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Fan Fiction Story Time January 2025 Part 1

We're changing things up- this episode is just PART ONE for this month, Arin will read his story in a separate upload. We're reading My Immortal from chapter 42 to the end!

Let us know how you feel about this new format in the comments.

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Comments

Wait, so iPad was a typo for iPod? She predicted the iPod on accident??

Emily R. H. Wells

I still hold out hope that one day in the future the author comes forward. He or she has to come with receipts though.

Nate

I think the author at the time was definitely a teenager in high school, and they were probably a really good writer. This was a side project they wanted to do for fun and it ended up one of the funniest things ever written. I think the author is has got to be famous by now and we just don't know who they ore, or maybe they've also written a popular creepypasta or SCP since horror and comedy can cross over quite a bit.

Obi Wag-Wan

Okay. Here's my insane crackpot theory: JK Rowling was the author of My Immortal. She was secretly using My Immortal as a testing ground for her stupidest ideas, then finally settled on how she wanted the books to end.

old aj

The hilarious thing is that it's technically correct to use the word "ejaculated" in that context - to say something suddenly.

old aj

I remember a time when they had to blurr Ike's face. Lads come so far

Jooniper Lynn

What if Ike wrote My Immortal, and this entire show was a ploy to get the Grumps to read it?

C.J. Malm

That was me too when I was 13, so much terrible fanfiction. Some of it is still on a niche website somewhere lol.

Elizabeth Levan

I still can't believe that the author predicted not only the twist of the final book, but the existence of the iPad

Lesbionic babeyyy

I literly gosped at tht clif hangovr!111 xD

Alec Burton

Azerbaijan absolutely destroyed me. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Heartistry

it's so impressive how the writing never improved, it's like the author wrote the whole story in the span of like three months, spelling never got fixed, the plot continued to be all over the place, I'm legitimately impressed at the consistent style and quality

Motormusker

Watching Dan slowly descend into madness and trying to navigate all of the typos is not something I thought I needed, but turns out I needed desperately

ThetaBlaze

ok called the JKR thing early lol

Laura Kay

Satan fucks js

AJtheEnby

Thanks dads. I now know everything I need to know.

AJtheEnby

As much as the My Immortal story made my brain seize, it was actually really entertaining and I hope to Satan the creator makes more . . . Oooo or maybe a spin-off lmao 🤣

The Z Meister

Whoever the author of this is, was ahead of their time calling J.K. Rowling homophobic lol

Leigh

My immortal is a work of art. Whoever made it should be incredibly proud

Ben Schubert

I was literally thinking last month I should offer to make them a hardcover looking book for their FanFiction reads. Glad someone else beat me to it! The scrapbook idea is gold :)

Melissa Hallum

So many future predictions... So the true author of My Immortal was Agnes Nutter, Witch...

bigbigtruck

After doing only about 10 minutes of research, the controversy behind the author of My Immortal is mildly interesting.

Zy Jerasca

Apparently she wasn't either. Still looking.

Branwen Frost

I love the fact that Ebony both called Harry being a horcux and JK Rowling being a piece of shit! God, I'm gonna miss this classic. Please do a megacut of all the segments of this story someday!

Sarah Zac

I had to listen to it twice to understand when Dan said "the boys pulled out their glocks. I didn't 'cuz I'm a girl, lol". I was like, why can't girls use glocks?

Artufex

SHE CALLED HARRY BEING A HORCRUX.

Tom Hukriede

Now that My Immortal is complete, could you make like a full compilation of the entire story? That would be awesome!

Jojo

i love ike <3 i really appreciate him being a part of the grumps crew

Menchaca

I rewatched all of My Immortal just now for this episode, and I also have no fucking idea of what is going on.

Cassiberry

I'm both relieved and honestly a little deprezzed that My Immortal is over. It was so pants-shittingly terrible and unbelievably hilarious at the same time and it will most likely never be matched

Doktor Vem

What am I listening to. This sounds like a two year recaps what I can only assume to be Harry Potter. Transcribed by a gothic person who is learning English.

Krieg

The mental processing power in which it takes to understand the story explains why Arin is behind perpetually by 10 minutes

juj

they heard my prayers

Shane Hamilton

A true classic.

High I'm Ama

Why do I remember there being more chapters…

Chloe Jackalope

Oh Dan. What a gift you've given me on this day

Kyah Faria

I'm so sad My Immortal is done

Elizabeth No

I don't know how feasible it would be given the grumps editing workflow; but could the team look at uploading subtitles to these fanfiction readings? currently they are just auto-generated & often have errors

Sarah Vee

I’m so glad I exist in this timeline with My Immortal

Egg ^w^

What a piece of internet history 👏 love the new format and BEGGING for a complete compilation of the My Immortal reading

Hiddengem100

I think the author came out her name is Rose Christo. You can find articles about her on google

Eanna

This..... this was beautiful. I regret listening without headphones, but that's my own damn fault lmao

SerenitySolstice

oh my god, My Immortal is relentless. My coworkers are worried about me on account of I can barely breath

Nathan James Yuhas

i didnt live through the horrors of war only to lose fanfic story time

zeezee

i like this format!! fanfic twice a month hell yeah

Sienna

cuz funny mak brain go brrr

[insert]

I resent being called a prep just because of my name. 🙎🏻 I still listen to MCR, thank you.

Ynattirb

All I want for Christmas is one video of Dan reading the whole thing PLEASE

RisuPuffs

There's a website with the MCR font called fontmeme.com, go nuts

MC Dexpo

This has to have been one of the greatest shit post parody fan fics of all time

MC Dexpo

Update: I wrote this before finishing da esipode, and now I need a third thing: someone’s hardness in my thingy.

C.J. Malm

I need two things: 1) a film adaptation of this story. 2) a coffee mug that says “Konnichiwa Bitch” in the My Chemical Romance font

C.J. Malm

if you haven't, comment section, check out Wizard People, Dear Reader. I first read it like a decade ago but a guy on youtube reads out the first harry potter movie in chapters.

Adam

You know it's bad when the even bleep it out on Patreon 😆

XxRizsenxX 0

morsmodre makes the dork mork appear

Adam

I had this thought too throughout the series! I wrote a HP fanfic around the same age and now I want to write just for the sake of writing, it was really fun! The inner critic be harsh sometimes, I think I'll approach it with "just write, don't even think" Thank you My Immortal for re-fanning the flames! I absolutely encourage you to write more! Let if be as silly as you want!

Shanoodle

So sad to see my immortal go but damn, what a masterpiece

T-vis

Yeeeeeesssssss

Levi M.

Beautiful, what a true masterpiece I have witnessed on this day, I'm glad this was a full thing. A very glorious ending to a glorious novel

JAPANdafma

Oh my satan I need a compilation of this fanfic. But really thank you so much for reading this, this story and show has been worth every penny and then some.

Nate

Do you only listen to the My Immortal story? Why not listen to the rest, aswell? They're also pretty hilarious if you ask me

Doktor Vem

Love the new format! Sad to see My Immortal go though

Kado Harp

Sonic Battle or Star Fox 64

Morgan

Thanks fella

Michael Kane

After this, I'll be looking out for them reading "Forbiten" in the future! What an amazing fan fic

ChillWaldo

Thank you for narrating such an enthralling journey. Also, I prefer this format change for the sake of relistens.

Taylor Dierks

As someone who had to do a ton of navigating and skipping around in order to enjoy My Immortal in its full uninterrupted glory, I have to disagree. 😂

E Nix

Is anyone else honestly feeling inspired to write fiction after My Immortal? Like...honestly, it brought back memories of when I was 13 or 14 and would write complete garbage *constantly*...and remembering how fun that was before I developed an inner critic. It's silly, but I legitimately feel inspired to write after My Immortal, hahahaha.

E Nix

I think I'd actually prefer it if you read half as many chapters and read two or more different stories in the same episode. I feel like I'm missing the variety a little bit

Doktor Vem

The author was wrong about a lot of things, but she did predict that J.K Rowling did have a phobia towards certain people...just not the type she or any other fan expected 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀

Pancakes

What a journey!

Rachel McCulley Ritter

Are you guys good with the fire and everything

Kat Graves

Fan fic story time TWICE a month? 2025 is fucking awesome

Becca The Thrifty Teacher

I like the new format!

Amy

It would make the best fuckin tank top.

littlenoodledragon

"He was a jump ropist." I can totally read Dean's lumps.

Matthew Mendez

Oops and there goes his little red plastic thing 😂

littlenoodledragon

It will always make me supremely happy when the camera pans out and Dan is reading Arin and us a book as Arin stims with something in the other chair

littlenoodledragon

Why did they have to bleep out a word for Patreon? Now I want to know what it was. Also yeah it's funny how I retain more info of the story than Arin does lol

Naku-chan

“I thought that was actually Tom Bombadil” is somehow a 100% understandable statement here.

Sean

this was a beautiful journey

Kura Kurington IV

On one hand I’m happy to be able to watch all of these and binging them was great but on the other hand the out of context clips at the beginning of videos was hilarious too

IronsmashwebYT

I'm honestly gonna miss this story. I hope they post a compilation of all the chapters

Frunkl

I hate that I actually remember so much of the My Immortal plot when I typically have the memory capacity of a goldfish with amnesia. Like why in the fuck can't I use my memory for things that are actually useful instead of this completely useless borderline schizophrenic bullshit?

Doktor Vem

I liked the longer format, but willing to see how this plays out. Still one of my favorite grump related media.

jacob mccandless

You ever see her in Repo! The genetic opera? Pretty goth to me

Duck Todd

how could we possibly get another great fanfic like My Immortal? It'll be hard to replace a masterpiece

MimBread

Can we talk about how Ebony guessed the Horcrux twist?!?!

Quinn_Spooples

I'd rather get the full thing in one video, but maybe I'm just used to how it was

Robert Kindling

I'm gonna miss this series like a widow misses her husband who died at war

nixa

Man this fiction had everything. I laughed, I cried (from laughing), I dry heaved from cry laughing too much. 10/10

Sticky

How is any other fanfic ever gonna live up to My Immortal

Cael AJ

What the hell am i supposed to do with the rest of my life now

uberjNet

This was a JOURNEY lmao, I will really miss this one

Reagan Moore

That finale was like Endgame over a decade earlier with all the characters coming back to support the heroes

FuzzyOtterPaws

Sounded like r*pist to me

FuzzyOtterPaws

This show is educational! I've NEVER heard of Azerbaijan or however it was spelled until now!😂

FuzzyOtterPaws

That makes sense. Thank you!

Cory Bertram

It's was incredible, I like this format cause we get more per month! Yippee

Julia Soler

he's a ropeist (direct quote)

Julia Soler

WHAT?! I thought Hogwarts was somewhere in England as well!

FuzzyOtterPaws

iShadow... ffs that really got me.

nebuloider

My immortal was written by Tara Gilesbie, apparently

Cameron Floyd

😂

Narcissa Deville

If you have been into a hot topic lately, she would be about as gothic as anything they sell there anymore.

Mike

What word was censored??

Cory Bertram

The iPad came out in 2010. She did, in fact, predict the iPad.

Hailey McIntyre

I like this format and hope everybody is okay out there.

Merry Merrymead

"Konnichiwa, bitch!" is how I'm gonna greet my friends from now on

RadCoffeeMan

If you guys are looking for another long term fanfic to fill the My Immortal void, I would implore you to finish Sonic High School. For how insane the first few chapters are, it gets ten times more insane as it goes along and I NEED to see y'all react to it.

migratingturtle

Dang. Really gonna miss My Immortal. What a wild ride it's been lol

Annie Rose

Ah yes, famously gothic Paris Hilton.

Narcissa Deville

OMS its been a dreem cum tru whathing da gam gumps read my immortal. wat a jurney. Cant wait 4 wat dey read nekst!!!!!1!

Kailey Bosyk

Is it just the lighting or is Dan a little jaundice-y?

MewKiichigo

Now that My Immortal is over we need the rest of Sonic's Harem.

Bee

We crie not because it’s over but for the fards and shids along the journey

DukeOfWyoming

My immortal, forever in our hearts. I would encourage at some point to release the readings out to the Grumps channel, so everyone can experience it.

MikesterMF

My immortal, the final chapters...I'm not ready to say goodbye. But also thank god...but also I'll miss it....but also finally

Isaac Lewis

Yes. This pleases me.

Sarahmonster

Quality fanfics truly, hope y'all are safe!!

Sarah Susan

Hope y’all are safe in California ❤️

Dominick Knox

i love the two a month idea!!

Sara Sypolt

Hope you’re all doing okay 🧡

jenksii

I love getting two a month. Thank you Ike. You’re greatly appreciated

Brianna Bradley

Ah I love literature!

Leoné Jordan

Yaay!

Chris


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