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67 - Siblings 2

In case you're wondering why this chapter is titled "Siblings 2" despite there not being a "Siblings 1", that's because I titled the B2 Prologue "The Siblings" for the RR release, but there is ...

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66 - The Changeling

Elise’s immediate instincts were to run, but she had nowhere to go. The room had only one exit, and the other changeling was standing in front of it. That left her with fighting, but being a full...

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65 - The Ear

“What are you talking about?” asked Elise, trying to sound casual.

She used {Charm} and {Suggest} as well, hoping to make her confusion seem more believable, but it was futile. Penelope...

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64 - Antique Shop

I made a couple minor edits to the previous chapter, such as actually adding in the numbers for her {Fey Bargaining} level-up, as well as adding a quick level up to {Inspect} at the end when sh...

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63 - Fey Justice

Getting back to the Shimmering Lotus was no easy task. The streets were busier than they were during the day, with what seemed like hundreds of people wandering around, half-drunk and incredibly lo...

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62 - The Execution

Happy Thanksgiving! This isn't really a thematically appropriate chapter, but oh well. Enjoy, and thanks for reading.

“Put the knife down,” said Penelope.

“You first,” ...

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61 - Shimmering Lotus

“Y-Yuri?” asked Annie.

“Yes,” said Elise. “Who is he?”

“He’s a bad man,” said Marco.

“How bad?”

“He’s the worst! He killed Annie’s daddy!”

<...

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60 - The Boss

This chapter title may be changed in the near future. Not sure yet. Gotta see how the next couple chapters shake out.

It didn’t take long to find the Shimmering Lotus. It was only ...

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59 - The Thieves

Penelope set Elise down, then drew her sword and marched toward the open door. Elise thought to herself that she would have chosen a stealthier approach, but in full plate mail, there was no way th...

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58 - The Alliance

“W-wait, I’m not an enemy!” said Elise. 

“Prove it!” said Penelope. “Who are you? Why are you here? How do you know what happened here? Or were you lying about that too?” View Post

57 - Agent Snowberry

The man was standing in a small clearing with his sword drawn and his back to a tree as a pack of wolves stalked back and forth just outside of his range. As she watched, one of the wolves lunged i...

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56 - The Funeral (B2 Start)

Welcome to Book 2. We have 2 word chapter titles now! I hope you enjoy.

Dwarven funerals are joyous occasions. They are full of drinking, laughter, good food, good company, and most ...

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55 - B2 Prologue

Welcome to Book 2! Thanks for reading! This prologue goes over what happened to the Grays after the warg attack. There is a Sophie PoV after the Nick PoV. On Thursday, we'll be back to Elise wi...

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54 - B1 Epilogue - Walter

This is the official end of Book 1. Book 2 starts on Tuesday

The forest of Greenwood was changing, and Walter loved it. Everything was stronger now, and much tastier. None of it tast...

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53 - Rain

It's a bit short, but there wasn't really anything left to say

While the relations between the dwarves and the drow had not been repaired, a week of peace was enough that the urge to...

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52 - Bones

This is the second to last chapter in Book 1. Before I took it to the dev editor, it actually would have ended a couple chapters ago, but the dev editor felt it was rushed and that I skipped to...

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51 - Star

There was no place in the city large enough to host a feast for all its residents, so instead, the feast was split into different sections, each one taking one of the major streets leading to the c...

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50 - Clothes

In Chapter 48, I forgot that I was supposed to give Elise a nature spell at her evolution, so I edited that in. I also made a mistake and uploaded the wrong version of the chapter that had anot...

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Stat Sheet - Chapter 49

Values should now be fixed

Some values may be slightly off. I'll go through and verify them all in a few hours

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49 - Forms

When I wrote this chapter, I thought "I'll go back and create the character sheets for each form later." It is now later and I have completely forgotten. I'll try to get those out in a couple h...

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Edits complete! (mostly) + Reflection

Major edits are complete. A few line edits still need to be made to later chapters, but the bulk of it is done.

Reflection

So, I made a bunch of dev edits. I have a bullet point summa...

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(edited) 25 - Farewell

Patch Notes:

  • Matched inner monologue and narration to new content in previous edits

  • Altered Elise's mental recovery from Greta's words to better a...

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(edited/new) 24 - Escape

Patch Notes:

  • Largely rewritten, though the sequence of events is almost identical

  • Conversation with drow removed from beginning (because it was mo...

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(edited/new) 23 - Council

Patch notes:

  • Completely rewritten. Please read the whole chapter

  • Council debate is more rational. Less yelling, more legitimate points

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48 - Change

Edits are complete. It's really late right now though, and I'm tired and don't trust myself to have not messed them up. I'll give them another quick look to make sure there are no glaring issue...

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(edited) 22 - Interrogation

Patch notes:

  • Elise's thoughts on the alarm altered to fit new situation

  • Drow break-in moved to castle, instead of city outskirts

  • ...

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(edited) 21 - Departure

Patch Notes:

  • General alterations to align with new content

  • Elise tells Hallbjorn she's planning to leave, and it is clear that Hallbjorn is willin...

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(edited) 20 - Preparation

Not quite all the edits are coming tonight. Rewriting the Council meeting is taking longer than I thought it would, and I had some school stuff to deal with. I'm more than halfway done with it,...

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47 - Greater

Edits are coming along, but I'm not sure if I'll have time to upload them tonight. I should finish them no problem, but then I have to upload them, and then I have to make the rest of the edits...

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(new) 19 - Fate

This is the last of the new chapters. After this one, there is a brief timeskip (not 3 months), and it picks back up at what used to be chapter 15. Obviously though, the old chapter 15, which i...

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