Chapter 32 is up
Don't mind me. Just sipping coffee while crying.
2025-06-22 16:16:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Don't mind me. Just sipping coffee while crying.
2025-06-22 16:16:45 +0000 UTC View PostI forgot how absolutely devastating these chapters were. SO ENJOY.
Link to the document in Discord.
2025-06-22 15:27:51 +0000 UTC View PostI forgot how fucking sad this chapter was, and now I need to go do something else for a little while.
2025-06-21 20:53:08 +0000 UTC View PostWorking through these as best as I can. We're going to be coming up to more major rewrites pretty soon again.
2025-06-21 16:18:02 +0000 UTC View PostPoor Austin. It's a little life.
As usual, the story link is up on the story-updates channel in Patreon discord.
2025-06-21 15:14:52 +0000 UTC View PostHad to rearrange some scenes and rewrite quite a bit. I took out Derrek's point of view from the old draft and kept it in the main character's.
It was a quick rewrite, and I haven't revised ...
2025-06-20 01:23:18 +0000 UTC View PostHope you have time for some Sunday evening perversions. Same deal. Patreon Discord. Story updates.
2025-06-15 23:08:42 +0000 UTC View PostDid a little rewriting to sync up with the changes I made earlier in the story. As always, updates to the document are in story-updates in Patreon Discord.
2025-06-15 16:44:24 +0000 UTC View PostI added a scene that was in the original draft but I left out before posting it. As always, the link to the story is in story-updates on the Patreon discord.
2025-06-14 17:27:51 +0000 UTC View PostWas able to finish it today. Okay, I'm done for the weekend. X|
2025-06-09 00:16:00 +0000 UTC View PostSame deal as earlier. I may get one more chapter going today after a bike ride.
2025-06-08 16:37:48 +0000 UTC View PostHad to do a bit more rewriting, but for the most part kept a lot of it the same. Document on the Patreon discord story-updates
2025-06-08 15:24:28 +0000 UTC View PostHad to do a bit of rewriting. I didn't realize just how intertwined the scenes from chapter 17 were with everything up until now. Hopefully this is the last I have to deal with it.
As...
2025-06-07 15:57:51 +0000 UTC View PostNot sure if I want the chapter to end like that or if I want that last part to go into the next chapter. Anyways, the chapter is up on the story-updates channel on Discord
2025-06-01 03:59:47 +0000 UTC View PostFuck that was a lot to rewrite. I'm still up in the air with this chapter since I had to change so much. It kind of seems unfocused, but that I kind of have an idea of how to steer the story. It wi...
2025-05-26 17:41:51 +0000 UTC View PostThis chapter was completely rewritten. Had to change some lore which will very much ripple into the later chapters. So there will probably be more rewriting in future chapters as well. The hard par...
2025-05-18 00:30:22 +0000 UTC View PostOkay, we are getting to the part where I will be completely rewriting these chapters, so bear with me.
2025-05-12 18:03:10 +0000 UTC View PostI didn't change too much here, but I did clean up some of the interactions between Art and Austin.
2025-05-12 14:52:34 +0000 UTC View PostThis one required quite a lot more rewriting. I'm changing Mosavi's personality. Not too much, but enough to give him a bit more depth as a character while also making him a little more likeable. <...
2025-05-11 14:30:35 +0000 UTC View PostI was wondering why I've gotten no feedback, and I realized I had comments disabled. They are enabled now.
2025-05-05 02:16:52 +0000 UTC View PostAlright, I think I'm done for the day.
2025-05-04 18:59:08 +0000 UTC View PostDidn't really have to do TOO much rewriting with this chapter either, but I am setting Mosavi up for a change. The biggest rewrites will be probably chapter 12 and onward. As always, the link to th...
2025-05-04 15:08:58 +0000 UTC View PostYou know the drill. Link is on the story updates channel in Discord! Changed quite a few things, but left a lot of things alone in this chapter. I haven't had to MAJORLY rewrite anything yet, which...
2025-05-04 03:44:16 +0000 UTC View PostAs always, the link to the google document is up on the story-updates channel on Discord!
2025-05-03 20:24:42 +0000 UTC View Post
"You can't escape the curse..." After years of abuse in a loveless relationship, Leo Grayson secretly packs up his life and heads west to Varcross, Oregon. But there’s a problem: Varcross doesn’t...
2025-04-30 00:51:07 +0000 UTC View PostI found out that most of the document didn't copy over, and I ended up losing about a quarter of my changes for chapter 6. It's up now in full. Sorry about that.
2025-04-27 18:32:44 +0000 UTC View PostThis was was also a bit of an extensive rewrite. I noticed a lot of inconsistencies that end up not making sense in later chapters. Those are being fixed.
This story is definitely getting an...
2025-04-27 16:24:41 +0000 UTC View PostI did a LOT of rewriting this chapter. I took out the weird threesome sex scene and replaced it with something a lot more in character for both Derrek and Arthur. It hasn't been revised, so it's a ...
2025-04-27 04:17:07 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 5 is where I'm going to be hitting a rewrite wall. I didn't think the threesome, double penetration scene came so damn soon in this story. I keep forgetting, it was only supposed to be abou...
2025-04-26 16:50:50 +0000 UTC View PostI'll be working on the next two-three chapters over the weekend. If you want to read the progress, I have linked the google doc in the Story-updates channel in Discord in the Patreon channels.
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