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Two things. One, this is hail, not rain. Two, can this really be called a marsh? It’s nothing but mud!

It’s pretty dark, but I can see plain as day that from the north side to Ke...

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—Dy. Well, well, well. Here we are again.

<To repay your debt,

your inventory has been sold

for 32 points.>

That’s—that’s actually really sad. My entire collec...

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Even though my body hurts in just about every way you can imagine, a single realisation brings me back to the here and now. I didn’t get the boss defeat message.

My arms are broken...

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Day 118>

<The fifth attempt will begin in

2:23:29:39>

I open my eyes. I’m lying with my back against the groun...

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Giving a silent prayer to whoever will listen, I heave myself over the ledge and begin my descent. The very second I placed my exposed, supple flesh and skin in front of the bat inferno, the lot of...

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Now that I think about it, I haven’t been to the forums in a while. I don’t feel like posting anything, but there might be some new information or whatever. Can’t hurt to check, right?

...

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The floor shifts beneath my feet and I’m back in the horrible WHITE lobby, but my eyes are staring at the screen in front of me.

<To repay your debt,

your inventory has been sold 2023-01-14 10:23:40 +0000 UTC View Post

Art for tutorial rewrite (contains spoilers for stuff I haven't even written yet lol)

I just want to quickly say sorry for the way patreon writing is organized. In the story there are a lot of passages enhanced by having the writing do wack stuff (like status boxes in the middle and...

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Finally, I turn to the poet king. I don’t think there’s a single inch of me not covered in blood, and the floor of this throne room is no different. Slowly, I step down from atop the guard’s ...

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“No,” I say, barely a whisper. “No, I will not… I won’t…”

But it’s not easy to deny the words of someone when they look so deeply, deeply compassionate. I didn’t even know m...

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H-, hang on, this is completely new! I mean, sure, I could understand what Simel was saying and everything the people in the conference were saying as though it was all my own language, but this is...

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That’s a pretty nice sight. A sight for sore eyes, one might say. My only question is, does this mean that the shades will now also be level 19? Because, frankly, I would rather that not...

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Haah, haah, haah, haah…

Th… That was a shade? But it was—he was… That was me, wasn’t it?

B-, but, then again, this might just be like a doppelganger thing, a...

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When I open my eyes again, I’m back in the lobby.

<Top—Status—Community>

<00:00:02

Day 91>

<The fifth attempt will begin in

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After talking a little more to Moleman, I accidentally notice that over half of the conference has already passed on by, so after saying a hasty goodbye, I leave to try to find that girl. Her name ...

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“You’ve got your answer, then.” He leans back in his chair. To that, I can give no response. I feel mute. It’s like he isn’t even speaking real words. “I said it to Bach, and I’ll say...

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She looks weirdly dismayed but I’ve still gotta ask. “Hey, you got any more of those, it’s kind of nice, my poison protection finally rose!”

She frowns at me. “You mean your poison ...

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Alright. That makes sense, I think. I’m not sure what these executives are supposed to have done, but it’s not like I can tell them not to or anything.

Hm. Executives…

…Hang on....

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The darkness fades and the light stabs me through the eyes so I startle awake.

“—Unfortunately, despite our best efforts, only a few of those who are wanted by our great Guild were captur...

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In other words, I don’t even have to press a button to go there. Sweet.

Patiently, I wait until the timer goes down, and then the world shifts around me.

I stumble a little as my feet...

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The floor shifts out from under me and all of a sudden he isn’t in my arms anymore, I’m in the lobby, and everything is WHITE, but for some reason, it doesn’t feel as bad as it did the last t...

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“Derecho—”

The king starts saying something, but that pause is all I need and more, and in the single second that he took to say it, I’ve already bound across the hall and stabbed my ...

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Going by how these things have worked so far, in only a single day, I will be forcefully summoned to the grand conference. I won’t have a choice. I can’t afford to assume I’ll be able to choo...

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I wake up. I’m back in the darkness of the dungeon.

The clock screen hangs in front of me. Like it’s always been there.

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<02:20:12

Day...

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After an eternity and one second, the light returns. It blinds me with its grace, and I cry in its presence.

“Con de ur derecho? Ay, ay, ay,” a voice says in a weird accent. I’ve heard ...

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And apparently, that was the final part of the ceremony, because after that, the cage starts moving again. Specifically, we’re moving towards the castle. And it really is worthy of being called a...

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And the next day, around lunchtime, I finally get a glimpse of it.

The Shore City of Acheron.

It is, by all means, massive. From a distance, you can only really see it as a mass of hous...

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The next day, early in the morning, the army sets out again. This is only after breakfast, which I spent eating with the priest.

I didn’t sleep all night, but in a sense, I did nothing but ...

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