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Warix Viviana
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Chapter 26: Ogre

Fun fact, I'm using this chapter to experiment a little. My writing tends towards the inner monologue but it's always better to show rather than tell a fight or a lot of actions. That can get iffy from an "I" perspective. Done right, tension shoots through the roof. Done wrong, it feels stiff as a board. I haven't quite nailed the method down. But we'll be getting there. 


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