Embarrassed Development: End Game (Ep. 7)
Added 2024-05-31 16:16:56 +0000 UTCThe first draft of this ended up being almost 30 minutes long... sometimes I get carried away writing scripts and then have to trim it down to a realistic length before I start making it lmao
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Finally finished my rewatch of season 1 and I have to say, it was pretty great! I like the introduction of Hana, Kayla, Rebecca’s humiliations and the Jess/Mackenzie conflict. It was all amazing. There were some great jokes as always (usually from Hana) and I like that this Rebecca’s last time as the big villain of the show. She obviously is the villain a few time after (like haunted humiliation 2) but we see she’s less of threat and will become a better person as time goes on (Rehana on my brain even now😅) Honestly my only complaint is I wish we got more of Jess and Mackenzie drama, but that’s just because I love the characters so much! It still really cute to see Mackenzie apologize for her behavior only for Jess to immediately tell her she’s like a little sister. It’s sweet 🥰 I can confidently now say there’s not one bad episode of ED! Even the weakest episodes are still just average. It really does show you’re just the master of ENF and story spelling Jess! I’m always excited to see your future work! Sorry to gush, but you’re amazing and talented ❤️
TheOneWhoLaughsLastH20
2025-05-19 10:15:25 +0000 UTCexcellent, good to see rebecca finally put in her place. maybe next time you can humiliate both rebecca and her sister for that stunt at the highschool reunion a while back, during that "bathroom brawl" video. I'm sure Melissa's craving payback for that one
Sean Erik Diaz
2024-06-06 19:24:29 +0000 UTCI loved it. Finally she gets what she deserves… and to be honest; I hope she gets some more in the future (you have to admit she’s a lovely bully 😜)
Elle a Poil
2024-05-31 22:11:59 +0000 UTCLoved the bit at the end with her losing the newspaper. A good touch.
Anonymous
2024-05-31 21:53:03 +0000 UTCWell done. This was a great end to the amazing story. That bully got exactly what she deserved.
Troy-Bear-Koba
2024-05-31 21:03:35 +0000 UTCI'm glad someone actually paused it to read it xD
Jess
2024-05-31 19:22:50 +0000 UTCNot at all how I saw this going haha! Love the quick wrap up of the saving Mackenzie especially with Hannas comments Some well deserved just deserts for Rebecca, stripped and fully on display! The bit at the bottom of the magazine cover gave a me a good chuckle btw 😅
First Mystery
2024-05-31 18:38:48 +0000 UTCDeserved. Also, I notice that playing by the rules is the only time your plans break in your favor; sometimes they still fail, but occasional blowback is still less frequent than perpetual. And I am sure even Melissa will not learn this lesson. A great conclusion to a solid arc. All that was missing was a joke concerning field goals.
Apollo
2024-05-31 16:46:49 +0000 UTCHonestly that’s great, I love it! I personally find jokes like that always make me laugh because of how seamlessly everything went. Like, yeah we could go over the plan and have everything play out with possible scenarios/ obstacles, or we could skip to the end xD Nice work as always!
TheOneWhoLaughsLastH20
2024-05-31 16:43:36 +0000 UTCSpeaking as a science teacher it was good enough for me :)
Lisa Ming
2024-05-31 16:43:10 +0000 UTCI can't stand girls like Jessica, so I always love watching her get hers!
Lisa Ming
2024-05-31 16:42:35 +0000 UTCAnything to distract the audience from the fact that it's just regular ground because I couldn't find a way to make it look like quick sand xD
Jess
2024-05-31 16:42:34 +0000 UTC"Is this quick sand?" SIGN: Warning Quick Sand LOL
Lisa Ming
2024-05-31 16:39:22 +0000 UTCThank you! Haha yeah I wrote out the entire script for how we planned it, what the plan was, a few speed bumps along the way that we have to overcome, and bla bla bla, but just in reading it out loud it took 25 minutes for just that part of it lmao so I was like "nah, I'm not rendering 300+ images for this I'll never get it done" and just made it into a joke xD
Jess
2024-05-31 16:38:32 +0000 UTCThat…..was……AWESOME! Rebecca finally got a taste of karma losing her leader title! Then ending up butt naked tied to a goal post? That is sweet revenge! Also found it really funny how you guys saved Mackenzie off screen haha. It’s good to know you protect her like a dorky sister, that’s sweet! I’m more surprised you didn’t have her run home naked as revenge for what she did to you with the bike, haha. I’m sure it’ll come in the future though;) You guys definitely deserve this victory, so congrats you dorks! Great end to this story arc. Dang, over 30 minutes! Now I kind of want to see that cut of the story!
TheOneWhoLaughsLastH20
2024-05-31 16:35:53 +0000 UTCOh my gosh! That was incredible ! Loved Rebecca’s punishment! It’s my favourite ! It’s so funny! She looks so good naked and muddy ! Great job! Xx
Liam young
2024-05-31 16:30:13 +0000 UTC
