VDSM Pg 2
Added 2018-04-13 07:34:37 +0000 UTCHope everyone enjoys!
Comments
I noticed a small spelling error (thir instead of their) in the narrator's dialogue, but this page is very fun otherwise! I like how you placed her tummy-grumbles in between her dialogue, like it's her prey's last communications with the outside world.
Louie-Jr
2018-04-13 11:20:14 +0000 UTC
