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To recalibrate our current position, we are now camping out right on the border of the empire, in a little forest close enough to a village for me to steal from it but not close enough for Simel to...

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Getting the money to pay for the boat was pretty easy. The problem was convincing Simel that I wasn’t going to kill, rob or loot anyone to get the money.

But I was able to cook up a pretty ...

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“Did you hear what happened last night? Nasty business!” the innkeeper says in greeting as we step up to the counter. A number of goblins are already seated in the dining room, not a few of the...

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And, like that, we left the city of… what was it called? Standsore? Something like that.

Before we left fully, though, I stopped by a little shop and, uh, ‘borrowed’ a map. See...

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I put my hands on my hips, hopefully only resembling a disappointed mother by coincidence. “Now, why would you go and do that?” He stares up at me with the same kind of look he’s had the past...

Tutorial Rewrite 145 Simel's Lament Pt3

The room was not quite dark. In these places, the night was never entirely dark. Not like at home, where night held its rule for all hours of the night, only unwillingly banished once the sun took ...

Tutorial Rewrite 144 Simel's Lament Pt2

“So, yeah. For now, how about I go get you a bowl of that soup I mentioned? That’d be nice, wouldn’t it? And, just so you know, there’s no meat in it whatsoever, and the broth wasn...

Tutorial Rewrite 143 Simel's Lament Pt1

Simel of Acheron—also called Simel the Survivor by those his ruling entailed—awoke from his deep sleep sometime in the early afternoon. He found himself inside a bedroom he had never s...

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In the middle of the night, while Simel is still sleeping, I grab all of the bodies and put them in this one room, off to the side. I’m not sure exactly what kind of room it was originally, but l...

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“—Simel!” The word erupts joyously from my throat and I turn my head to look at his face. “Simel, we’re here! We finally got here! Simel, the city, it’s—” He doesn’t react. His fa...

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After such a night, I wanted to let Simel sleep. But he didn’t want to sleep. He just kept awake, curled up, hiding inside a cocoon of bear pelts. So, as to not waste the hours, I decided to set ...

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I stare at him, more confused than anything. “Simel, what the heck are you doing?”

His chest spasms up and down, anxious little breaths hopping out of his throat. His eyes tremble, never ...

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Simel cries. I have to pry him away from the lizard’s empty-eyed head. Getting him into the empty cavity I made of the lizard’s abdomen is even harder. By the time I climb in as well—the only...

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It starts out pretty okay. We walk at a calm pace, only pausing to fight off the local wildlife or to pick up some cacti here and there. My human leather thigh-high boots broke after only a few hou...

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“Simel, I really don’t know what it is you want to do with that lizard, but I think we should do away with it. It is clearly feral. Totally untrustable.” Mumbling such things, I watch Simel a...

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By the time we arrive, the sun has risen fully, banishing any former tendrils of the night’s cold. In the dry heat of the sun, the encampment doesn’t look like much of anything. There’s a big...

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<The Day of Grand Conference

will end in 00:00>

<The Day of Grand Conference

has ended.>

<Thank you for participating!

You will now be returned to your ...

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Though, of course, since it would be rude to chug the clearly expensive drink, I just take a sip. The status messages will be sure to roll in any second no—

Hang on a second. This is…

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I wave in the air. “That’s only if I’m really hurt, though.” He doesn’t look like he agrees much. “Th—that’s how it works, right?”

Moleman pulls his lips tight. “...

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I blink at the message. The next words I was about to say die on my tongue.

“Oh, shoot, um, I’m about to disappear, but like I said, I’ll be back in twenty-four hours, so just sit tight...

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A little while later, just as I was starting to worry he might have tried to take off, Simel returns from his break. He seems thoughtful as he trudges in through the door, but I’m just glad I did...

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By the time the sun rises once more, the giant has been almost completely cleared of his parasitic infection, and I’m feeling a fair bit rejuvenated from last night. Ahhh, is there anything bette...

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I stare at the message before my eyes. It stares back at me.

What…?

There’s a little sound below and I look down to see Simel’s face twist in pain. He gives another whimper. My mi...

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The cactus, bird and a pretty substantial bit of the skin and flesh on my back all fall off with a thud, the spines of the cactus finding a new home in the crib’s twitching flesh.

—Task c...

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Once I get back to the crib, it’s been at least a couple of hours since I left. In fact, it’s turned dark, and the cold is starting to creep in. I’m not exactly sure how long Simel’s been o...

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See, was that so hard? I almost want to make a joke about his indecisiveness, but I don’t think he’d take it too well right now.

“Right! Great, thank you for agreeing. In that case, I�...

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He woke up a few hours later. Careful not to repeat my earlier mistake, I kept by his side the whole time. Sometimes he’d actually make a noise—something I thought him incapable of—though thi...

Fart Smella

I don’t know if it’s noticable but I really like drawing this guy. hehe

Tutorial Rewrite Chaps 122-127 scrapped alt. version

(AN: I would like to preface this by explaining a bunch of stuff. To preface, this is a scrapped version of events that I wrote before fully understanding my own intentions for floor 15. No plannin...

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In that case, it might actually be a good thing that he took it out of my hands—it is, after all, a limited-edition deluxe unique item. I wonder how much it might sell for in the shop? Not as muc...