Iniverse chapter 6 WIP
Added 2024-12-19 09:06:16 +0000 UTCThe next WIP chapter is out. XD
As always, give me your ideas for future chapters. What would you like to see? Also, do you have any of your own OCs that you want me to use in the story? :)
SPOILER FOR CHAPTER 6
Yes, Ini and Daro will officially become a couple. XD
Comments
Also, Daro having a bounty would attract a lot of Malcontents they'll have to take care of.
Harkaway
2024-12-21 14:24:45 +0000 UTCFair enough. XD
Harkaway
2024-12-20 20:09:55 +0000 UTCWorld building is great but I want this series to be more episodic with short chapters. Maybe we should merely mention the bounty and the capital city and leave it for the future. :)
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-20 19:54:19 +0000 UTCAlso, I think it would be cool to do some world building.
Harkaway
2024-12-20 18:06:21 +0000 UTCMy guess is they have to go there and face the music. Or face the goats. (Stock joke. lol)
Harkaway
2024-12-20 17:13:17 +0000 UTCThat's better. We can do that. By the way, what about the bounty and capital city subplot?
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-20 17:08:23 +0000 UTCOk, how about it starts off with Iskara being punished but she eventually gets into it? XD
Harkaway
2024-12-20 11:36:02 +0000 UTCSo, if I'm getting this right, Daro in this chapter will: get captured, get tickled, get rescued, get thawed out by Iskara, be allowed to tickle her out of her own free will. In other words, Daro will be completely useless. That needs to be changed. We can do a "girls rule" chapter without tearing down the guys. XD
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-20 08:03:47 +0000 UTCBecause she LOVES having her feet tickled as much as she loves dishing it out. Besides, they outsmarted her, they've earned it.
Harkaway
2024-12-19 22:35:41 +0000 UTCI thought the tickling was meant to be punishment for Iskara's actions. Why is she suddenly okay with it? :)
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-19 22:09:52 +0000 UTCAlso Iskara's into girls, buuuuuut for Ini's and the fact she loves being tickled, she frees Daro and lets him have fun. XD
Harkaway
2024-12-19 18:53:21 +0000 UTCOh she will be. She definitely will be. XD
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-19 18:42:49 +0000 UTCFair point. I would like to see Ini being the ler for once. XD
Harkaway
2024-12-19 17:36:24 +0000 UTCI get you, but it would be a crime not to have those big dragon feet receive double tickles from both Ini and Daro. XD
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-19 17:27:16 +0000 UTCTrue, buuuuuuut I kinda want this girls rule comic, XD Iskara wields duel Dao Blades, and her most ticklish spots her toe stems. ESPECIALLY the lateral one. XD
Harkaway
2024-12-19 16:33:13 +0000 UTCThat's a pretty nice plot, but it does require some modification. It's more in Ini's character to trap Iskara in a force field and wait until the ice thaws out. Also, Daro would absolutely want some payback. XD
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-19 16:18:52 +0000 UTCI saw the reference. So, what's the plot details? XD
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-19 11:09:20 +0000 UTCas i said last time, the story can be your own creation, just want more animal lickles, heh heh heh. some that're similar to that one Rapunzal and wolves art piece you did a long time ago: just having Ini being in the woods, chased and pinned by wildlife, like bears or wolves would be nice to see
Gavin Bickel
2024-12-19 10:58:38 +0000 UTCOkay.... do you have a reference pic of her? XD
TheCountsCastle
2024-12-19 09:36:45 +0000 UTCSo, Ini gets captured by a bounty hunter after Daro. It turns into Ini having to save Daro and we FINALLY see him get tickled. ^^ The bounty hunter can be my OC, Iskara.
Harkaway
2024-12-19 09:10:11 +0000 UTC
