R-a - Volume 3 - Chapter 3
Added 2019-10-08 00:08:16 +0000 UTCR-a - Chapter 161(In editing -v2)
Warm sunshine wafted in through a shuttered window, the early gleams of dawn softly breaking the horizon. This light shimmered in the air as if in delight, dancing right next to Micheal.
In out in out Micheal muttered a mantra repeatedly, the air around him visibly glowing with Earth Tier Ki.
He was currently sitting on a plain wooden bed and mattress, tucked up against the side of a small bedroom. A small desk and a drawer were the only other pieces of furniture in the room.
Unlike the First Layer, which was full of modern amenities, the Second Layer was much more restricted. If you wanted to find anything like a toilet, a car, an air conditioner unit, or more, you had to buy it yourself from the Shop.
And, given how gravity was around 30 to 35% heavier, there was no guarantee that the bought objects would last as long or work as efficiently, even if purchased from the Shop.
Within Micheals body, green energy was constantly cascading through his veins. Every time the energy fully circled his body, from his heart to his feet, his body would grow a tiny bit stronger. His bones grew sturdier, his muscles more tensile and durable, and his vision and senses more adept.
Each cycle brought out only a small amount of change. However, when repeated over and over and over, for days on end, it would gradually strengthen Micheals body significantly.
Ahh Micheal let out a breath of air, his body shivering as he exhaled a small cloud of green energy. He opened his eyes after that, smiling slightly.
Status.
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- Status -
Name: Micheal Care
Points: 75,391
Race: Human
Age: 18
Physique: 1 Star
Soul Quality: 3 Star
Strength - 80
Endurance - 56
Recovery - 55
Soul - 36
Abilities - (5/7)
Life Orb Master
Ki Cultivator (Earth Tier - Early)
Grandmaster Sword Mastery (1/5)
Impact Release
Ceaseless Mind
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Apart from the large amount of Points he'd gained from defeating Head Cameron, there was no discernible change from the last time he'd checked his Status. Still, he could still feel the small increase in his cultivation. He could also get a general idea of how fast he was growing.
At this rate, if he cultivated each day at the maximum he could achieve, he would reach the Middle Stage of Earth Tier in around three weeks.
By any normal metric, that was insanely quick. It took him more than two and a half months to go from the Early Stage to the Middle Stage in his first life. The huge difference was mostly because of his lack of experience when it came to handling Ki. This time around, every cycle Micheal made was perfect, stretching out his progress to the absolute maximum every day.
His 1 Star Physique was also helping, slightly, but it wasnt having as big of an impact. He felt it more in how he could get more stats from each Stage.
Its not bad. But its not fast enough. I need to up my Physique again. His eternal irritation haunted him either way. He was still too slow.
His current physical stats placed him as an average Third Rate Warrior here on the Second Layer.
The ranking system for warriors on the Second Layer wasnt that different from how humans were rated on the First.
Micheal mentally went over it as he finished his cultivation, compiling his plans.
Normal people, and weaker humans, or people of other races, didnt get any rating at all.
Third Rate Warriors were the starting line for people that actually held some amount of power. Around 90% of the warriors on the Second Layer were Third Rate Warriors. With a Strength stat of 80, Micheal was strong enough to be rated a Third Rate Warrior.
Second Rate Warriors were the starting line for the elite. Showing power that surpassed the vast majority of other beings, Second Rate Warriors could be found among the leaders of guards in large cities, dangerous assassins of deadly repute, experts that had trained for many years, and were able to become Outer Elders in any of the Six Great Sects.
First Rate Warriors were the elite among the elite. Possessing power that could directly change the scale of a battle on their own, First Rate Warriors were deadly forces of war. They were typically only found as Inner Elders in any of the Six Great Sects, or Sect Masters in smaller scale Sects.
Micheals current Soul stat was already at the level of an average First Rate Warrior.
And after First Rate Warriors came the final normal tier: Supreme Warriors.
Supreme Warriors were experts that had reached the apex normally achievable on the Second Layer. They were the Sect Masters of the Six Great Sects, and a few rogue experts that existed in hidden organizations or wandered the Second Layer seeking enlightenment. Most people viewed them as practically unstoppable, geniuses that went unrivaled except by each other.
A First Rate Warrior could be stopped if you threw enough Second Rate Warriors at them. A Supreme Warrior, however only another Supreme Warrior could face them.
As of right now, none of the other races openly had a Supreme Warrior expert. Humanitys Four Barons were all extremely strong First Rate Warriors but they hadnt quite reached the level of a Supreme Warrior.
Well, the Farians have a Supreme Warrior. But no one knows that yet. Micheal tossed the thought to the side as he continued to ponder.
Third Rate, Second Rate, First Rate, and Supreme. These were the four normally achievable tiers of the Second Layer.
Normally, that is to say. Micheal wrinkled his nose slightly.
There were two other tiers apart from these four. One that was a step above, and one that was a step to the side.
A Master, a tier or title given to those warriors that had reached the Master Tier of Sword Mastery, or any other Weapon Mastery Ability. The Second Layer was a world obsessed with martial arts, and while experts that reached the Master Tier were extremely few and far in-between, they still existed, especially among the inhabitants of this world, the Byrens.
Some Masters were able to use Master Tier Sword Energy to become deadly Supreme Warriors, while others just knew the rudimentary basics and were only very strong First Rate Warriors.
And other than the Masters
There were the Six Lords.
It was a unique name for a tier of experts, namely because the tier itself was unique.
There were Six Great Sects on the Second Layer. They controlled most of the world and, currently, most were at war with one another.
And in those Six Great Sects, there were six Lords of inordinate power. They were so monstrously powerful they could not be approached logically for a single reason.
On the Second Layer, it was physically impossible to cultivate to the Lord Tier of Ki Cultivation. It didnt matter if you were a genius, it didnt matter what resources you used, it didnt matter how special your powers were.
None of the races here were capable of achieving this feat. Even Director Prime well, Micheal wasnt quite sure about anything when it came to that man. But Micheal was well aware that it would be completely impossible for Micheal, himself, to achieve Lord Tier here.
However, there was a single, or rather, six, exceptions to that rule.
The Six Lords that backed each of Six Great Sects not only were all six of them in the Lord Tier of Ki Cultivation, they were also all at the absolute Peak Stage of the Lord Tier of Ki Cultivation.
How that was possible had much to do with the history of this world.
Still, they arent my target for now. Micheal rubbed his eyes as sighed.
He looked around his room for a few seconds before he got up and began to prepare for the day. He took off his old clothes and changed into a new set of the same green robe, wrinkling his nose slightly as he looked at them. He didnt smell horrible, but he definitely wanted to take a bath or shower.
Ill do it later. After spawning in and munching down a quick breakfast from the Shop, Micheal left his room and walked down a long, wooden hallway to a small staircase. He followed it downstairs into a small, Inn lobby.
It had a quaint look to it, with a small couch and some pillows set opposite of a wooden counter. A young man stood behind that counter and gave Micheal a friendly nod as he walked past.
When it came to the Camps, all of the new arrivals were allowed free use of any of the Inns for the first two weeks they were here. This was one of the few things humanity had gotten partially right, giving the new people an easier chance to get a foothold.
A large part of this had to do with how the Second Layer worked. The first two weeks that any new Chosen spent here were considered special.
Unlike the First Layer, if a human killed another human that had only been here for two weeks or less, the killer wouldnt get any Points from killing that person. It was only after the first two weeks had passed that a human was considered fully arrived.
There were many theories on why this kind of grace period existed. Some researchers thought it had to do with how the Shop, and our Souls, operated. They believed it took time for our Souls to fully unite with the essence of the Second Layer, making it impossible to absorb any Points from someone without a fully integrated Soul.
This theory was strengthened by the fact that the reverse was not true. A person that was within their first two weeks here could still kill other humans and obtain Points from them. The energy transfer would work one way, but it wouldnt work the other way.
Every Layer worked like this, though each adjustment period was different.
After the two weeks were over, however that grace period would end and you had to join one of the Syndicates or one of the smaller organizations that were allied to the 4 Barons, or leave the territory of the Human Alliance.
Micheal looked up and down the street as he casually left his Inn, scanning his surroundings. After he didnt find anything out of the ordinary, he began to head up the street to the north. His Inn, the Jeston Inn, was located in the northern sector of the Camp.
"The Hanmind Fire Spears are recruiting Ice Ability users to hunt Giant Blaze Lizards!"
"...Casandra I have had enough lip from you, you can consider yourself removed from the Blue Lily Society-"
"You're selling Winter Wolf Fangs? Do you take Alliance Points?"
The hubbub of life in the Camp serenaded Micheal, various men and women speaking, bartering, and arguing, reminding him a bit of the Open Markets on the First.
As he moved, he constantly paid attention to his movements and his surroundings, trying to fully adjust to all of the changes hed been through.
After his Soul Quality rose to 3 Stars and his Soul stat rose to 36, Micheals perception of the world had changed substantially. His 3 Star Soul Quality mostly affected his talent or growth rate, while also boosting the past results of his Ki training, and helping contribute to why his Soul stat rose as much as it did.
Because of this, his ability to detect the presence of other beings through his Soul had greatly increased. If he focused, he would be able to innately sense the presence of anyone within roughly 23 meters of him, even if they werent focused on him. Part of this had to do with his vast experience at detecting enemies around him, but part of it had to do with his upgraded Soul.
Of course, if someone had a much stronger Soul or special Abilities, they would still be able to hide. But for the majority of foes he might encounter, Micheal was practically immune to a close-range ambush as long as he was careful.
He would also be able to more easily flood an enemy with his own killing intent, something he could use as a type of mental weapon.
Apart from that, his perception of time had undergone a period of rapid growth. He could now perceive things at a rate roughly ~26-27% faster than a regular human. His consciousness automatically adjusted for people speaking and most things, but the jarringly fast change was still overtly noticeable.
It made it easier to dodge attacks, easier to detect enemies, gave him more time to think and focus, and let him react faster. The results of raising his Soul stat so intensely were slowly beginning to show their value.
While it was something he had experienced a couple of times before, the feeling of such an abrupt change still took time to fully adapt to.
Micheal quickly crossed through the Camp. He passed by more groups of men and women talking in the streets, comparing weapons, and moving back and forth with purpose. The town was filled with life as people went about their business.
There were no beggars lining the streets nor were there cripples crying for help. The Camp was a picture of safety, of wealth, of law and order. A veritable utopia.
Well, the Camps next to the Spawning Ground are still the same. Micheal grimaced as he saw this. No matter how much the timeline of the First morphed, it seemed many things on the Second remained unchanged including some of the darkness that lay beneath the surface.
Soon, Micheal reached the northern gate to Camp Maybell. The rather steely presence he gave off prevented anyone in the town from approaching him, making it easy to avoid any interaction. He passed through the gate after a brief discussion with the guards, with a reminder, of course, that he needed to make a choice in 13 days.
Micheal then found himself in a large, open field of grass. Off to his right, the Spawning Grounds spread out, while a few Camps could be seen in the distance to the North.
Micheal began to run northward and slightly to the left, loping along at a rapid speed as he put some distance between himself and the Camp. He kept a careful lookout as he ran, though he didnt feel or see anyone following him.
There were people traveling between Camps, and he could also make out several large groups of people moving in various directions. The land near the Spawning Grounds was one of the more crowded areas.
Ill need to run for about an hour till I can use my shoes. He thought as he glanced down at his Cloud Stepping Shoes. Apart from that, the only other Artifacts he wore were his Mid-Tier Spatial Ring, his Aura Nullification Necklace, and the basic sword he'd strapped to his waist.
He had no intention of running everywhere, nor did he have any intention of wasting any of his Points on a vehicle. Once he got far enough out of sight, he would break out his Life Orbs and take to the sky with his Cloud Stepping Shoes or just soar along near the ground.
He needed the practice to help adapt his Soul to the changes it had undergone, and could use the time to think things over. There were so many things he wanted to do, he would need to narrow down the most optimal choices.
Alright. The Big Plan: Part 1. Micheal took a deep breath as he went over the first couple of plans hed propped up, based on all the information he had from the future, as well as his own experience and needs of the present.
The main two things I need to do His eyes gleamed.
One of the most important things he needed to do was rather obvious.
I need to activate my Champions Gift as soon as possible. If he could steal the Deity Title System, the chances he had at stopping all of the Vile Kings plots would explode exponentially. Accomplishing this on the Second Layer would be difficult, but not impossible.
The second thing he thought of was, to him, also obvious.
I need to stop Myla Hannis from getting assassinated in 21 days. He would also need to get her to agree to help him. Part of the reason hed been so frantic to leave the First Layer had to do with this incident here.
Micheal felt rather lucky as he considered this. He could do both of these things in close to the same area. It would save him quite a bit of time, though there was bound to be a huge amount of danger. If things went wrong, the consequences would be devastating.
In addition to that... there was also one rather significant complication Micheal would need to address.
Myla Hannis absolutely must not die. She was the key to stopping the Vile Kings Great Disaster, a sequence of events that would devastate the Second Layer and cause hundreds of millions of humans to die.
However
Myla Hannis wasnt a human.
She also wasnt a Byren, the one race Humanity currently had a peace treaty with.
Instead, she was a Farian.
A race Humanity was forced into fighting a war with.
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Comments
"And, given how gravity was 30% higher." This should be 35% i believe.
2020-01-02 07:55:34 +0000 UTCits ok usage: Breakout | Definition of Breakout by Merriam-Webster Definition of break out (Entry 3 of 3) intransitive verb. 1 : to develop or emerge with suddenness
2019-10-22 02:12:34 +0000 UTC"he would break out his Life Orbs and take to the sky" - I think 'break' should be changed to 'bring'
Magnus Steffen Nørregaard
2019-10-17 22:56:09 +0000 UTCSomething I just thought of....does the vile king get points from the actions of the people he has infected?
Klistofklades
2019-10-09 02:52:29 +0000 UTCA Rankers would typically be very strong Third Rate to weak/mid level Second Rate. Supreme A Rankers would be strong Second Rate.
Wiz
2019-10-08 23:50:01 +0000 UTCSo.. A ranks are 3rd warriors, s rank can be 1-2? And even with 3 Star physique they can’t get to a lord stage? The s rank at the first managed to get to the sky stage in 3 years with “normal” physique so Michael can at least get to that stage right? And now that Prim is on the second layer as well humans have also a superior warrior 🤩
Idan tal
2019-10-08 20:13:16 +0000 UTChey wiz, thank for the chapter. love your work, usually i do not read this genre because when the character becomes over powered the story gets boring. but you've created such an interesting world that i have already binged books 1,2 a couple of times. plus your MC uses his intelligence to win fights more often then not.
maaz ahmed
2019-10-08 06:31:49 +0000 UTCThanks for point out the typos at the top. The Life Orb Ability *has* now grown, we just haven't gotten to the chapter where we see Micheal realize that yet. This is a minor spoiler, but I'll share it since you wrote out such an impassioned comment about it. Micheal's obsession with secrecy largely centers around his distrust for other people, partly because of his past experiences and partly because of the existence of the Vile King. He's seen humanity fail, been betrayed countless times, and doesn't trust other people to not ruin or mess up when push comes to shove. You'll note, however... Micheal does, in the end, ask the Seer for help at one point. And, if you read Chapter 159 again, you'll see that Micheal sent the Seer and Doctor Isaiah both messages before he left the First Layer... The Seeds are energy-based, yes, but the way they integrate with your body and Soul is not like normal energy. They are seen as 'part' of you, and when you teleport, they will come with you. I can tell ya right now that teleporting won't get rid of them. The poison Cameron was struck with was an invading energy, something that wasn't harmonized and melded with his Soul. Yes, your last paragraph is a decent examination of Micheal's personality as of the current moment. The main reason he would rather kill then not is because of the world they live in. Sure, he could spare some people. But there is nothing he can hold to that will prove they won't go back to murder/rape/whatever it was they were doing. He can't just throw them in jail because jail doesn't exist (in the First Layer, anyway). He might not see alternatives at times, but oftentimes, there *aren't* alternatives. Sparing a villain now can mean the ruination of 3 innocent lives later.
Wiz
2019-10-08 03:38:26 +0000 UTCA young man stood behind that counter and gave Micheal as Micheal walked past him. Gave Michael what? --- A person that was within their first two weeks here could still kill other humans and get absorb Points from them. Drop either get or absorb --- OK, bump on the life orb question. If not, you seriously need to provide a justification for the lack of growth. At current, we have seen absolutely no growth in the ability other than a minor increase in ability to control the movements of the life orbs. This is something that isn't even part of the main description of the ability and it feels like you are preventing the ability from growing due to balance concerns. If that is the case, you're in a dilemma. You specifically made the ability capable of growth but there has only been extremely minor improvements, despite Micheal's Soul stat increasing by 260% since inception. This is an issue since it has been two books and everything except his sword mastery that can grow has. The sword mastery not growing has already been justified through the inability to use grand master sword energy and the extreme amount of time and dedication that is required to raise the ability. As for a possible solution, the ability could have been capped during his stay in the First Layer. In the second, it could be see an increase in the cap. This could be repeated each layer but should eventually see a permanent system based upon the Soul stat. I know the ability is powerful, but you have put plenty of limitations on it. To the point that anyone with knowledge of how the orbs work is capable of permanently killing him if his opponent is capable of killing him once in open combat. Prime and Cameron both should have been able to wipe the floor with Micheal even with the orbs. Another possibility is that he is limited to one orb per ten points in the Soul stat with the first three being given at purchase instead of having to wait for 20 and 30 Soul points respectively. While a decent solution, it will be more difficult to explain without appearing to be changing the ability. Please note, I am not trying to be antagonistic. --- I have been pondering this for a while. With the above comment, I finally have a catalyst for another post. This is feedback to help you with how your character is being viewed by independent readers. The actual feedback isn't meant to change anything, just give you some additional data for your thoughts. Micheal's personality and actions. To me, Micheal is very arrogant, to the point of hubris. His goal is laudable but his insistence on secrecy has impeded his goals. I am not saying that he should just out himself, but he could have handled the events of the First Layer in a much better manner if he had just asked for some help from a couple key individuals. The seer being one of those. Especially since he revealed himself to her. Another missed opportunity was not having Shin try to teleport either the admiral or Cameron without the seeds. Since the seeds are energy based, he may have been able to remove them based upon the removal of the poison from Cameron. One of the things that you have nailed with Micheal's personality is his lack of regard for life in general. He has no compunction against killing enemies but he seems to prefer that solution when others would do. It is a very dark and twisted highway that he is traveling and I can see how he will have the possibility of turning down the wrong path. This is more likely if he continues to see himself as the only one trying to save humanity. It is easy to convince oneself to commit despicable acts if you don't see an alternative or have someone else giving a different point of view. Kind of like the old cliché – power corrupts but absolute power corrupts absolutely. Enough for now. Hope that helps in even the tiniest manner.
2019-10-08 03:19:11 +0000 UTCThanks, fixed. It's a friendly nod. Nice catch :)
Wiz
2019-10-08 01:53:25 +0000 UTCA young man stood behind that counter and gave Micheal as Micheal walked past him. Not really sure what you want the young man to give Michael. I assume it’s a passing glance or something like that...but might want to clarify.
Klistofklades
2019-10-08 01:42:57 +0000 UTCIt should be fully edited and ready to go (from what I can tell) in 10 days :)
Wiz
2019-10-08 00:28:57 +0000 UTCNp Wizzy, make sure to announce the second volume release so I can buy it
Zachary Laydon
2019-10-08 00:28:07 +0000 UTCHe did, and I even wrote it down! I just didn't copy the right table. Fixed! Thanks :)
Wiz
2019-10-08 00:25:04 +0000 UTCDid Michael never get points for defeating Cameron?
Zachary Laydon
2019-10-08 00:18:34 +0000 UTCSPEED IS KEY! :O
Wiz
2019-10-08 00:12:03 +0000 UTCUhhh first
Zachary Laydon
2019-10-08 00:08:37 +0000 UTC