I cleared the entire monowire barrier before moving forward. Better to remove it, than risk blocking, or killing, someone that may try to escape through this area before it diss...
2024-10-20 15:27:03 +0000 UTC
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I.. uh... don't know if I like this this chapter or not yet. It took a long time to put together, and it feels kinda... meh to me. It keeps the plot moving forward... I'll look it agai...
2024-10-18 03:04:50 +0000 UTC
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I hadn’t really looked at Skyler’s gear until she stripped off her coat. What I originally thought was heavy armor was actually just lightly armored, rugged clothing, with a...
2024-10-17 22:20:20 +0000 UTC
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“The bear’s feet go tom tom tom, tom tom tom, tom tom tom, the bear’s feet got tom tom tom, as they go marching round!” Issi sang as she danced around the living room. Since I wa...
2024-10-17 18:44:10 +0000 UTC
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Yes, there are callouts in this chapter to Maniac and Spark of Sylvan Flame. I didn't do it much in TBoB (mostly because so many started after) so I wanted to do it more in TH
As...
2024-10-17 16:07:40 +0000 UTC
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So... I wasn't sure about this chapter at the start, but I think it worked out in the end. Suprise! Can you figure out where this storyline is going yet? I got the idea from Cyberpunk originally, ...
2024-10-15 01:03:30 +0000 UTC
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Unrealistic? Maybe, but I like having both women becoming samurai at the same time. This allows me to explore a samurai romantic relationship (something lacking from many of my other stories)
2024-10-14 21:54:55 +0000 UTC
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When I stepped out of the processor, and back onto the street, things were a lot calmer than before. That probably had to do with the half dozen armored vehicles parked around t...
2024-10-14 19:06:31 +0000 UTC
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TH first today, because I'm thinking about releasing it at the end of the month, and doing daily releases until it's almost done. I'm far enough ahead that I don't need two TBoB chapters on writin...
2024-10-14 16:36:29 +0000 UTC
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“You okay over there?” Ratchet asked, as she crossed the room, carefully avoiding the bodies on the floor. “You seemed a little… out of there for a minute.” The woman ...
2024-10-12 01:55:54 +0000 UTC
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So... I started thinking maybe I'd give the bears their personalities from well known games and media. As many have noticed Spooky is very much a WH40k comissioner. Bob is very much a lovable 80s s...
2024-10-11 23:20:41 +0000 UTC
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The gun on top of our ride opened up a good two minutes before we arrived at our destination. I could see Emily swerving back and forth in the gunner seat, struggling to keep trac...
2024-10-11 19:11:32 +0000 UTC
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I slowly grabbed a piece of loose rebar leaning against the wall, without taking my eyes off the blurry indistinct shape. For some reason the person didn’t immediately try to rush me, or run, the...
2024-10-11 17:18:31 +0000 UTC
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I finished it! And I've been terrible at keeping up with DD lately. Better late than never?
Bella POV
“Not going to help your friend?” I asked the lizard wo...
2024-10-10 22:56:30 +0000 UTC
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So interesting tidbit... I had a pretty clear idea of where this arc was going, but I didn't have a clear idea of what kind of sabotage could cripple the corps in Calgary. I honestly considered hav...
2024-10-08 21:38:25 +0000 UTC
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So, after thinking about it, I'll probably be going back and rewriting chapter 8 and 9 later, to add a little more snark to Reina's dialog. She's far to passive compared to how I pictured her befor...
2024-10-08 18:43:11 +0000 UTC
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I didn’t know exactly what to say to Helen as she knelt in front of her friend, mourning. After a couple minutes she stood up, whipped her face off, and turned towards me. “We need t...
2024-10-08 16:27:38 +0000 UTC
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So this chapter both took me much longer than expected, and is shorter than expected. The problem being, this was kind of a necessary chapter, but both school and introductions are hard when the ...
2024-10-07 21:48:34 +0000 UTC
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Howdy all!
So since there are a couple chapters of TBoB Book 3 out, I wanted to get peopes feedback on it so far.
As you may have guessed it's not planned to be an antithesis arc, but...
2024-10-06 01:07:05 +0000 UTC
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About ten minutes later a whole convoy of vehicles rolled up to the front of the Jewelry store. Two additional armored vehicles, a couple jeeps, and a half dozen trucks already ...
2024-10-06 00:24:09 +0000 UTC
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Hmmm... Let me know what you think. I know where this arc is going, and I want to give Helen some room to grow, but I'm not 100% on this dirrection yet. It definitely makes some sense... bu...
2024-10-05 20:59:08 +0000 UTC
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So quick note: There's mention of a battleship, the Redmption, in this chapter. This is one of the things I'm going to go back and add to chapter 5ish... along with a description of the sk...
2024-10-05 18:14:14 +0000 UTC
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I flew to sector Eighty-Two in my truck. I briefly considered taking a Kodiak, but unlike the northern sectors, the south did occasionally see truck traffic, so I decided to try and keep...
2024-10-05 15:39:05 +0000 UTC
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So this turned out shorter than I expected, and even after trying to artificially extend it a little, it's still short of the 1.5k I aim for. I'll probably go back and see where I can expand it la...
2024-10-03 04:05:39 +0000 UTC
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I checked myself out in the mirror as soon as I put on my new synth leather jacket and pants. They both looked good, and were a lot more practical to run around in than my previous attir...
2024-10-02 23:09:08 +0000 UTC
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I stumbled into the residence, fully intending to collapse on my couch, only to find it occupied.
“Squiddy, what are you doing here?” I asked, as I sunk into one of the cozy ch...
2024-10-02 19:09:03 +0000 UTC
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I gasped as the security gate exploded inward, disgorging a wave of antithesis upon the concourse, led by the Model Six.
“I don’t think I have the time for ...
2024-10-02 16:16:28 +0000 UTC
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So over the last few days I've been considering what to do about my SCS fanfictions.
I didn't really want to release two different ones at once, but I do want to work on Tarnished a little, w...
2024-10-02 13:25:35 +0000 UTC
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This took me sooooo long today, and it's kinda different than usual. At least I got it done on time this time :o
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“I wish the spectres weren’t required to participate in al...
2024-10-01 01:57:49 +0000 UTC
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What I expected to be a short sprint down the street turned into an exercise of frustration as my legs occasionally spasmed, or failed to react the way I expected. Whether through determination and...
2024-09-29 20:59:43 +0000 UTC
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