(ENGLISH)The Real Fight1-9
Added 2022-10-30 10:44:08 +0000 UTCIf there are any strange things in my English, I would appreciate it if you could let me know.
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You did a great job with the translation! Everything flowed nicely.
2022-10-31 00:32:57 +0000 UTCThank you so much for translation!
guestyuri
2022-10-30 17:47:56 +0000 UTCI am glad you are pleased.
めんまる
2022-10-30 15:08:43 +0000 UTCThank you! You're absolutely right! I corrected it just now!
めんまる
2022-10-30 15:07:52 +0000 UTCWonderful story :) Firstly, to reassure yourself, your translation is neither strange nor weird. There are some issues to correct for a possible reupload: the panel describing Kisaragi Mia, the word however misses the h, so it is a typo. The panel describing Sugiura Nana has the issue of plural in the last sentence, saying practices with other fighters and the opportunity of matches, though the latter can also be a typo. The panel where Mia and Nana meet for the first time, the correct translation should be that she had found a girl opponent. I know in Japanese people refer back to themselves by their names, so a possessive (girl's) would be logical, just not in English. Do keep up the good work you do for our community :)
cflover40
2022-10-30 14:15:48 +0000 UTCThank you for translation!
Lotus
2022-10-30 12:11:56 +0000 UTC
