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Dialogue + Scene Flow Feedback

Just a quick touch-stone here, Arfus and I are curious what all you lovely patrons have thought of the story so far! We know this slice of the story doesn't get to the meat and potatoes of the game yet, but it *is* representative of the way Arfus and I write dialogue and structure scene flow.

Is it good? Is it bad? Is your opinion too complex to fit in such a tiny box? Comment below and let us know!

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