Thanks for the replies to my previous post; your comments really help. Here’s a bit of an update on progress with those comments in mind.
Images – not the highest priority you say, but they do help me visualise the characters as I write and they take time to get right. Sara's bestie...Indi... plays a larger role as we move forward. I hit a snag with Indi Mk I….the character would not accept facial expression morphs properly. So here is Indi Mk II. She took a lot of time to set up (don’t ask!) but the result is much easier to work with. And easy on the eyes too I think. Extra image attached.
Storylines – have given this a lot of thought. There are now several storylines that wind through the game, with varying impacts. While I’m mainly writing weeks 1 and 2 at present, I'm trying to do it in a way that feeds seamlessly into the rest of the game (8 weeks in total). I now have a lot of planning in place, and 14,000 new words written.
I’ll keep at it. Looking forward to getting V 0.2 out to you!
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