Yesterday was a great writing day! Dialogue was flowing, their chemistry was electric. Roth gave me some awesome quotes! 🥵😍 I had to do some research to fill in some plot things involving Ram...
2023-08-19 16:00:08 +0000 UTC View PostSuggestions for her sisters middle names?
Colette ____ Hennessy-Caruso
Ariana ____ Hennessy-Khan
2023-08-18 16:00:13 +0000 UTC View PostI just shared this on Discord because I couldn't help myself and I'm evil. Part of a scene I was working on yesterday:
Her nightmare was coming. Panic engulfed her. She had to get ou... 2023-08-17 20:28:35 +0000 UTC View Post
OMG you guys! I’m not gonna lie. I’ve been wrestling with these opening chapters far longer than I thought I would. I think the original draft of this chapter was between 12-14k words. I divide...
2023-08-17 16:00:09 +0000 UTC View PostShe lifted watery eyes to his face and saw the rage there, barely contained, and felt a surge of terror that she was sure reflected in her eyes because he rested his forehead against hers.... 2023-08-15 16:01:00 +0000 UTC View Post
Just a peaceful skirmish between two adults having a disagreement...
“I had my faults, but I never thought I’d see the day that you ran to the man I freed you from.” 2023-08-13 16:01:01 +0000 UTC View Post
“Was I such a monster that you felt that you had to sell your soul to the devil to get away from me?”
“Better the devil I know than the one I don’t.” Her ... 2023-08-12 16:00:07 +0000 UTC View Post
I still have a bit more to do on the opening chapter. The dialogue bogged me down big time, but we're blasting through and will come back and clean and refine later during rewrites. The ups and dow...
2023-08-10 16:00:10 +0000 UTC View Post
Hoping to complete this opening chapter which has been kicking my butt. It’s now close to 17k words. It may be split into 2 or 3 chapters later but it’s one continuous scene like the end of Bit...
2023-08-09 20:06:06 +0000 UTC View PostI'm still fiddling with the annoying opening chapter because they address so many important topics. There's nearly two dozen versions of this scene from 2021 to now. The range in discussions, locat...
2023-08-08 16:00:10 +0000 UTC View Post“Lyle would do almost anything for you,” Roth said.
“I know.”
“He loves you.”
“Yes.” 2023-08-06 16:00:09 +0000 UTC View Post
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2023-08-04 23:07:09 +0000 UTC View PostIt’s been so long since I’ve read the beginning of Bitter Confessions that I forgot I wrote them as parts rather than books. In the original, the only flashback I showed during the course of th...
2023-08-04 16:00:09 +0000 UTC View Post
This chapter is almost the length of a novella. 🙄 Editing what I wrote in 2021 and adding new stuff...
2023-08-03 23:44:33 +0000 UTC View PostThe original opening for Bitter Confessions goes right into the morning after Roth and Jasmine’s big fight in London. I thought it would be a good change of pace to have a softer intro. I brainst...
2023-08-03 01:31:25 +0000 UTC View PostI’ve been thinking about this a lot as I delve into book 3 in the series. I think it’s more common for a series to have one couple per book. Christine Feehan, Nora Roberts, Nalini Singh come to...
2023-08-03 01:26:53 +0000 UTC View PostI told myself that all I really needed was Maximus’ POV for the blackmailing showdown. I should be laying down words in BC (Bitter Confessions), not in book 5 that won’t see the light of day fo...
2023-08-03 01:21:29 +0000 UTC View PostBecause of some references in Bitter Confessions, I knew I needed to work on this Roth & Maximus showdown. Since books 1-4 are from Jasmine’s POV, this scene will appear in an extra book (5) ...
2023-08-03 01:19:54 +0000 UTC View Post