A beach competition
Added 2024-10-17 12:00:14 +0000 UTC
Comments
I’ve been edging to this story. It’s an excellent edging companion. It is making me need longer breaks between though. The ending was brilliant.
Glenn wilson
2024-10-19 13:52:31 +0000 UTCRead this again this morning, I really like this one
Martin
2024-10-19 06:00:13 +0000 UTCThis was a great story. a lot of turns I didnt expect, beginning with the casual edging competition on the beach! The ruin seemed so painful, but was so sweet in the end. Thank you for the story Mommy 🥰
Nasty Nate
2024-10-17 20:14:22 +0000 UTCDo people actually have friend groups with this dynamic? Haha. I’ve so many opinions on this one. And they kept changing constantly as I got further and further in. This is a masterpiece and just makes me so eager to read more of your work ❤️
Martin
2024-10-17 18:48:56 +0000 UTCWhere do I even begin with this story. So many unexpected twists, with the setup, I never expected the story would go into such a wholesome direction. It had me constantly guessing what would happen next. I don't think I was right a single time, but every twist made it even better. The theme of jealousy dominates this story, first with Emily ensuring she doesn't share her boyfriend. Then with Veronica confronting her feelings about Jordan. Love how it made both of them a little possessive of what they want. Thank you so much for writing this sweet story, I love both type of stories but it's been some time since there's been a truly wholesome ending. I feel so warm and fuzzy, I can't stop smiling thinking about the ending. One last time, thank you so much Mommy for taking the time to give us this long story🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰. I know these take a while to write but this one turned out so great and I absolutely love it.
Hob
2024-10-17 13:35:03 +0000 UTCThank you Goddess 🥰 There is so much to catch up on now!!
Tibby
2024-10-17 12:21:04 +0000 UTCThank you Goddess ❤️
Martin
2024-10-17 12:12:34 +0000 UTCShould be a long and leaky read later, Thank you Mommy!
Nasty Nate
2024-10-17 12:06:06 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Mommy 🥰🥰🥰. This is a very long one, I'm so excited to read this one. I will let you know how much I liked it once I've read it.
Hob
2024-10-17 12:04:58 +0000 UTC
