TBoB - Book 5 - Chapter 20 - Eliminated
Okay, I rewrote a part in the middle. Cut out a particularly awkward conversation between Teddy and Nyx. It really didn't fit their relationship at all.
Unfortunately it made the...
Okay, I rewrote a part in the middle. Cut out a particularly awkward conversation between Teddy and Nyx. It really didn't fit their relationship at all.
Unfortunately it made the...
“I almost had her! I demand a rematch!” Kass yelled through my tablet.
“You literally just finished fighting,” Bella giggled. “Maybe you should wait until we finish the match,...
2025-08-11 19:49:06 +0000 UTC View PostDon't think I'm going to drag this out to a full combat arc. Now that we've seen Jennifer and Teddy bonding I'll probably try and wrap it up in the next chapter or two... Unless you thi...
2025-08-11 16:09:30 +0000 UTC View Post“Now I don’t want to take up too much of your time today, it is your first day after all, but I did want to ask you something important,” Dr. Michaels said once everyone had calmed down. “D...
2025-08-09 00:17:45 +0000 UTC View PostWhile Jennifer took up a position at the top of the stairs, behind the makeshift barrier, I stood off to the side watching the stairs through the thin metal railings.
“Do you even know how ...
2025-08-08 15:29:43 +0000 UTC View PostHey all,
Just wanted to let you know I've created new chat... channels? Threads? Whatever they are for my stories. I haven't used the until this point, but I thought I'd open a few topics to...
Not super happy wiht the last line, I feel like it should be something like that... but couldnt think of what to put!
Camille zipped around the room, sticking her no...
2025-08-07 20:39:00 +0000 UTC View PostI glanced up at the sky, trying to determine how fucked we actually were.
Most of the rifts appeared to have opened over the factories, and were dropping their seed pods in that general...
2025-08-07 15:55:30 +0000 UTC View PostHmmmm... I wasn't a fan of this chapter at first. It felt like it was going to be a continuation of the panic attack of a few chapters ago, but I like where it went in the end. 2025-08-07 01:01:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Not sure if I like the way this flows, will look at it again later.
Also, have a doctor's appointment later, so I can't guarentee the second chapter will get done today.
2025-08-06 17:53:07 +0000 UTC
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Come on... you know that if anyone was going to stand up to Teddy is was going to be Kass
“STOP…” I screamed as another pillar of water rose out of the water ...
“You don’t know how to use a mesh rig?” Jennifer asked in disbelief. “Really?”
“I can get all the information I need from either the city networks, or through Nyx,” I grumbled....
I picked up the strange crystal tablet sitting on the table in the middle of the room and ran my finger across the front of it experimentally. Even though it appeared to just be a large slab of cry...
2025-08-05 00:59:11 +0000 UTC View PostJennifer dragged me towards the back of the park. The crowds thinned out once we passed the main plaza, the facades slowly changed from the colorful cartoony versions we saw at the entrance to some...
2025-08-04 15:45:24 +0000 UTC View PostThis took me soooo long. I ended up rewriting large sections of it, and I'm still not super happy with it. Still better than it was. Hope you enjoy.
An entire squad ...
2025-08-01 22:41:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey all!
Just wanted to let you know that RavensDaggers webstore now has stickers! I've been bothering the big birb for them for months, and as soon as they became available I bought a set. 2025-08-01 16:45:02 +0000 UTC View Post
“This is… a lot,” I muttered as I stood in front of the truck and waited for everyone to gather. Nimbleland was a riot of sights and sounds, flashing lights and screaming people.
...
2025-08-01 15:48:15 +0000 UTC View PostI spent most of the day running around the refugee camp making sure that all my new citizens were settled properly.
Since I hadn’t planned for a kitchen ahead of time, I needed to fin...
2025-07-31 19:01:33 +0000 UTC View PostSo I just wanted to ask, what does everyone think about TBoB book 5 so far? I was planning on making it a little more family based, but I've begun to worry that people will begin to lose interest w...
2025-07-31 17:01:49 +0000 UTC View PostSooo... I dunno where this came from. It's a lot of background and worldbuilding that I somehow hadn't covered in the story this far. Will it be relevant? I dunno. It just kind of flowe...
2025-07-31 15:51:30 +0000 UTC View PostWhen we finally climbed to the top of the slope, and I got a look at the mass of humanity in front of me, a cold pit opened up in my stomach. I knew that my mother had planned on bringing as many p...
2025-07-30 19:58:51 +0000 UTC View PostOne down!
“You know how I said my situation was kind of complicated?” I said slowly, trying to ignore the fight at the other end of the hallway. Pam wandered ove...
2025-07-30 15:48:06 +0000 UTC View Post“I’m sorry! I let my temper get the best of me, and I didn’t even manage to take even a single one of them down,” Chelsea cried, her mane of auburn hair flopping about. “I was so confiden...
2025-07-29 18:24:30 +0000 UTC View PostAfter lunch we spent a couple more hours at the seaside. This was not only the first time the rest of my family had seen the ocean in real life, but it was the first time they’d ever left the cit...
2025-07-29 15:43:22 +0000 UTC View PostWoo! Finally done, several hours later than I have the last few weeks....
Since I know my free members couldn't read the previous message I'm repeating h...
2025-07-28 21:05:26 +0000 UTC View PostHere it is!
So, I'm feeling a little sick today, but I'm going to try and get another chappy done this afternoon.
I hav...
2025-07-28 16:55:19 +0000 UTC View Post
Not many changes to this one... I did realize that I missed chapter 56-65 of Tbob book 4 and added them, but all of this weeks chappies went into existing files
2025-07-25 19:47:51 +0000 UTC View PostWe spent another hour or so at the aquatic garden, following the colorful holograms around the complex. A part of me still didn’t believe that there used to be such a variety and abundance of sea...
2025-07-25 19:32:44 +0000 UTC View Post“Is this what a greenhouse is supposed to look like?” I asked suspiciously as I wandered out of the rest room.
“A complete one to one replication of a jungle? Well, at least the Jungles...
2025-07-25 15:46:28 +0000 UTC View PostSurprise! I did another chappy today. Bonus!
I stared at the gate for several long seconds, half expecting it to flare back to life any second and an army of gilded...