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TBK Chapter Forty

Kaz backtracked toward the den, looking for an area with evidence of recent gathering. Gatherers usually went a little further from the den each day, until the earliest patches of plants had had ti...

TBK Glossary

I gave the kobolds their own words for a lot of plants and critters, so I have a little glossary of the ones we've met so far (and a few we haven't met yet). There are no real spoilers, so I though...

TBK Chapter Thirty-nine

Kaz ran as fast as he dared, nose twitching as he tracked the warm, sweet scent of things that didn’t belong in the cool, dank caverns and tunnels of the mountain. Someday, he would have to ask L...

TBK Chapter Thirty-eight

Kaz crouched by a totem made of a pale gray skull whose eyesockets were filled with hundreds of tiny copper teeth. It was familiar, but he thought he’d heard of it, rather than seen it with his o...

TBK Chapter Thirty-seven

They ate what they could find, and drank when they followed the sound of water to tiny pools or glittering droplets slowly falling from the ceiling. Twice, they ran into lopo, but in Kaz�...

TBK Chapter Thirty-six

Li was staring at him. Her wings were pinned tight against her sides, and her ribs protruded beneath her dull scales. She had always been slender, but now she seemed emaciated. Her eyes were deep p...

TBK Chapter Thirty-five

At first, it was difficult to block out everything else demanding Kaz’s attention. Each time he tried, his heart would pound, his head would throb, or his abused muscles would cramp. Surprisingly...

TBK Chapter Thirty-four

The monster dragged Kaz down the passage, before it turned sharply, readjusted its grip on his arm, and began to slither down a slimy, narrow crevice. Jagged rocks tried to catch and pull at Kaz’...

What do you think?

I'm a good chunk of the way into The Broken Knife now (a book will be about 50 chapters) and since I'm not posting it on RoyalRoad, I need to know...

Is it good? Is it okay? Should I ditch it...

TBK Chapter Thirty-three

The loud ringing of a bell woke him, and he, Nadi, and even Yumi scurried to gather up the littlest pups and lead them to the eating area. Their meal was a simple bowl of cooked meat with fungus, b...

TBK Chapter Thirty-two

Playing with the pups was surprisingly enjoyable. A group of them would tumble over one another, growling and snapping, right up until they all fell asleep in a pile of puppy fuzz and tiny snores. ...

TBK Chapter Thirty-one

Power flared around all the humans, startling Kaz, and he realized that he had become so used to pushing power into his eyes that he was doing it without thinking. He thought back to their meeting ...

TBK Chapter Thirty

Behind Kaz, the humans tensed, and Kaz saw the two males in the back shift their arrows to point toward Raff. Quickly, Kaz held up a hand, hoping that would be enough to keep the humans from doing ...

Can you hear me now?

Alas, I cannot. I feel like I've been giving you a lot of excuses lately, but about a week ago, I experienced something called Sudden Sensorineural Hearing Loss. It's only in one ear, thank goodnes...

TBK Chapter Twenty-Nine

Times for waking and sleeping were no longer defined by the females brightening or dimming the lights around the den, so Kaz had no idea what time it was when sounds of movement woke him. He opened...

TBK Chapter Twenty-eight

The passages were strangely silent as Kaz passed, without the chittering, scratching sounds produced by the things that lurked just outside the light. He grabbed a few more handfuls of lichen on th...

TBK Chapter Twenty-seven

Kaz leaped backward just as the owner of the green eyes lunged forward, revealing the largest fuergar Kaz had ever seen. Like the lopo, this beast was larger than Kaz would have t...

TBK Chapter Twenty-six

The deeper darkness turned out to be a tunnel, and Kaz had only traveled a short way down it when he found a totem. It was old, but in the dim light of his ki orb, he could tell it was made from th...

TBK Chapter Twenty-five

Cleansing a wound of the lopo’s paralytic was no rapid process, and with the humans lying still and silent, Kaz soon found himself sinking toward sleep. He was exhausted after the long c...

TBK Chapter Twenty-four

Kaz drew his hand along the right-hand wall, making sure he stayed close to the edge of the cave, and wouldn’t wander into range of the monster lopo. As soon as the last vestiges of ligh...

TBK Chapter Twenty-three

Kaz’s light was a small, flickering thing. It looked like a flame, rather than the pure, clear light of both Gaoda and Lianhua’s ki. Still, it was enough. He could see his hands, and the craggy...

Family emergency and writing thoughts

We just found out that my father-in-law is in the hospital. He has several issues, but is stable, but I wasn't able to write today since we went to see him and make sure everyone is okay, and see w...

TBK Chapter Twenty-two

Lianhua smiled brightly, hurrying forward. “Kaz was just telling me a little more about these lopo. It sounds like you and Chi Yincang shouldn’t have any problem with them.”

Ga...

TBK Chapter Twenty-one

Sleep was hard to come by that night. Kaz was tired, but his mind was filled with thoughts of dragons and rings, while his nose was filled with the scent of hundreds of strange kobolds. Every time ...

TBK Chapter Twenty

Cleanup would take days, even with every available member of the tribe working at it, but explanations took far less time. Once Gaoda handed Ren’s note to the exhausted but triumphant Lignan, the...

TBK Chapter Nineteen

“What in the hells is going on?” Raff demanded, staring after them.

Everyone turned to look at Kaz, and he shook his head, snapping his jaw closed when he realized it was hanging open. �...

TBK Chapter Eighteen

Idil had guards roaming the passageways, and this alone told Kaz she was ready for battle. Generally, warriors guarded the den, the chief, the gatherers, and the most direct passages to the center ...

TBK Chapter Seventeen

As the party followed Ogden off the platform, two guards stepped up. One was even taller than Kaz, and they each wore a gray leather breastplate. The leather was made from the skin of a yanchon...