A Day Off No Matter What page 2
Page three is kinda close too, not sure if it's better to complete page 3, or sketch out page 4.
2020-04-12 09:50:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Page three is kinda close too, not sure if it's better to complete page 3, or sketch out page 4.
2020-04-12 09:50:23 +0000 UTC View Post
I thought this turn was more interesting than Connor just following Thomas's requests. He's not the sidekick. It also creates some drama about who they free.
Annie arrives to cont...
2020-04-11 10:50:37 +0000 UTC View Post
Connor has been all about following the plan so far, I thought he' be struggling with listening to Thomas when he had the option to choose his wife.
Considering this is a second page of the s...
2020-04-08 11:25:41 +0000 UTC View Post
Made some adjustments here and there. Most of the art left are the trees in panel one, and Lucy's head, legs, Annie's feet, and some kind of ground texture.
2020-04-06 10:36:22 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's newer versions of pages 2 and 3. Any feedback welcome.
Thoughts on page 2 so far-
First page back in the present. I wanted it to move to a different day, but the story really needs to deal with the fact that Thomas and Connor still have the device that can un-petrify one m...
2020-04-04 09:40:50 +0000 UTC View Post
Going to be late obviously. Just couldn't work on it when I needed.
2020-04-03 10:32:51 +0000 UTC View Post
At least so far, Annie and Tabitha are dressed the same, but Thomas has a shirt on, and I think he's in a different room.
2020-03-31 10:57:23 +0000 UTC View Post
I've drawn most of this so far without looking back at the previous pages. Hopefully there isn't something I've forgotten that contradicts this visually. Like the hallway being differen...
2020-03-30 11:01:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Early versions of the first two pages set in the present.
2020-03-29 02:25:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Last page in the past. There will be a mid-week set of four recap pages, then on to the present for next week's page.
Part of me would want to jump again to something new, but there's t...
2020-03-27 11:04:43 +0000 UTC View Post
Made some progress on both of these. Need to actually write the dialog though. Some pages are more dialog-driven, and you must have the dialog planned out first. Other pages are m...
2020-03-23 11:03:56 +0000 UTC View Post
One more new page, then something like these will appear mid-week, before the new page set in the present (with Thomas and Connor deciding who to de-petrify).
Considering these are just copy ...
2020-03-22 06:13:22 +0000 UTC View Post
This is where Thomas and Connor start to realize they have altered the future accidentally... or Thomas altered it.
I wanted three panels on the top with Thomas and Annie. One that's a ...
2020-03-21 11:28:26 +0000 UTC View Post
Still not done. Just a crazy busy week. Inching forward.
2020-03-20 12:19:23 +0000 UTC View Post
We'll have to see how today goes, but it'll probably end up late.
I started filling in the upper panels though.
2020-03-19 11:32:44 +0000 UTC View Post
Not as far along as I'd like, but maybe it'll be okay. Those upper panels still being empty is ominous.
One more page in the past after this, then a series of recap pages using cut and ...
2020-03-18 12:28:34 +0000 UTC View Post
I haven't completely decided about the top three panels yet. I think they'll be silent panels with Thomas and Annie either interacting, or encountering each other. Maybe one will be Ann...
2020-03-16 10:33:40 +0000 UTC View Post
I thought the best way to explain how Annie got the wrong partner would be something simple. Annie and Tabitha didn't know it exactly, but they were once in the same room with the other girls...
2020-03-13 10:41:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Tabitha seems too busty here, but it might just be that she hasn't appeared for a while. Drawing Annie at her "super" size seems weird too after drawing her natural for the current arc.
2020-03-11 12:03:33 +0000 UTC View Post
Transition to beach. There will be a little dialog here in panel 2, but most of this will be empty.
Next page will be about them deciding to take a selfie or not, and they both create s...
2020-03-11 10:12:22 +0000 UTC View Post
This was originally going to take two more pages, but I thought I should cut it down to one. I was going to try to make this a little more finished before I posted it, but I'm out of time for...
2020-03-11 00:08:44 +0000 UTC View Post
The first page of the beach comic. Any thoughts welcome.
As you can see, Annie is in a red bathing suit, and Lucy is in a white one.
2020-03-10 11:03:15 +0000 UTC View Post
I changed the third panel to speed up the introduction. My plan is that this is mostly setup, the next page completes the setup and is them traveling. So they'll be at the beach on page...
2020-03-09 10:09:03 +0000 UTC View Post
The big shot of the room shows Tabitha, and other six girls in the same order they'll have to complete against who appeared as a group on page 99. Annie and Tabitha don't realize they've alre...
2020-03-09 10:05:20 +0000 UTC View Post
THIS is the screw up they make. This isn't all of it, or it isn't obvious how this creates a mess yet.
I thought they'd lose faith quickly after failing to alter the first big event, an...
2020-03-06 05:39:32 +0000 UTC View Post
Even though I never got the Pulse page finished this week due to the flu, I thought I'd work a little on this now that I'm feeling a little better.
I thought Annie and Lucy needed to be weari...
2020-02-29 10:09:39 +0000 UTC View Post