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Pandemonium Reigned Script Pages

Hey guys! Gala here.

Roger wanted to share some select pages from Pandemonium Reigned with all of our Archive Regulars to pair with our After Show. Again -- I couldn't believe the connection that Pandemonium had with Narrow Margin. Even though this script was written before I was born, I've heard so much about it, so it was awesome to be there when the revelation was revealed in real time!

To start off, here's the front cover and the title page. This was the Second Draft, dated April 10th, 1991.

 

 

I love that ouroboros dragon design...

ROGER:  "Quentin disliked me using that design, and told me he didn't like when writers did art stuff like that at the beginning of a script. He advised against it. He's right, of course, but I didn't care. I mean, I had to go through a lot trouble back then to put that on there. There was no clip art back then, no photoshop. The original was cut from an old book I had and taped onto the cover and xeroxed. To me back then the design was a signal to the reader that they were about to read a mythic fable, and that the theme was an ouroboros, which today sounds so pompous and up my own ass, just like the falootin' title. But I was young, and that's when you're supposed to be up your own ass, and I was."

Roger picked 5 segments to share with you all. First up, we have the segment titled "BOXER".

ROGER:  "Here we can see an early version of Dane throwing the fight, which would later find its way into Pulp Fiction. Dane eventually became Butch, and instead of a taxi driver there was a character written specifically for Quentin to play who picks him up after the fight. I left out page 7., which is the fight itself. I remember Quentin telling me that after Raging Bull there was no point in trying to shoot a boxing match, and to just cut straight to leaving the fight, which is how it is presented here. It's worth noting that the name Dane Coolidge is a family name, as I am a relative of the western pulp novelist. Apparently he had a son our family never knew about named Butch, who would eventually be played by Bruce Willis."

 

 

Segment 2 is "HOTEL".

ROGER:  "Eventually, Dane goes to the hotel where he meets Christine, his weepy and nervy fiancé. Christine wasn't originally written as French, and became Fabienne after I had directed Killing Zoe and while we were prepping Pulp Fiction and Quentin met Maria de Medeiros. I think it was a wonderful casting choice and her beautiful accent brought the dialog to life and made Fabienne's annoying written qualities and her character completely lovable."

 

 

 

 

 

 

Segment three has a fan favorite ... the GIMP!

ROGER: "Here we have the original gimp scenes. I can't say that I know where the gimp came from. I was writing it as though I were watching it. The next thing I knew he was in a pawn shop being run by white supremacists, I had no idea that they were going to suddenly pull out a gimp. It just happened without my planning it. I have since been told by a cultural researcher preparing a book on kink history that the term "Gimp" in BDSM has been traced back to Pulp Fiction, and when I was asked how I came up with the term, I told them that it came from my sister-in-law, Molly, who was in a car accident and broke her leg and during that time we all started calling her The Gimp. This was around the time I was writing, so I pulled the term into the script when Zed pulled that guy out of the box, and voila! Originally, Quentin asked me to play the Gimp, but I knew that he would somehow punk me on set while I was locked up in vinyl BDSM gear. Though, I would have been great playing the Gimp, I originally wanted Bruce Campbell to play the part because I figured he would be able to get a performance through the leather mask and ball gag."

 

 

 

 

 

 

Next up, the train station...

ROGER:  "I had recently visited the beautiful Central Station in Los Angeles, and was inspired by the L.A. Noir of it all. I knew I wanted to get onto the train with the gangsters. I knew I wanted a train to be out of control. I knew I wanted chaos in the end. None of this made it into Pulp Fiction. We threw it all away."

 

 

Segment 5 is the train...

ROGER:  "Here, we have the section which draws heavily from Narrow Margin, in noir-ish kinship. The entire train sequence is all rope-tightening, and Peter Hyams is truly inspirational when it comes to rope-tightening big screen action, which is why I leaned so heavily into his guiding arms while writing this. Gangsters on a train are fun. Trains that are out of control are...fun! (I love Runaway Train for the same reason, and I'll bet I owe it a debt of usage as well.)"

 

 

 

And then, of course, the end...

ROGER:  "Before I started writing I wanted the final shot of the movie to be a train barreling out of control through the darkness, destined to crash and destined to kill all on board. I may have written this final scene first. The DISSOLVE TO: was the big gesture here."

 

Thanks guys for stopping by! Let us know if you liked seeing script pages from the material we talked about. Also, make sure to chime in over in our community chat about what you'd like to see in the Aftershows. And also figure out those 3 clues that we gave you for next week!

And, since it's been much requested, here's a clue for the Video Vault in our next Aftershow...

The vaulted film was discussed in Season One but left on the cutting room floor. It's from an acclaimed Filipino director we covered last season when we were heavily in our exploitation era -- but this time, the protagonist has both arms (and plays the villain!).

Pandemonium Reigned Script Pages

Comments

Awesome to see this after the ep!

Zach

If only the fox from ANTICHRIST uttered, “Chaos…REIGNED.” One also wonders, a FROM DUSK TILL DAWN spinoff straight-to-video affair coulda been titled, SANTANICO PANDEMONIUM REIGNED.

David Chien

It's amazing to to be able to read even a small piece of this script! I Hope we get to see more script pages in the future.

Jay

This was not only vastly insightful and intriguing, but a remarkable peek behind a fantastic creative mind! Thank you for sharing! I appreciate you!

Darren Franz

This is so cool. Thank you!!

Bright Mutant

Appreciate you letting us in on this hidden chapter of movie history, Roger. You can see glimpses of what would become legendary, but it’s got its own unique edge and grit. It’s like discovering the roots of a song you’ve always loved, but played in a whole different key. And maybe being 'up your own ass' when you're young really is part of the magic—it’s that fearless belief in your vision, the spark that turns dreams into something unforgettable.

Daniel Borg

Something about that close-quarters gun barrel punch to the eyeball is so visceral! Thanks for extending the Archive into the writing/print realm!

Andrew Hageman

Loved reading these pages. Interesting to see the building blocks of what became the Gold Watch section of Pulp Fiction.

Jonny Blaze

Was Pandemonium Reigned ever sent out or held onto to make independently?

Jeffrey Hemphill

LOVED reading this. Cool that Dane Coolidge was a family name with a Butch connection, and so interesting that it was Vincent in the scene rather than Marcellus. Was it the same Vincent Vega character or had that not evolved yet?

Meghann Salus

Me too! I've at times called it both, but the proper idiom is "pandemonium reigned."

Raj

Rajistan?

Raj

Maybe less parallel than occasionally overlapping. There's a Venn diagram that someone could probably make that shows where the Tarantinoverse and Rogerburg intersect.

Raj

It's what I've got and I'm running with it.

Raj

Very cool seeing how some of those ideas made their way into pulp fiction!

Brandon Lock

"One small step for Roger..." Fun stuff; appreciate the look-see.

Mark Ibarra

Wow! You invented the "gimp" term. That's an accolade no one can take away from you. 🤣

Gunndle Wittlebaum

Incredible!

Gerardo Preciado

Amazing! Thanks for sharing, Roger. This is like the Dead Sea scrolls of movie scripts!

Jeremy Mullins

That was fun. Wild how despite the DNA of Pulp Fiction being so present it felt different tonally. I love that in a parallel a universe somewhere out there the young cinephiles have the Pandemonium Reigns one sheet on their college dorm room wall. Big W for the train movie genre.

Paul Sherman

lol even I thought that before I saw the script - Gala

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Is it American Commandos?

Paul Rowlands

Woah. This is awesome. Interesting that it was always Pandemonium REIGNED and not REIGNS as we all thought!

Paul Rowlands


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