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RSAHNP: Chapter 10: Ron and the Ladies Wrestling Adventure, Part 2

*Vivian Porter walks through the backstage of the Middleton Stadium, searching for the room in which Shego, Ron, Kim, Monique and Adrena Lynn. She had finally been able to get away from the lab and get to Middleton Stadium in the evening. She sees two large wrestlers, Pain King and Steel Toe, talking to one another. She approaches them.*

Vivian: Excuse me, I hate to interrupt, but do either of you know which room Ron Stoppable is staying in at the moment?

Pain King: You must be one of his gal friends, huh?

Vivian: Yes, um, I am. *She blushes lightly.*

Steel Toe: Our bro is quite a hit with the ladies.

Pain King: He must be in order to capture Rhea's heart. Never thought that'd happen in my lifetime.

Steel Toe: You telling me. Kid could probably tame a T-rex if given the chance.

Vivian: Okay... um, the directions to the room? Please?

Pain King: Oh! Sorry about that. It's just everyone's been talking about it since the main event was announced for tomorrow night.

Steel Toe: Yeah, it's the big room right over there.

Vivian: Thank you. *She smiles, waving good-bye to the two athletes and marches toward the room.*

*She enters the room, noticing Kim, Ron, Monique and Adrena Lynn seated around the room. However, all of their attention wasn't on the TV or Monique working on ring gear for wrestling. No, their eyes were all focused on Shego who was pounding a large punching bag with incredible ferocity, so much so that the chain that held it off the ground swayed and buckled along with the bag as it withstood the incredible force of Shego's blows... barely.*

Vivian: Hey, everyone. What's going on?

Monique: You didn't hear, Girl? Shego is going to fight Rhea Rampage in a No Holds Barred match tomorrow night!

Vivian: What? Why would she do that?

Ron: It's all my fault. *Ron hangs his head low. Vivian takes a seat beside him, feeling both concerned and curious simultaneously.*

Vivian: What do you mean, Ron? How's this your fault?

Ron: Well, uh... It's like this... Um... *Ron's cheeks become flushed with a blush.*

Adrena: Rhea Rampage is attracted to our Ron.

Monique: Very attracted to him. *She emphasized with a smirk, giggling in amusement while Adrena Lynn went on to sum up the course of events that have recently transpired.*

Adrena: Here's what happened. Ron was looking for Monique, but Rhea and her two friends found Ron. Rufus found us and lead us to Ron. Shego went in the Locker Room and found Rhea making out with Ron. And then Rhea challenged Shego, she accepted... And that's about it.

Vivian: She kissed you, Ron?

Ron: Yeah, it just happened out of nowhere! How was I supposed to know that a woman as beautiful as Rhea would kiss me let alone acknowledge me?

*Suddenly, without warning, Shego let's out a primal roar/scream that causes everyone in the room to turn their attention back to her just in time to see Shego ignite her fist in green plasma and strike the punching bag with such force that she punctures it. Ripping her hand from the gaping hole she tore from the punching bag, she turns back to the group. She then marches over to Ron, hands clenched into a fists as Ron gets up from his seat and slowly backs away from Shego as she advances. It didn't take him long to find himself pressed back against the wall.*

Shego: So... you think she's beautiful, Ronnie? *She crosses her arms under her breasts, narrowing her eyes at him as she awaited his response.*

Ron: Um... yes?

Monique: *Mutters to herself and rubs her temples* Oh, Baby Boy, you should have kept your big mouth shut.

Shego: Do you think she's more beautiful than me?

Ron: What? No! You're both equally incredibly gorgeous! *She growls low and menacingly at him.*

Ron: And I'll just shut up now.

Shego: Oh, no, you don't! You're not getting off that easy, Ron! Is she the same Rhea that you written about in your diary?

Ron: How do you know about my diary?!

Adrena: That'd be my bad. I found it one day and Shego and I have been reading it ever since. Sorry. Heh heh heh.

Shego: Don't change the subject! Exactly how long have you been crushing on Rhea Rampage?

Ron: Almost as long as I've been crushing on you, so I guess close to 4 years? *Shego growls a bit louder, but she suddenly feels a gentle hand rest on her shoulder, causing her to turn and look into the blue eyes of Vivian Porter.*

Vivian: Selene, please don't be upset at Ron for having a crush on someone for a couple years. After all, don't you remember? You had a crush on me throughout all of high school until we officially became a couple in our Senior Year. *Releasing a heavy sigh, Shego proceeds to give Ron a quick, gentle kiss.*

Shego: I'm sorry, Ron. I'm not angry at you. It's just that... Seeing her kiss you ... It made me so... *A light blush colors her cheeks, which doesn't go unnoticed by either Ron or Vivian.*

Vivian: My love? *Shego turns to look at her.* Are you... jealous?

Shego: Jealous?! Has all the intelligence left your brain and caused you to revert into a dumb blonde sterotype?! I am jealous of no one! And I am especially not jealous of her! You got that?! I. Am. Not. Jealous! *Vivian laughs and giggles at the flustered, outraged visage of her girlfriend.*

Vivian: Okay, okay. *She giggles.* I believe you.

Shego: Good.

Adrena: Hey, Shego, why don't we go for a walk? Maybe go get a pizza at the Dominos nextdoor for Ron and the others? It'll be good for you. What do you say?

Shego: Fine. I'm a little hungry anyway.

*Shego and Adrena Lynn leave the room to go get some pizza. Ron, Kim, Vivian and Monique look at one another. All of them thinking the same thing. How could they possibly stop this fight from happening?*

Ron: So... Any ideas on how we can stop this fight from happening?

Vivian: There must be some way. Kim? Monique?

Kim: I have absolutely no idea, Vivian.

Monique: Got me, girl. We know Shego isn't going to back down.

Ron: She probably won't. But maybe... *He starts walking towards the door.*

Kim: Ron? What are you doing?

Ron: I'm going to see if I can get Rhea to call off this fight.

Kim: How are you going to do that?

Ron: I... I don't know, KP. But I gotta try. I'm the one who caused all of this, so I'll be the one to fix it.

Kim: But you don't know if it'll work.

Ron: It's still worth a shot. And it's not like we got any other options.

Monique: Good luck with that, Beau. You'll need it. I just hope Rhea is in a listening mood.

Kim: If anyone can make her listen to reason, it's Ron. *Vivian gets up from the sofa and walks over to him.*

Vivian: I'll go with you, Ron.

Ron: Really? Why?

Vivian: Would you prefer Selene finding out that you went to see Rhea alone?

Ron: Yeah, you got a point there, Vivian. Me going to see Rhea alone would not make Shego happy at all. Not to mention she'd probably kill me once she'd find out.

Vivian: She wouldn't kill you, Ron. She loves you. But she'd still be very ticked. And that's why we'll go see her together. *She loops her arm around Ron's arm and the two proceed to walk out of the room.*

*Ron and Vivian arrive at the entrance door of Rhea Rampage's room, the largest room in the whole stadium. They knock on the door. Seconds later, the door opens and reveals none other than Madison Mayhem, who practically jumps for joy upon seeing Ron.*

Madison: Ronnie! *She swiftly pulls Ron and Vivian into the room and closes the door. She then hugs Ron, snuggling and pressing her body against him.*

Madison: I'm so happy you decided to visit, Ronnie! I was so bummed that I didn't get to spend more time with you. *She gives him a cute pout, twirling her finger in her blonde hair as she did.*

Ron: Yeah, uh, it's nice to see you, too, Madison. *Madison then turns her attention to Vivian.*

Madison: Ooooh! Who's this? She's mega gorgeous!

Vivian: Thank you. *Chuckles* I'm Dr. Vivian Francis Porter. I assume you are Madison Mayhem?

Madison: Yep! That's me! The cutest little monster in the GWA. Hehe hehe!

Ron: Hey, Madison, do you think we could talk to Rhea?

Madison: Awww, but why? Don't you wanna talk to me instead, Ronnie? *She pouts in a super cute manner.*

Ron: It's important. Sorry.

Madison: Come on, Ronnie, don't you wanna hang out with me? I promise it'll be fun. *She leans back against him, reaching up to caress his cheek and look into his eyes while rubbing and wiggling her tight boyshort clad ass against Ron's groin.*

Ron: I... Um... Well...

Madison: Say, Viv, can you tell me if Ronnie has a thing for blondes? He's the cutest guy I've ever seen and I'm just dying to know!

Vivian: Well, from what Adrena Lynn has told me regarding Ron's diary, I certainly believe he does love blondes. *Her response causes Ron to blush and groan, where as Madison gets the biggest grin on her face, gazing in pure adoration at Ron Stoppable.*

Ron: Not cool, Viv. So not cool.

Madison: I knew it! *She turns and presses herself against Ron, her "I'm sexy cute" pink tank-top clad breasts pressing against him. When Ron looked down at her smiling face and twinkling eyes, he got a ample view of her cleavage, causing his face to turn bright red.*

Madison: So... What do you say, Ronnie? Would you like to have some fun with me?

Scarlett: Are you that desperate to have Rhea rip out your spine and use it as dental floss for getting touchy with her man, Mads? *Vivian, Ron and Madison direct their attention to Scarlett who was watching the scene all along while leaning against the wall.*

Madison: Senpai would never do that, Scarlett! She loves me almost as much as she does Ronnie. So there! *She sticks out her tongue childishly at Scarlett as she continues to cling to Ron, refusing to let go of him. Vivian giggles in amusement while Scarlett simply rolls her eyes.*

Scarlett: Keep telling yourself that, Mads. *She turns to look at Vivian, giving her a friendly smile.* I'm Scarlett. It is nice to meet you.

Vivian: I'm Vivian, and the feeling is quite mutual.

Ron: Um, Scarlett, is it okay if we talk to Rhea? It's really important.

Scarlett: Yeah, sure. Besides, she'll be happy to see you.

*They follow Scarlett deeper into the room, coming to what was akin to a large living room, complete with a 62 inch Digital TV, two sofas and three lounge chairs.*

Scarlett: Hey, Rhea, your boyfriend is here to see you!

*When Ron lays eyes on Rhea, he's immediately left breathless and awestruck by her appearance, taken completely aback by her beauty. Rhea is wearing a black tank-top shirt, a pair of jeans, and a pair of black and white sneakers. Her hair was no longer styled and slicked back; her long black tresses of a mane flowing naturally down her shoulders and back.*

*She looked stunning in her normal, casual appearance. Rhea was already incredibly beautiful, but seeing her like this made her appear a bit more so. It was a lot like when Shego would be out of her green and black jumpsuit. For a few moments, in his psyche, he couldn't help but compare the two women, including their similarities and differences. They were both dark-haired Goddesses with unmatched beauty, power and grace.*

Rhea: *Smiling at Ron, noticing how he's staring at her, she takes great joy in having such a powerful effect on him.* Hey, Ron.

Ron: *Vivian giggles and lightly nudges him, breaking him out of his stupor.* Oh! H-Hey there, Rhea. It's good to see you again. *He smiles awkwardly and blushes in the presence of the tall beauty.*

Rhea: I'm glad you came. *She gets up from the sofa, walks over to Ron, grabs him by the collar of his jersey, and then proceeds to give him a long, passionate kiss that leaves Ron in a blushing daze for a few seconds after she ends it.*

Rhea: *She notices Vivian and blushes from slight embarrassment.* Sorry. I was a bit... distracted.

Vivian: It's okay. I know from experience that Ron can be quite captivating. I'm Vivian Porter.

Rhea: Pleasure to meet you, Viv. I'm Rhea. Come, let's sit and relax.

*Rhea plops down in her comfy chair while Ron and Vivian seat themselves on the sofa in front of her. Madison jumps beside Ron on the sofa, grinning flirtatiously at him as he's sandwiched between the two blonde beauties. Scarlett, on the other hand, chooses to stand and lean against the wall.*

Rhea: So what brings you here? Something on your minds?

Ron: Huh? Oh, yeah! Um... there is something important to talk to you about.

Rhea: Oh? And what would that be?

Ron: Well, we were thinking that maybe you would... hopefully... possibly... consider calling off the fight.

Vivian: Yes, for you see, this isn't necessary. If you and Selene go into battle... I just don't want her or you to get hurt.

*Rhea leans back into her chair, glancing from Vivian to Ron, as if to determine her best response for the request/plead.*

Rhea: I appreciate your concern. However, let me ask you both something. Is Selene willing to back out of the fight herself?

Vivian: No, she isn't. She doesn't even know we're here. We came to see if there was a chance to reason with you. I just don't want my best friend and one of the loves of my life to get hurt.

Rhea: I'm gonna be honest with you. I like Selene. I don't know much about her, but my gut is telling me that she's a good person and that she is the one I've been waiting to fight against my whole career. I've never backed down from anyone or anything in my entire life. I am the most dominant, powerful, formidable female on the planet. And if I back down from her, not only will I be going against everything that makes me who I am, but I will lose the undefeated strike that I strived so hard to keep intact for these last 6 years, and most importantly... I will lose my chance to be happy, to be with Ron, to be part of his life. And that's something I can never do. I will not back down. I will not call off the fight. And for what its worth... I'm sorry.

Ron: So... that's definitely a major no, huh?

Madison: Hmm... more like a "Hell No!", actually.

Ron: That's what I thought. *He leans back against the sofa.*

Vivian: I understand. This conflict is simply inevitable.

Rhea: Sometimes, in the heart of war and the heat of battle, friendship and peace is forged. And more often than not, respect.

Vivian: What do you mean?

Rhea: Let me tell you a story. When Scarlett first arrived in the GWA, she was on a tear through the Women's Division. Naturally, that lead her to face me, multiple times. And every time, I won, but during our battles we formed a bond of respect and eventually friendship. Before we knew it, we became the most dominant tag team in the entire division and inseparable friends. So, you see, conflict is not always a bad thing.

Vivian: So... you're saying that this fight with Selene, though violent and highly aggressive it may be, will potentially lead to you two becoming allies?

Rhea: That's the idea.

Ron: She makes sense tho.

Rhea: Besides, if I'm going to be in Ron's life, then she's going to have to get used to me being around. *She smiled at Ron, looking at him with pure love and utter adoration, causing him to blush.*

Vivian: This is very true.

Madison: Yaaay! Once this all over, we get to hang out and have some fun together! Wouldn't that be nice, Ronnie? *Ron begins stammering and sputtering as Madison practically crawled into his lap.*

Rhea: Maddie... *Her stern voice causing the blonde to look back to her.*

Madison: Oh, but, Senpai, he's so cute! Can't I have fun with him for a little bit? *Vivian giggles at her antics and Ron's flustered reaction to the blonde's attention.*

Scarlett: You've got to admire her resilience and tenacity, if nothing else. Even if she is a bit of an idiot at times.

Madison: Hey! Senpai, she's making fun of me!

Rhea: *She groans and rubs her temples.* I swear it's like dealing with two annoying, younger sisters.

*Ron and Vivian could only snicker quietly to themselves at the interactions between the three women.*

*The scene shifts to Shego and Adrena Lynn walking backstage. Adrena is carrying four extra large boxes of pizza, while Shego appears to be lost in thought.*

Adrena: That was a freaky good deal, wasn't it? Buy two extra large pizzas and get two more free! Ron is gonna be so happy about this!

Shego: Yeah. Great.

Adrena: Do I detect a hint of sarcasm? What's the matter, Shego? You're not acting like yourself at all. Ever since your encounter with Rhea you've been...

Shego: Do NOT mention her name! Ever!

Adrena: Whoa, chill out! I didn't mean anything by it.

Shego: *Sighs* Sorry. I'm just a bit on edge is all.

Adrena: We noticed that. You don't react nearly as hostile towards any of us as you do Rhea. In fact, other than you and Kim having little verbal and physical quarrels every now and then, you have no problem with sharing Ron with the rest of us. But this... it feels so much more serious and intense.

Shego: You're just imagining it, Lynn. Now drop it.

Adrena: Okay, but if you wanna talk about it, we're here for you. You don't have to be the one acting like you must carry the burdens of the entire world upon your shoulders.

Shego: Thanks. I appreciate it.

Adrena: Anytime. *She gives Shego a genuine smile, which she returns briefly.*

*Suddenly, something catches Shego's eyes, causing her to stop dead in her tracks. What caught her eye was a star on a door, the name "RHEA RAMPAGE" boldy spelled out within the star upon the door of the particularly large room. Her eyes narrowed and her hands clenched into fists, a reaction which did not go unnoticed by Adrena Lynn.*

Adrena: Um... Shego? Selene? You okay?

Shego: Take the pizzas back to the room. I've got something to take care of.

Adrena: Okay... Just hurry back.

Shego: Don't worry. This won't take too long.

*Adrena Lynn departs, leaving Shego alone. She approaches the door, glaring at the name within the large star label. She reaches out, igniting her plasma, and leaves five long slashes through it. She takes a deep breath, trying to calm the rage she felt boiling within herself. After a few moments standing in front of the door, she was about to leave until she hears voices... the voices of Ron Stoppable and Vivian Porter, the two people whom she loved more than anything else in existence.*

Vivian: Is she always like this?

Rhea: You have no idea.

Ron: Madison, can you please get off of me?

Madison: But, Ronnie, I'm just having some fun! Don't you like me in your lap?

Rhea: You've had your fun, Maddie, now get off of Ron. Besides, it's me who should be in his lap. Isn't that right, Beloved?

*Upon hearing those words come from Rhea and imagining her sitting in Ron's lap was the absolute final straw! Snarling in rage, Shego kicks the door down and rushes into the room. It is then she sees the startled expressions of Vivian, Ron, Madison and Scarlett. But what drew her ire the most was the sight of Rhea straddling Ron's lap, her body pressing against him. It set her off, her fists igniting in fiert plasma as she rushed forward to spear Rhea just as she stood up from Ron's lap. The two women went rolling across the floor, Shego being the aggressor as she savagely hit Rhea with her plasma encased fists again and again.*

Shego: YOU... FUCKING... BITCH!

*Rhea grabs Shego by her wrists, preventing her from landing any more blows. She proceeds to effortlessly toss Shego through the air and against the far wall, slamming into it with devastating impact. Despite the impact and pain, Shego is quick to recover and is ready to continue her attack on Rhea... only for Ron and Vivian to stand between the two powerful Alpha Females.*

Ron: No more fighting! No more fighting!

Vivian: Please, listen to him, my Love.

Shego: What the Hell are you doing here with her?!

Ron: I... We... came to see if we could reason with Rhea to call off the fight.

Shego: You did what?!

Rhea: Don't worry. I refused their request, Selene. Because I want this fight. I want you to come at me with all your anger and rage, to hit me with everything you got until you can't no more. *She wipes away the minute trickle of blood from her mouth and smiles.*

Shego: You know what? You want me so bad, bitch? Come and get me! Fuck waiting until tomorrow night!

*She was about to rush forward and lunge at Rhea again, only for Ron and Vivian to stop her, Ron's arms encircling her waist/upper body while Vivian grasped her by the shoulders and pushed back, looking into her eyes as if hoping to calm the beast raging from within. It wasn't easy for them, for even together they could barely hold Shego back.*

Vivian: Selene, listen to me!

Shego: Stay out of this, Viv! This is between me and her!

Vivian: No, I won't! Because I know why you're acting like this, Selene! I know why you're angry, I know why you're scared! *Upon hearing this, Shego stops fighting and focuses on Vivian and Ron.*

Shego: What do you know, huh?!

Vivian: You're threatened and intimidated by Rhea, but not because you're afraid of her yourself. You fear her for a different reason. You're afraid of what she could potentially do to you. You are afraid that she'll take everything you love and hold dear away. You're afraid that she will take Ron away from you, that she will replace you in his life.

Shego: I...

Vivian: Am I right?

*Shego looks away, lowering her head and closing her eyes as she fought back the tears that she felt stinging in her eyes. Then, without warning, she bolts out of the room, marching right past Rhea, Scarlett and Madison. Ron looks back at Vivian, concern written on his face.*

Vivian: Go after her, Ron. She needs you more than me right now. *Without another word, Ron races off to catch up with Shego. He eventually catches up with her.*

Ron: Shego! Wait up!

Shego: Leave me alone!

Ron: I can't do that! Not until we talk! *She stops dead in her tracks and turns swiftly to face Ron, tears brimming in her eyes, a few managing to escape and trek down her face.*

Shego: Why don't you go back to Rhea, huh? She's the one you really care about! That's why you and Viv went to see her and call off the fight! You didn't want to see your crush get pummeled and beaten to a bloody pulp! Admit it! That's the only reason you did that! For her!

Ron: Shego, that's not true at all!

Shego: Oh, yeah? Then tell me what you did that for! Why did you try to get her to call off the fight! Go on! Tell me! TELL ME! *It was then that Ron finally couldn't hold it back any further, a few tears leaving his eyes as he finally reveals the true reason for why he didn't want her to fight Rhea Rampage.*

Ron: BECAUSE I LOVE YOU, SELENE!

*The confession/proclamation shocks Shego to her core. He... He loves her. He was trying to protect her. All this time, it was about trying to keep her from harm, to ensure her safety. Her heart was instantly filled with a warmth greater than any she's felt before, a love that was infinite and without equal.*

*Before she can react, Ron initiates a passionate kiss. She melts into the kiss, allowing his arms to embrace her as her own wrap around his neck. It's as if their hearts and souls had merged, becoming one. When he finally breaks the kiss, he rests his forehead against her own, gazing deeply into one another's eyes. *

Ron: I didn't want you to fight her because I was afraid you would get hurt. I didn't want you fighting over something I've caused. If it wasn't for me, none of this would have happened. That's why Viv and I went to see Rhea. *Shego wraps her arms around him, burying her face into his neck.*

Shego *Mumbles*: You dumb, selfless, noble idiot.

Ron: *He chuckles lightly as he strokes her long raven hair and caresses her back.* Yeah, I know. I'm always gonna be me. First, last, and always.

Shego: *She removes herself from his neck and looks directly into Ron's chocolate-brown eyes, smiling as he takes his thumb and wipes away the tear trails on her face.* I'm sorry, Ron. I'm really sorry. For everything that I done.

Ron: It's okay, Selene. You don't need to apologize.

Shego: Since when did you start calling me by my real name?

Ron: You don't like it?

Shego: No, I do. I really love hearing you say it.

Ron: It's a beautiful name for an equally beautiful babe.

Shego: *Laughs lightly.* Charmer.

Ron: I do what I can. *She smiles, reaching up to gently cup his cheek in the palm of her hand.*

Ron: Selene?

Shego: Yes?

Ron: If you don't want to back out of the fight, then I'm going to help you, support you, and cheer you on. Win or lose, tomorrow night you're gonna take Rhea Rampage to the absolute limit!

Shego: I like the sound of that. And Ron?

Ron: Yeah?

Shego: Thank you.

Ron: For what?

Shego: For being you. *She proceeds to kiss Ron, which he gladly accepts and returns. The couple is unaware of the presence of Vivian Porter, who watches on with a smile.*

*Ron, Shego and Vivian return to their assigned room. Once they all had their fill of pizza, they went on to discuss tomorrow's fight. They had to get Shego ready for her clash with Rhea Rampage within the next 24 hours.*

Ron: We need to give you all the information and knowledge we can get on Rhea Rampage. After all, one of the rules of combat is that you must know your enemy. Equally important is to know where you will engage them and how to engage them. Because what you do know is dangerous to your enemy, while what you think you know is dangerous to yourself.

Monique: Damn straight, Baby Boy.

Ron: Boxing. Krav Maga. Judo. Muay Thai. Kickboxing. Mixed Martial Arts. Jiu-Jitsu. We know Rhea is a master of all these fighting styles and more. That combined with her immense strength, incredible speed and agility, intelligence and ruthless aggression make her the most dangerous woman on the planet... no offense, Shego.

Shego: None taken, Ron.

Ron: Bottom line, when you go up against Rhea, do not hold back! You have the speed and agility advantage. Your plasma will also help, but it won't be easy. Rhea can take tremendous amounts of punishment. And if you got to fight dirty? Do it, 'cause it could make all the difference on whether you survive and fight on or get brutally beaten to a pulp.

Shego: Good advice.

Ron: I've got all of Rhea's fights in my watchlist on the GWA Network APP. I highly recommend watching those in the top 10 and a few others. They may help you in the fight tomorrow.

Adrena: I'm impressed.

Kim: Yeah, who would have thought that Ron would actually be a good strategist?

Ron: KP, KP. I've learned a lot of things from video games, comics, movies, TV series and wrestling in general. It's just that now I can use my Ron-ness to make use of it all.

Kim: Hard to believe he was such a slacker when it came to studying and homework.

Vivian: Oh, I bet. *She giggles in amusement.*

Monique: Strategy is good and all, but first things first. We need to get you some ring attire made, Girl. And a ring name. Can't go out there as Shego, the world's baddest Villainess and Mercenary.

Shego: What do you suggest my name be then?

Ron: Hmm... How about... Selene Dragonfire? *Shego proceeds to press herself against him, poking him in the chest with her index finger.*

Shego: Do I look like a dragon to you?

Ron: No, but if you were a dragon you'd probably be the most beautiful one ever. Besides, I just thought that, you know, given your fiery plasma powers, that it'd be a fitting and cool female wrestler name. *When it looks like Shego is going to make a scathing retort, she stops to think it over.*

Shego: Okay, that's probably the dorkiest, corniest, yet sweetest compliment I've ever heard. And now that I think about it, it's kind of a cool name.

Monique: And, Girl, do I have a T.B.D. in mind! *Ron, Shego, Vivian, Adrena and Kim look at one another and then back at Monique.*

Kim: Um... translation? Please and thank you.

Monique: Totally Badass Design, ladies and gentleman. Check it out! *She shows them an illustration of Shego in her soon to be created ring gear/wrestling attire.*

Shego: Ooooh! Momma likes a lot!

Ron: That is so badical!

Kim: Way cool, Monique!

Adrena Lynn: That's freaking awrsome!

Vivian: It's stunning!

*We see a image and detailed description of Shego's Wrestling Attire: A black, sleeveless, form-fitting wrestling top with green chainmail scales imprinted all on the bust and abdomen; black, form-fitting shorts that go to the thigh but end just above the knees; black boots with emerald trim; black combat/MMA style gloves; and the final piece is a wicked green and black eye mask!*

Monique: Let's get started!

Comments

I see your point. I am not seeing the whole picture yet, and I am not expecting it to be solely on Kim all the time. It is kind of the point of the SCOWN gimmick. Thinking about it I guess I was expecting Kim to be sorted first, as that would have felt more natural moving from the show to this new situation. Doing Shego first just seems a bit out of place following that.

ZoorYuvonHeim

I believe therein lies your problem and that's exactly why you feel that way. Not everything is going to revolve solely around Kim, as there are other ladies in the harem who are equal to her and have an equally strong relationship with Ron. Thus you are only making a big deal about it because you believe it is when in fact it isn't. Every decision I've made for this story is for a definite reason in the bigger, ongoing plot that's going forward. In other words, it's all part of the plan. So relax, sit back, and enjoy the ride. It's gonna be worth it. Trust me.

Aaron N. Fissel

I get that, but I find it frustrating because outside this change the rest of the story feels so in sync with the original show. You have done a great job here, and honestly its one of the best things I can praise you on. This story reads and feels like it should fit within the original show. Even that Tera dynamic for example was perfect - I felt in how it highlights Kim's jealousy and possessiveness with Ron. But when its so in line with how the original show felt this change of Ron*Shego as the first focus feels out of place because the show was so clearly Ron*Kim. It makes the relationship feel out of place this way. Maybe I am getting hung up after reading what JDragon set up originally. with how Ron wanted Kim first, and that was the whole thing holding up the rest of the harem feeling the better choice than this right now.

ZoorYuvonHeim

In regards to both of your comments, I have to disagree. You must understand that we're giving these characters further depth and development, moreso than the series ever did and making them our own. I've taken it upon myself to not make creative decisions in a vacuum and have made certain that all the creative decisions I've made are for a larger, ongoing story rather than a simple redevelopment of the characters. Some things will be bound to be different, where as most things about these characters will be the same. Have my illustrative partner and I taken some liberties? Yes, and we're allowed to because we are the creative team on RSAHNP. It's my privilege of being the writer on RSAHNP.

Aaron N. Fissel

This 2-parter brings me back to my issues with the promise in chapter 6. Spoils here, but I can't help it. Shouldn't this be Kim, and not Shego fighting like that? The whole dynamic in the show was how Ron liked Kim, but didn't have the guts to go through with it while Kim didn't know how to handle it with both fearful of ruining their friendship. Kim got to a point of trying to push Ron to be jealous but was always wanting Ron to make that step while Ron was just too fearful to make it. All other relationship interests of Ron's were short-lived and one-sided, like Terra while Ron was oblivious or with Shego normally rejecting him. This situation does change that, but I don't see how it would change the core feelings that should be between Ron and Kim. Here... it just feels out of place like it is. It would make more sense if the roles were swapped with Kim in the forefront in this.

ZoorYuvonHeim

this turned out quite good

Jebest4781


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