Saint-Denis
Added 2022-12-05 09:03:53 +0000 UTCSo, this is the full comic, I plan on cleaning it this week and showing you the process of it as I work on it.
But I also want your honest opinion, what do you think about it? Does it make sense? Do you like it? Would you change/improve anything?
I don't plan on making any major changes at this point but I want to hear your opinion as a reader, to keep it in mind for the next time I try something like this*. Because right now I mainly aim to finish it.
So far, only Brian's player has seen them, he loved it but I still want more opinions.
*Hoping I'll finish this one, I want to make more of this style (meaning NSFW) I already have a few more ideas to work on...
[EDIT 31-12-22]
I've added a new page and changed some dialogues from pages 6, 7 and 8. All feedback is very welcome! And I plan to clean these pages asap!
Comments
Perfect! Thank you so much! I started cleaning the pages let's see how long I take to finish the whole thing!
Lady Petticoat
2022-12-08 09:13:38 +0000 UTCYes! Looks fantastic!
Janis Broszat
2022-12-07 20:55:30 +0000 UTC
