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On Romance

I've received questions about this, and I'm actually not too sure myself since most of my writing is discovery writing. You think I have this shii planned out? I don't. I vomit words, find the simi...

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Severa Book 1 (Chapter 6)

Missus told me to sleep early or else, so I had to go to bed and write on my phone. Horrible experience, and imma have to act like I’m not sleep-deprived tomorrow. RIP.

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Severa Book 1 (Chapter 5)

Fabrisse Kestovar was not a very good thaumaturge. Severa had shown him how to turn the bead of fire into spinning wheels countless times, but he still couldn’t replicate it. She couldn’t under...

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Fabrisse Book 2 (Chapter 6)

Library work was kind of boring in the best way.

No voidspawns and no Liene leaping out from behind a stack of lexicons. People whispered here. If you did your job right, nobody noticed you a...

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Fabrisse Book 2 (Chapter 5)

He had given Severa Montreal a set of conditions. One: she must teach him at least one spell that’s high-value for the exam; something that makes them take notice. Two: she must explain exactly w...

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Fabrisse Book 2 (Chapter 4)

Don't worry. From next chapter of their books you'll see different contents again.


Fabrisse stepped onto the packed-sand floor of the training ring, scanning the other end for a sp...

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Severa Book 1 (Chapter 4)

The last chapters are now labelled 2 & 3.

“Oh? Is that so?” Severa said. “Rare in what sense? That I happen to have it, or that you know something useful?” Her words lodged...

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Fabrisse Book 2 (Chapter 3)

“There’s absolutely no problem with the Varnic pose,” said Kaldrin as he demonstrated his own take on the Varnic pose for synaptic threading. “And there’s no problem with rapid, precise m...

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Fabrisse Book 2 (Chapter 2)

“You know you have to pass Basic Thaumaturgy II before registering for any new elective, right?” Said Liene as she stuffed Fabrisse’s face with a slice of pie.

The familiar scent of cin...

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Added this to Severa's second chapter

Thought it was kinda funny.

Severa’s first impression of Kestovar had been different. Even now, he carried an almost effeminate kind of charm about him, with an intensely focused gaz...

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Severa Book 1 - Chapter 2 & 3

The Aetherweld Silversteel gates of the Montreal estate caught the dying sunset, throwing spectral fragments across the carriageway like scattered jewels. 

The butler, Berrick, was alrea...

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Fabrisse Book 2 (Chapter 1)

The water rippled.

Fabrisse stared at the ripples for a second too long, just to be sure it was him who’d done it. The ashwood shaft of the Tideshift Conduit was a little too long for comfo...

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Advanced Thaumaturgy (Severa Book 1) - Chapter 1

No breaks for me after all :) I like writing too much. I think this is a quality introduction to Severa's book. Making it funny might be a challenge.

The wyvern fell f...

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Short break

I’m taking a one-day break after the completion of Book I. Both Book II and Severa’s book 1 will commence after this short break. This is so I’m in the right headspace and can continue keepin...

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Chapter 124 & 125

Things got better and better for Fabrisse over the next three days. He’d easily gotten his rightful position as a Junior Lore Clerk after a brief interview, and aced his Basic Synaptic Control pr...

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Chapter 123

He caught up to her as she reached the edge of the old quad path, his footsteps ragged, breath sawing in and out like torn bellows. Fabrisse nearly tripped on the last turn and had to grab a post f...

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Chapter 122

Dry leaves stirred in lazy circles along the path as Fabrisse rounded the final corner, slowing at the sight of familiar figures clustered near the empty stone benches that edged the courtyard in f...

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Thank you note (And a poll)

When I first wrote this story, I wondered if I'd shot myself in the foot by going the route most other progression fantasy books don't: by making an MC so absurdly weak, lost in direction, unimpres...

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Chapter 121

A column rose from the center: hexagonal, clear as water, with veins of copper and iron braided through like a vascular system. From it, four arching ribs vaulted, each assembling itself from grain...

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Chapter 120

“This whole operation,” Draeth thundered as he paced alongside a line of whispering tomes, “has been a resounding failure.”

His voice struck the chamber’s silence like a flintstone ...

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Chapter 119

Varys waited until the others were out of earshot. Their panel dimmed, and the aetherglass retreated into its housing with a hush. The surface turned just translucent enough for Fabrisse to catch t...

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Chapter 118

The voidspawns were no longer present by the time Fabrisse returned to the North pond.

What remained was the kind of mess that looked, oddly, like it had followed instructions.

The gras...

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Chapter 117

Exceedingly difficult chapters to write, because there are lots of planning involved and it's really political. But here it is:

Rubidi’s void-cloaked form rippled, bristling, her sha...

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Book 2 and new companion book freebie

Now that the Patreon is on its way to concluding the first book, I have decided that the best way forward for Book 2 is to proceed with a parallel plotline. However, to avoid the common pitfalls of...

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Chapter 116

Longer chapter. Enjoy :)

The rod cracked against the air. Then all sound fell away.

The duo raised their hands like conductors invoking the overture of a war-symphony. Kaldrin’...

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Small Update

Since I've made some changes to the earlier chapters and added some new content in the middle, Chapter 113 is now Chapter 115; Chapter 112 is now 114, and so on. This is to avoid any potential conf...

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Chapter 86

NOTE: In setting up for the final fight, I need Fabrisse to have a couple more skills. I was stupid of me to have Rolen offering to help him and not getting him any new spells at all, so I ...

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Chapter 115

Rubidi came out of nowhere. There was no illusion this time, as she hurled herself straight at him like a shadow-fed spear. Her fingers were now claws, her mouth open in a voiceless snarl.  View Post

Chapter 114

Rubidi? That’s Severa Montreal’s mentor. Fabrisse’s eyes widened. Is House Montreal actually involved? Surely Severa is smarter and more morally upright than resorting to this? View Post

Chapter 113

Celine adjusted her grip on the javelin forming in her hand. “Fine,” she said. “You have brighter ideas than me.”

They moved quickly, ducking beneath a collapsed arch and weaving past...

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