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[Salvos] 688. Trust Is Hard (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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Sunshine

Aemula is a cutie, and I hope she survives.

Danijel Turina

I am also interested in evolutions of other demons around Salvos.

Użytkownik Przeciętny

Story-wise definitely! If Aemula and the Deathsquad Hunters had discussed their traumatic experiences in slavery and with Hartia a bit more to really build up their fears before the cathartic moment, it could also have been plot-wise, I think.

Dragonmaster_42

Salvos observes ;) It's also a chance for Hartia to redeem himself and bond with the cause, so although Salvos should learn to remove the collars by observing Hartia, it might still be the strategically better decision to let Hartia do it.

Dragonmaster_42

For all the murderer, theft, rape, and such like that comes in video and literature, I can't help but feel that humanity in general has finally formed a true prejudice against slavery of all things. While I tend to agree, where slavery is concerned, I'm not a fan of the rest. That said, for me at least, this might be the first truly meaningful chapter of the series that I have read since she moved to the nether-thingy.

David Oldfield

Nice second half to last chapter! Beatiful buildup and pay-off for Aemula 👍

Dragonmaster_42

meh there will probably be no major battles, the other legions are lead by like two primevals each, salvos should be able to solo the leaders then they just unlock the collars of that legion(legions that haven't been tortured by hartia so will probably be more willing) and then those that want to join join and they move on to the next legion, probably none of them are actually gonna be helping in the fighting

Brandon14754

Nice chap 🌸💛I hope you’re doing well.

Sunshine

Honestly, as scared as they are of Hartia, if I were Salvos I'd be more scared of going to a major battle with those guys. Imagine facing an army that is supposed to back you up, including 3 people you spent quite a bit of time with, you ask "who is ready to trust me?", and you can hear the crickets, then only one person very reluctantly says "yes". Those are the people you have to trust with your life if you're wounded or otherwise incapacitated in battle. Fuck, I have chills just thinking about it. On the other hand, Hartia obviously didn't even think about killing them, he's just complaining because being locked in the corruption cube sucks, especially after he agreed to help and left Regnorex. But IMO he still needs to have that catharsis where he understands that following Regnorex turned him into a horrible beast of a person, and that he was ready to just kill everybody for a tactical advantage hours ago.

Danijel Turina

Honestly, if he just taught Salvos how to do it herself it would be much easier. It would be funny if you had to feel the necklace with spatial senses and say: “Hail to Samuel the Devil King: He who shall bring peace to the Netherworld.” :)

Danijel Turina

Great read for Mother's Day. Thank you!💐❤️

Skylar


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