What did you think of Chapter 3?
Added 2023-08-30 04:53:43 +0000 UTCComments
It was a really great chatper. Plus i'm glad you're able to treat Kotoko's trauma with respect, also My girl Ibuki si there so a plus. Thought it's more of a peronal opinión, but i felt Yuta hasnt done that much on The story rather than just being The third wheel, which i would hope he gets more of a Spotlight (maybe a muscle growth sequence ;)) also Ibuki felt a bit on The sidelines with Kotoko serving as The Main threat. But on a positive note, at least i'm happy that The WOH get to be more active on The battle rather than just shitting on The bleachers as their Amazon of Hope does everything. If that's The case, i'm worried and intrigued of The possibility of a monozon nagisa.
2023-09-03 01:39:06 +0000 UTCMuscle theft/transfer/draining is something not done often and it isn't always done well, but i personally loved how you did it here. Same can be said about muscle overgrowth, but you did a good job with that too. entertaining as hell all around :)
calm wind
2023-08-30 14:16:37 +0000 UTCI liked it imo. Komaru learned to not always rely on her brute physical strength and still came out on top. The fight against Kotoko and Ibuki was my favorite, though I do wish that we had a bit of a stronger focus on Ibuki. Also Yuta is still alive, which is always a plus
Zut Spinda
2023-08-30 09:28:20 +0000 UTC
