The Return
Added 2019-10-31 12:05:23 +0000 UTCOk little backstory on this. I have been writing on the Dimensions web board for over a decade. I started this story in 2010 (which also shows how old I am) and I never finished it.
Well, with some tweaking and a lot of help, it's finally finished. I did not go down the path I had originally intended to with it but I think it came out better this way. It is long, 80 pages, but I really hope it came out good. I admit it is a little dark but not too dark.
Thank you all again for your patronage and I hope you enjoy this story that is part of a much larger universe.
Thanks.
Comments
Iβm sorry you didnβt like the story. I hope you like some of my future writings.
Jake
2019-11-04 12:06:03 +0000 UTCIβm quitting your patron after this. This was a good story that you changed around to make like all of your mutual/ less good stories.
Scott
2019-11-04 07:31:06 +0000 UTCThanks, Iβm glad you enjoyed It. Expect a lot more stories involving at least one of them!
Jake
2019-11-02 00:53:02 +0000 UTCFantastic story! No surprise there. π Well worth the wait. Hope we get more with Jim and Steve. Thanks so much for sharing your work!
Austin Bates
2019-11-02 00:40:50 +0000 UTC
