A family picture-sketch

Thank you for your feedback. Some other people seem to say the orgy was not really that sexual. I did not re-read the scene, so I will trust you on that sexual version.

Thanks for your feedbacks. I updated the sketch with better hair, arm,etc.

Cool :) I will re-work on the blood when I color it.

Yes, good reaction. I don't expect that draw to be fappable. It's just there.

I find it very transgressive and I like it. The fact that it suggest incest is not the point: it's more a condensate glimpse of the future of Alia Atreides who is in fact a true abomination. Herbert himself depict the Tau Orgy as a real abandon in drug, sex, and spice transe. In Dune vol II, it's quite implicit that Paul Atreides (15y old at this time) makes out with Chani during the event, and perhaps more. The picture has a real sense of the feeling of the Orgy. I like it even more than the previous Tau orgy pic, which is a cool sex orgy drawing, but doesn't catch the essence of the Tau Orgy. Or maybe I just love Atreides incest porn lol :D

Lord Pouyon

Sorry, that's messed up.

Storyline

bro, it's really disturbing, fais attention a pas tomber dans le borderline svp, ce serait dommage, t'as fais des super choses jusqu'ici, courage!

minisuhi

Agreed

Anonsecret

Yeah, sorry nothing I really want to see in game.

lol idk, if it's apart of the story then it's fine but I squirm when I see blood in erotic scenes.

Very nice! I love this divine look on Jessicas Face.

Little bit weird, little bit erotic. But Lord knows that there is stranger art that's found stimulating on the internet out there.

Marcus Aurelius

Hot, but maybe reduce the blood. Otherwise its fantastic

Hahah that placenta pillow is cute. I'm not much disgusted or anything. If the plot demands it, I'm ok with it. And if you give birth in those circumstances this is the cleanest I can imagine. Also that blood is more like a placeholder; the finished version doesn't need to have such bright blood. For me, I'm more concerned of first, how the loosen hair looks like. Guess I'm being picky here because I feel this is more from your artstyle, but I would make thinner flocks of hair. And last, Jessica's torso. It has Paul's left arm below. That would bend her torso a bit. Right now it feels like her back is laying on flat ground. You created a tricky composition here with the controversy of showing a birth. I'm eager to see the finished picture. Also that boob on face is 11/10 :3

Rafanás

Very unusual and interesting idea ! Maybe reduce blood (it's seldom exciting), and I'm not sure about the placenta either, thus the "pillow" it visually makes is indeed very cute... ;)

Baluchon

No, it's ugly

this does peak my natural interest then erotic interest in terms of the lore so im looking forward what u can do with this

Yes... most of the time we just see his ass or penis so he is hard to recognize :D

Interesting drawing, consult, the one on the right of Jessica is Paul?

I'm glad the first reaction is not disgust or something :)

True! I corrected it.

Jessica's left hand looks a little weird, like it belongs to Lady Deathstrike or a L4D Witch?!?

LSWSjr

Yeah, very odd and interesting in a good way. Can't wait to play whole game again remastered.

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