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The Pink Lab: Call of the Faeries 3

So, for all you high-end Patrons, it's time to invite you into the process. Here is the outline for the next story. You'll be seeing regular updates as it's written. And you can comment and offer suggestions. No promises I will TAKE all suggestions, but if it's good/hot/fun, I will! Without further ado, the outline:

Five college kids are on their way to a rave in the middle of nowhere in the Midwest. They are driving west, going through some thick Pine Barrens business. There’s Ryan and Chastity, the jock and cheerleader types. There’s Andi, who is more there for her brother, Colin, who is physically handicapped, than she is for the show. She’s our heroine. There’s Bailey, who Colin is into. She’s the hippy-dippy one. The minivan they’ve rented breaks down. The phones don’t work. 


While they are deciding what to do, a girl named Summer comes upon them. She tells them she can get them help if someone will come with her, Bailey goes with her. The rest wait and watch as they disappear into the trees.


Bailey follows Summer into some nearby caves, a shortcut Summer says. There’s a flowery scent that accompanies their trip, stronger as they go deeper into the caves. She becomes intoxicated, and when Summer kisses her, she starts to forget wy she was there at all.


Ryan and Chastity leave the van to go get down. They feel they are being watched and start to chase the sounds of giggles and flashes of someone moving through the trees. They get separated. Ryan is easily seduced by an ethereal beauty named Autumn. Chastity is afraid of the girls who appear from a strange mist and tries to flee but becomes ensnared by a tree that feeds her nectar.


Andi is growing increasingly panicked. She wants to scout up the road a little and Colin assures her he’ll be fine. She sets out on her own.


Colin finds himself alone and growing more afraid. Then, Bailey finds him, only she’s different. We get a full transformation as Colin’s handicap disappears and he becomes one of the faeries that now flit around the empty minivan.


Andi hears someone following her and decides to head back to the minivan. The area is empty. She is terrified and goes searching for the others. She comes across the caves and sees light glowing from within. She swallows her fear and goes deeper.


Along the way, she sees the faeries flitting about. She gasps when she sees that Chastity has become a sensual wood nymph, being pleased by one of the faeries. She is going to turn and run and Summer and other faeries discover her. She screams and faints.


She wakes at a great feast. Her friends, minus Chastity, sit around the table. They no longer recognize her, but want her to join. She is fed some of the sweet bread at the feast and screams and flees while the faeries flitter and chase her. She explodes from the mouth of the caves and runs to the road. She is picked up by a truck driver, hysterical and screaming in the back of the truck until the faeries cease to give chase and she is free. Only here eyes have taken on a golden hue and her back is starting to itch like there’s something growing there. As we end, she hums a song she has never heard before.


Comments

Glad you like the first idea! I'm eager to see where our old friends may show up!!! I'm not sure what you mean on the second. In the earlier stories, Calliope and Glory knew who Darcy and James were. In fact, they targeted them because of who they were and the relationship they'd had with Claire and Gloria when human. It created some tension for the human targets. I found that very hot. COTF2 had the following right before Juno re-names herself "He held onto his sense of self, the identity as James, but the name felt foreign to him. In fact, the idea of maleness was foreign. He was not James. She was Juno, of the fae." Is it going to be something different this time?

Marevir

Good idea. And, yes, they all eventually will become their fae personae.

Lyka Bloom

A few thoughts. Can you include some of the characters from COTF 1 or 2 for cameos? They don't even need to be in the action or have dialogue, just showing that they're around gives some continuity to the series that I, for one, enjoy. Near the end you say that the friends no longer recognize Andi. Are the other characters losing their sense of themselves? I've always liked the opposite to one degree or another, they at least know they were human but like their new forms better.

Marevir

Thank You XOXO

Kevin Meyer

Stick around. More coming soon.

Lyka Bloom

I really love this start to the story I want to see more. How do I do that?

Kevin Meyer


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