mismatched // ANIMATIC #1 (feedback wanted!)
Added 2021-11-07 17:01:01 +0000 UTChere is the VERY bare-bones first pass animatic of my film! I made a super janky scratch track, I'm still working on the timing. Also working on getting someone to make the score so I can better time the scenes to the music. Sorry about some of the blue text getting lost! Hope you can still read it.
But I would love to hear your feedback on the concept! I really don't have any other eyes on this project, so please tell me what you think of the pacing (Are some moments too fast? Some moments too slow? Does the timing of the ending satisfy you?) What do you think of the title? Did you get the pun? (also open to title suggestions!)
Thank you lovely patrons, your feedback is important to me!
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Also! Louis Bilici, who make the soundtrack for my previous film, Bang! Bang! agreed to make the soundtrack for this film! Looking forward to hearing his interpretation of the mood, he's great to work with.
PRE-PRODUCTION
✓ Build set in blender & set up cameras
✓ Storyboard in Adobe Animate
✓ Gather film references for look & colour
✓ Explore character design
✓ Explore costume designs
✓ Design special poses
~ Explore style frames / concept art
✓ Create colour script
✓ Find musician for soundtrack
Comments
Thanks for the feedback Freddy!
Jackie Droujko
2021-11-08 19:48:22 +0000 UTCLooking good, I would add a bit more of time to the change of clothing so there’s enough room to connect with the character and the story. I like the opening and ending this is coming along very great!
Freddy
2021-11-07 17:12:12 +0000 UTC
