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Suggestions for Iniverse

I'm currently working on the next chapter of Iniverse. In the meantime I'll be taking suggestions for future chapters.

Do you have any ideas for Ini and Daro's adventures?

Do you have your own OC that you would like to see make an appearance in the story? What role should they have?

Post your suggestions down below. :)

Comments

Goodie goodie. :)

SquidSisterFan12

Okay, I have everything I need. XD

TheCountsCastle

Think of Garnet's gauntlets from Steven Universe. Just standard hand to hand weapons, though more suited to her color scheme with a more techy/medieval design.

SquidSisterFan12

Can you describe these gauntlets? How do they work and what do they look like?

TheCountsCastle

Last one that comes to mind is that, after her golems are defeated, her main method of attack comes in the form of some gauntlets. Though with them being slow, Daro can easily get the upper hand to trap her.

SquidSisterFan12

Okay. Any other suggestions? :)

TheCountsCastle

She's no stranger to fighting herself, but let's use ancient golems for the main fighting force.

SquidSisterFan12

Hmmmm I can do that. However, Mechanicles' style is Greek. I can change Jamie's outfit to look more asian and feminine. How does Jamie fight? By herself or should we give her ancient robots/golems?

TheCountsCastle

Well the outfit that Mechanicles guy you mentioned look pretty interesting. Maybe something like that, but with more feminie highlights.

SquidSisterFan12

Any ideas on what she should wear? Or a reference? :)

TheCountsCastle

Yea.

SquidSisterFan12

Should we change her outfit too?

TheCountsCastle

You know, maybe that's a better approach option.

SquidSisterFan12

Okay. Ini should get tickled too somehow. Even if Ini's the hero, we can't have a chapter without her getting tickled. XD

TheCountsCastle

XD Oh shoot your right... i'll try and think of another idea

madgod72

Sounds good. Are you sure you want to make her a witch though? Your description makes her sound like a type of ancient inventor, similar to Mechanicles from Aladdin.

TheCountsCastle

That's where it gets a bit challenging. Ideally, we'd wanna stick with the theme and setting. At most, my mind goes to perhaps mystically amplified devices like stocks and other types of medieval torture things: https://www.google.com/search?sca_esv=89dbe79c79dccf28&rlz=1CAEAQE_enUS916&sxsrf=AHTn8zrohcjVpOn0OqQdvxrt9ncyT8xmOA:1739779116927&q=medieval+stocks&udm=2&fbs=ABzOT_CWdhQLP1FcmU5B0fn3xuWpA-dk4wpBWOGsoR7DG5zJBsxayPSIAqObp_AgjkUGqekYoUzDaOcDDjQfK4KpR2OIjj43mhrQBsMJgHY2LSx-SUj4wz68xSZ8iYTfqgrdxb3MJvHOMODdIcpti-xYMckL_DuO7Mno3LlWlsnznPPjfINcnPSb3s0mY1_Udv3xmGYGwDe_3zR2JNQT7OndwaUM5c3nJw&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjg44GinsqLAxXuLUQIHaB1NVQQtKgLegQIDhAB

SquidSisterFan12

This is far too similar to the other scenario we have planned where Daro gets tickled. Can you come up with something else? XD

TheCountsCastle

Sure! What should these contraptions look like? :)

TheCountsCastle

well i was thinking when Ini comes to the rescue, Ayaka would disregard her as a threat since she thought she was easy prey given how easily she was able to grab and restrain her in their last encounter and not take her seriously. I was thinking that Ini could use her healing magic to make Ayaka more sensitive then Ini would trap her in one of her bubble spells she used in the first chapter but with Ayaka's feet trapped outside the bubble. Then Ini and Daro would tickle torture Ayaka while they wait for the guards to come take Ayaka back to prison

madgod72

How about she ends up getting caught in her own contraptions? Like Daro successful baits her in for an attack, only to get caught and subjected to her own torture.

SquidSisterFan12

Sounds good. How should she be defeated? :)

TheCountsCastle

Sounds good. How should she be defeated? :)

TheCountsCastle

Yes, I was envisioning a scenario where after successfully escaping prison, a very embarrassed and vengeful Ayaka would be hunting down Daro. Using tales of Ini and Daro's exploits she would eventually find him in a tavern and seeing as he enjoys drinking She would use her illusion magic to disguise herself as the barkeep in order to spike his drink. Once He was out cold she would take him away to a secluded location which she plans to make her new base of operations and start building up her collection of tickle slaves again, and this time she's going to start with Daro trying to break him with intense tickle torture for the humiliating defeat he served her last time they fought

madgod72

Thinking of it being blue/cyan to be in line with her regular outfit, with some added black in place of white, reflecting her more villainous role. As for the plot, perhaps Jamie, having heard about Ini due to other villains failing to catch her, manages to capture her and subject her to various tickle methods to fully break her in preparation for being sold off to the past foes for a hefty sum.

SquidSisterFan12

Okay, what color should Jamie's outfit be? And what should the plot be? :)

TheCountsCastle

Nice. But what should her revenge look like? Do you have any ideas for the story? :)

TheCountsCastle

That's perfectly fine :D She's probably still got a lengthy stay in prison to serve after her last encounter with Ini and Daro XD

madgod72

We already have an upcoming story with Daro getting tickled. If Ayaka is to get revenge she'll need to wait a bit. XD

TheCountsCastle

I'd be lying if i said it hadn't been a thought that crossed my mind :)

madgod72

You want Ayaka to seek revenge against Daro? :)

TheCountsCastle

That's fair, If you ever want to use my OC Ayaka again you have my permission :D

madgod72

Like I said, I would need permission to use that character again. :)

TheCountsCastle

What if an enemy from one of their previous encounter was seeking revenge, kidnapped and Daro and Ini had to rescue him in like a fun roll reversal sorta way?

madgod72

Do you have any OCs to give for the role? :)

TheCountsCastle

Have Ini kidnapped by tickle slave traders.

Other guy

True well if you ever need to reuse any characters you have my permission to use Avery anytime you want.

Bigtime18

That's a good idea, but I would need to ask for permission about getting those characters again, and that can be bothersome. XD

TheCountsCastle

I know I said this before but how about Ini is captured by someone and gets tickled and Daro needs help and gets that help from people they met on their travels. He also finds them in their own unrelated tickle situation.

Bigtime18


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