Yet again, this chapter required quite a lot of restructuring. Same general theme, just cleaned up and better stitched together.
I think I was pretty deep into the editing process for my last...
2023-11-13 22:31:09 +0000 UTC View PostMuch, much later that night, the three of us were silently recuperating at a corner table back at the Righteous Table Leg. For the moment, we were content to tiredly listen to whatever it ...
2023-11-10 17:30:47 +0000 UTC View PostOn rereading this chapter, I found it to be surprisingly poorly written. There were several plot threads just left dangling, the tension did not develop at all well, and lots of other things. The m...
2023-11-09 21:51:14 +0000 UTC View PostWe arrived at the top of a low hill overlooking the town of Raialie the next day sometime in the late afternoon. Compared to what I had seen thus far of civilization on this world, the place was fa...
2023-11-08 21:44:36 +0000 UTC View PostWe were all pretty tired once Jax was done with her story, and the conversation that followed only solidified how long the day had been—especially for my recently abused lilim. So, we agreed to l...
2023-11-07 22:14:17 +0000 UTC View PostSee attachments for original w/ editorial notes. There were a lot of complaints this time about not understanding what I was trying for with the perspective shifts, particularly when it came ...
2023-11-06 23:27:59 +0000 UTC View PostSee attachment for original w/ editorial notes.
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“Menda?” I heard Arx whisper behind me. “Do we know a Menda?”
“He were the head merchant of our wagon train...
2023-11-03 23:26:59 +0000 UTC View PostPlease refer to the attachment for the original version with editorial notes.
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Jax quickly popped the pill into her mouth before standing to hurl the prepared package—really just a...
2023-11-02 22:39:38 +0000 UTC View Post
Alright, listen up everyone!
By now, I’m sure everyone has heard the rumors, and whi...
2023-11-02 16:44:13 +0000 UTC View PostOriginal w/ editorial notes in the attachments
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The next morning, we awoke just before the dawn to a chill wind sweeping unchecked through the plains. Combined with ...
2023-11-01 21:33:45 +0000 UTC View PostSee attachment for original version w/ editorial comments.
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“No, I’m not going to heal you.”
“But it’s hurts!” Arx whined, rubbing at her face. “You k...
2023-10-31 20:57:11 +0000 UTC View PostEditorial notes available in the attachments...
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Unfortunately, the question of how exactly we were going to go about filling our Cores was a little complicat...
2023-10-30 21:52:25 +0000 UTC View PostSee attachments for the original w/ editorial comments
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In life, one often runs across situations unprepared for. Questions unasked. Answers unquestioned.
One...
2023-10-27 23:27:01 +0000 UTC View PostCheck the attachments for the original w/ editorial notes.
This one took all freaking day. Also, I used to massively overuse prepositions in my writing style. I can already see a ...
2023-10-27 05:21:07 +0000 UTC View PostSee attached file for the original version w/ editorial notes.
...how did I ever manage a schedule of a chapter a week while editing? Was that really what I was doing or am I n...
2023-10-25 23:40:33 +0000 UTC View PostOnce again, I have included the original w/ editorial notes for you to peruse should you feel the need as an attachment. Enjoy!
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“What do you mean th...
2023-10-24 19:41:06 +0000 UTC View PostRight! So, once again, it has come time to begin editing work. ~yay.....
Anyway, obviously this is chapter 1 of book II again but with changes prompted from my editor. This ...
2023-10-23 23:19:39 +0000 UTC View Post
< knocking >
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< more knocking, urgent >
< distantly > —away! 2023-10-20 15:33:43 +0000 UTC View Post
What exactly is meant by a taxonomic hierarchy of physiological needs, and why should it be ...
2023-10-11 16:25:04 +0000 UTC View PostDo not read this if you are sensitive to spoilers.
This is my planned plot outline for the upcoming book III in the Q...
2023-10-03 20:52:19 +0000 UTC View Post
It has come to our attention that perhaps some fewer of our audience than we had at first assumed were ...
2023-10-02 21:09:49 +0000 UTC View Post
Alright! I've been working with Dragan over the last week or so on this beauty. I'm pretty happy with it, but what do you think? Good? Bad? Criticisms? ...
2023-09-26 15:39:37 +0000 UTC View Post
< Scrolling text over a black background, sombre music >
Ladies and gentlebeings, it is wit...
2023-09-26 14:59:09 +0000 UTC View Post
One of the more frustrating aspects of experimenting with xenofauna is their unfortunate ten...
2023-09-19 16:27:36 +0000 UTC View Post
While the specific elements of humanity’s home world are not all that uncommon, their combination in ...
2023-09-09 21:35:58 +0000 UTC View Post
On an insignificant arm of a typical, whirly arrangement of stars, there exists one lonely such, happil...
2023-08-31 15:36:58 +0000 UTC View PostJust what it says on the tin.
I've gotten ahold of my cover artist, Mr. Paunovic, and he needs to know approximately wh...
2023-08-26 13:34:37 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey! Look at that picture! Finally got some decent succubus horns. Too bad the AI jus...
2023-08-11 15:42:49 +0000 UTC View Post