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The General - Right of Retribution

The General - Right of Retribution

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Hmm... the fact that Sam's ability to resurrect is powered by sex instead of gold makes it a lot more useful in all situations except when they've crossed over. In those situations need Felix to step in.. but that only works if someone has "ownership" of the deceased and can transfer... what I'm saying is... there are still situations where neither Sam or Felix can restore someone. Runner himself has the same limitation as Sam... (e.g. Nadine). The fact that Felix could bring someone back that Runner couldn't has always been intriguing to me... like the whole "can an all-powerful being make a rock they can't lift"? If Felix wasn't limited by ownership... things would be scary.

Michael Liebenow

Yep, that's a good image. One of my (very) few complaints of WDA's writing is that he usually gives short shrift to character descriptions.

Dennis Erwin

Also thank you William for the pic of bodil I had originally had no good image of her in my head and she is much hotter than my imagination created her.

nathrielos

I could probably write a 5 page paper about why daria is hitting the best girl marker with so much of the audience and also why she either needs to die or lose the thing that appeals to the all of us the most. Which is her ability to read the future with a general degree of accuracy. Personally I think it might me more satisfying if you touch put her in a scenario where one of her visions gets another member of the harem killed or gets maya hurt. Which causes neither Warren or herself to trust in visions ever again. Now granted I love the whole one women for the past and one women for the future but she is kinda omniscient in relation to important plot. I thought thought you where going to complete the set with a women who knows the now ie present. But in reality I dont know why everyone is freaking out about possible deaths because a sam is on this server and felix is coming relatively soon.

nathrielos

Bodil? More like ‘Boing’-dil, am I right fellas? *laugh track plays from nowhere, generic theme music begins*

Drew Risch

See? This is why Daria is dying. I've been telling everyone she's going to die in a drunken car crash with a man named Drew. Be prepared for book 2.

William D. Arand

2/10 no Daria.

Drew Risch

Nice cover.i was so happy, i taught the book was live :(

*BOING*

Dennis Palsson

Yeah! Loving it!

Gavin

Sex still sells!

J B

nah. Too much hype on Daria. She gonna die now.

William D. Arand

Great cover, bodil looks lovely and builds up anticipation for the book.

Darwin Baide

Bodil! Great choice.

James Domec

Thought it might be Daria on the cover. I really like that you went with Bodil instead.


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