HINAHIME #1-4
Added 2022-03-18 14:06:07 +0000 UTCIf you find anything wrong with my English, I would be happy to point it out.
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I fixed the points you made in the comments! Thanks for the advice！
Comments
I'm glad you're happy too!
めんまる
2022-03-22 09:05:52 +0000 UTCThis is nice! Thank you for a English version.
Lotus
2022-03-22 03:51:55 +0000 UTCなるほど！勉強になります
めんまる
2022-03-18 20:31:49 +0000 UTC私の日本語とか英語などはあまり上手ではありませんが、最後のパネル "Let's begin... 15 minutes, the match rules are 3 falls count or give-up. No weapons allowed. The fall countout is 5 seconds. If you want to debut, fight seriously" と思います。"Foul play allowed" は「犯則の技できるマッチ」。
shoryuma
2022-03-18 17:08:59 +0000 UTCThank you very much. I'll fix that later!
めんまる
2022-03-18 14:46:49 +0000 UTCThe boss's neck in the second page, middle left panel, looks like it has mosaic censoring on it, and in the last page, middle left panel, the F in frightened is missing.
Cy Man
2022-03-18 14:43:50 +0000 UTC
