Revolvin' Models: CHAPTER 2
Added 2023-02-16 01:38:40 +0000 UTCSecond chapter of the Revolvin' Models series! I'm thinking that every Wednesday I'll post a new chapter for this story. Hope you guys enjoy!
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So far, the story is about kidnapping women, making them into dolls, and then doing something about it, and I've seen this in other works of yours. This chapter is average. (6)~(35) In the pictures of her dressed state, her body only comes out above her knees. You can add pictures that focus on the lower body and come out completely under the knees. I think it would have been better to replace it with full-body pictures instead of the above-knee pictures. Personally, I like the two characters in the beginning more than the two characters in the end. The female characters at the end look like cats. This kind of appearance feels strange to me.
paruba
2023-02-20 20:36:27 +0000 UTCSigh….
Erick
2023-02-16 06:27:57 +0000 UTC………
kattobing
2023-02-16 06:23:54 +0000 UTC
