Trimming the fat.
Added 2020-02-16 10:20:54 +0000 UTCLooking back, I think I may have gone into a little bit too much detail when it comes to certain recent chapters. Over the next 1-2 days, I'll be going back and working to remove bits of excessive backstory/background info that slows the story down a little, just FYI for those that might look back at previous chapters and notice they might be shorter.
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I'll let you all know when I re-release the chapters here :) been editing the past few days offline
Wiz
2020-02-21 00:45:13 +0000 UTCYeah, well I'm gonna have to re-read the book in order to remember half the stuff you wrote anyways plus the editorial snark
Timothy E O'Neal
2020-02-21 00:42:42 +0000 UTCSo which of the chapters should we read again?
Idan tal
2020-02-19 20:54:55 +0000 UTCThe info was very good, just at times it felt like you repeated it two or three times in different ways. Specifically thinking of when you were talking about people getting "drunk". It gets pretty wordy... :)
Horatio Hornet
2020-02-16 22:22:45 +0000 UTCSounds good itβs your world!
2020-02-16 16:43:28 +0000 UTCGood idea, just not the last one pls, add more to the ending ;)
Idan tal
2020-02-16 10:33:37 +0000 UTC
