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Hostage Handicap

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I feel these should include some zoom-ins. The feeling of losing to weak girls who are being haughty/smug is great on its own, but for a lot of these characters, you can even just zoom in on the existing pictures with text of the male character's conflict and giving in, in their head, the struggle out-loud... And of course, the females taunting you getting off on it and losing for such a reason wwww (when you can manage it hitting, just laughing with more pictures between the start and end of them hunting down the male character is more than enough to up your game though...). (Critique Warning) As it is, I currently have to bookmark these and arrow-key through them, then go back and hyperfocus on the parts that should at least have a zoomed-in version of the picture with some extra text, and only on a day I'm feeling it. It's just... too quick currently, you give a little text intro, but suddenly a female both appears and already has his little 'member' out, and such a different girl, one panel with a spurt, and it's the end of the story, always with a 'to be continued/what-will-happen?' text longer than some of the stories. The best ones you've made are ones where you basically do this, like with the "In Another World with My SMartphone ~Alternate~" where you play out the characters and interactions SO WELL. I even liked your earlier 'strong martial artist getting rekt by hired girls' and 'mc idol-boy is about to be entrapped', but you never revisited them... The way you split up the martial artist one was perfectly fine for an author to do, and you could revisit any of your current ones with that... You could even edit past posts or fill in a new post with a set of zoomed-in edit photos. (Easier if you have a simplified-portfolio of each series/show/your-names-for-them with links and stuff, notepad++ immediately makes url-links double-clickable) If I had to summarize what I think would be biggest for digestability and appeal as a long-time viewer (should you feel like using them): 1) More in-between frames that can just be the same photo zoomed in with 2) {male character/victim's reaction/struggle to the tempting female's features/bullying/situation, in-character best} and 3) female laughter/{smug lines}, 4) images-uploaded-numbered-in-names, could be a {one-word} + {pg number} (easy to download and actually consume) as well as 5) tiny pg number in bottom left corner (not as important, but similarly at least on website posts, as we don't even have to download). That would make them just about perfect, I feel. If you can fit it in your groove, incredible. If not, that's still understandable XD. Just easier for the author to do once each, especially with some macro/action-recorder-and-player-for-automating, versus the audience each having to deal with it. Sorry if I'm being too critical, it's hard for me to phrase things sometimes...

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