.

Daniela Rodrigues

I see your truuue coloooors

Kane

"lack of vocal talent" what are you talking about, you have one of the most unique and compelling array of vocal styles in atmospheric music

Clast1

The piano notes on the mid are just magical

Sebas Morcillo

These songs are going on my band's split!!!! So hyped hopefully our side stacks up

Rami Ayeche

But we love your different vocals styles! They fit so well with the mood of your songs. It's your choice at the end of the day of course but I really do hope you continue to sing for us.

Andreas Engman

i would have made them louder, but specifically because i thought they weren't that good i felt uncomfortable hearing myself closer to the front

DamiΓ‘n Ojeda

you have great vocal skills, but you still need to make the vocals a little louder in these tracks. I understand that this is such a feature of these tracks, this indescribable detachment from music and the real world, but in places it is absolutely not audible that you are singing. It was also possible to make brain-tearing clean vocals at the end, you started to lead to a cool "breakdown" at the end, but the vocals, despite everything, are quiet again, but very beautiful. this gives me a shoegase and slowcore vocals vibe. I don't want to offend you, Damian, I always admire your songs and your talents. This is my opinion after the first listening, maybe something will change after the next ones. I hope that you will not give up in the future and will continue to delight us with music. You're amazing, and I love you with all my heart. May the lavender bless you πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

Karen Mitchell

It’s just perfect…

Andrew Gulin

You have plenty of vocal talent! I love the vocals you did on the last song and everything else you've released lately. You're great!

Lainey


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