Full Fat Moon - Chapter 3
Added 2022-10-22 21:00:04 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay, I had something come up which sidelined my writing so here it finally is, again both versions, this one has a picture of the main character.
The picture was generated by Novel AI so it is in a Manga style but still thought it was pretty good so I added it. I'd love feedback on what version you enjoy more obviously
I am writing Chapter 4 now and I'm going to say that this will be out tomorrow or Monday so keep an eye out :)
Comments
That is what I did here, my concern is that when people read they have a picture in their mind from the description and that might be way off what the picture looks like. Let me know if you think I've skimped on the description at all here because of the picture and I'd gladly take that on board, Id like to think I didnt do that here but it isn't up to me to decide 😅 I did have the picture before the description but that only decided hair colour and eye colour mainly Hope that helps you peek behind the curtain a bit
Growing Desires
2022-10-23 07:05:48 +0000 UTCWhat I like about your previous work was how effectively descriptive and I feel the pictures on their own are nice but may end up a crutch for lazy writting. My suggestion would to write as if you do not intend use the pictures and afterwards add them in.
killfrog
2022-10-23 06:56:51 +0000 UTC
