[Salvos] 689. Mercy Or Freedom (Removed for KU)
Added 2024-05-17 15:36:10 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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Salvos doesn't have a problem with Taburas. She likely sees her as a cute, pouty, child-like demon. The problem only exists the other way around. So only Taburas has something to work through. ...just like everyone getting to know Salvos. Including the current Haec.
Dragonmaster_42
2024-05-17 19:31:14 +0000 UTCShe's not to far off from realizing that there's noone like her, noone that really understands her fully. As a demon of pride that might not even make her feel lonely, at least long-term. It's sad that not evem Haec can skip the doubts...
Dragonmaster_42
2024-05-17 19:26:48 +0000 UTCI totally forgot about that just like all the characters apparently! At some point this has to come up again! That also ties in wonderfully with my theory that Haec tries to wash off his guilt by becoming a hero to feel worthy of Salvos' companionship again.
Dragonmaster_42
2024-05-17 19:20:20 +0000 UTCThanks for the hard work! I want more, so I'm a bit curious what the difference is between the recent (longer) Edith/Mavos chapters and the current (shorter) Netherworld chapters? Is the latter harder to write? Do you feel like it's harder to get right? Or does it feel like more of a drag as you have a long term outlook you want to extend and there is just a lot of footwork to be done until then? From my own attempts of writing I know all of those, so I'm curious how it is for a much more experienced writer such as yourself, MelasD! Thanks in advance!
Dragonmaster_42
2024-05-17 19:14:23 +0000 UTCHaec: "We should not forgive those who did terrible things obeying Regnorex" also Haec: personally trained the Dukes and Duchesses of the Netherworld that were sent to the Mortal Realm to siege Alyras. Is known as Haec the Tormentor. :)
Danijel Turina
2024-05-17 17:49:04 +0000 UTCI guess "And Taburas’s eyes grew wide" means "What a wonderful opportunity to praise our saviour and benefactor who rescued us from the jaws of death and gave us the safest shelter possible, showed us things we couldn't even dream of, fought our enemies for us, and is now liberating us from slavery and is about to fight the Demon King for us! Also, she's so wonderful and never treated us like inferiors or made us feel like we were a burden, threatened us or anything, and always talked to us like equals." Yeah. :)
Danijel Turina
2024-05-17 17:40:11 +0000 UTC"I didn’t know why nobody trusted me. Not even Haec or Aemula." - sweetheart, you're not with Daniel and Edithe anymore, and you went through so many transformations and leaps of understanding, you don't understand that Haec and others didn't go through them with you.
Danijel Turina
2024-05-17 17:06:03 +0000 UTC“Yes. And?” - no remorse there, I guess. also: "What do you think of Salvos?” - yeah, ask Taburas what she thinks of Salvos, and not the other way around, because that's where your priorities are, I guess.
Danijel Turina
2024-05-17 17:00:25 +0000 UTCWonder what Taburas will say. Well, I'm sure it'll be good because we all know Salvos is the most awesome demon out there.
Azrie
2024-05-17 16:28:04 +0000 UTCTftc And first… I think
Plateworm
2024-05-17 15:39:54 +0000 UTC
