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MiP Chapter 31: Advancing

Ressara watched closely as the pair of young maybe-mages walked up to the bar, talked briefly, haggled only a little before handing over some coins, and walked up the stairs and out of sight, their...

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MiP Chapter 30: Dramos

Carlos firmly suppressed his urge to laugh at the sight of the mayor's facepalm, and dismissed his thoughts of Star Trek memes. However amusing the comparison might be, explaining it even to Amber ...

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MiP Chapter 29: Departure

Carlos ate quietly as he walked, barely noticing the taste of his sandwich. It was an excellent sandwich, lightly grilled, filled with three unfamiliar but delectable meats and a medley of sliced t...

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MiP Chapter 28: Exploit?

With his soul's urgent problem dealt with, Carlos emerged from his meditations, opening his eyes and turning his attention outward again, to find Amber playfully experimenting with her new spell. S...

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MiP Chapter 27: Debugging

Early the next morning, Carlos woke to vigorous shaking, and grunted irritably as he opened his eyes to see Amber leaning over him with her hands gripping both of his shoulders. He waved her off an...

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MiP Chapter 26: Academy

"Well? What are you two waiting for? I opened the door for you, so come in already!" The old robed man waved a hand, beckoning Carlos and Amber forward. Carlos blinked, shook himself, and hastily s...

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MiP Chapter 25: Troubleshooting

Carlos sat on his rented bed and adopted a meditative pose as he focused inward on what his introspector could sense about the state of his soul. He thought back to the inspection Lady Telrar had d...

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No chapter today

Today's news is much better than last week, but still mixed. Last week, I announced, uh, everywhere except Patreon, that I was scheduled to be evicted on August 14.

The good news: Wi...

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MiP Chapter 24: Nobles

While Carlos pondered over the mysteries he'd suddenly been presented, Lady Telrar shooed him out of the ritual area, called Amber forward, and began repeating her inspection. Carlos shook his head...

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MiP Chapter 23: Inspection

Carlos was the one Varlinden gave the teleport scroll to, and he'd kept it in his pack, but when the time came to use it he gave it to Amber. He could experiment with using scrolls himself later, w...

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Schedule: Weekly on Tuesday

After getting feedback from several patrons, I have decided that in the interest of a more reliable schedule and higher quality I will update with a new chapter weekly.

One new chapter will b...

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MiP Chapter 22: Completion

Assessor Varlinden looked at Carlos and narrowed his eyes. "Identify? Not confirm?"

"Yes, Assessor. He said he is forbidden to reveal his house unless absolutely necessary."

"I see." Va...

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MiP Chapter 21: Assessment

Enchanter Tornay cursed under his breath for perhaps the thousandth time, as yet another test told him that the small purple crystal he was looking at was a perfectly ordinary and unremarkable dung...

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MiP Chapter 20: Deceit

Darmelkon casually carried his chair back over and sat down in front of Carlos. "Something to show me? Not to discuss terms or negotiate?"

Carlos nodded. "To establish some backgroun...

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MiP Chapter 19: Deliberation

Amber sighed, and stretched, carefully keeping her movements slow and steady to avoid startling anyone. If not for the tension and uncertainty about what would eventually happen to them, this would...

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MiP Chapter 18: Discussion

Carlos lost track of time meditating as he gradually eroded the mana absorber, but he was pretty sure at least a couple hours had passed. His mana redistributor was feeling more and more overfilled...

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MiP Chapter 17: Dispute

"Well, now that the Enchanters Guild has acquired this dungeon core, I believe it's time to fulfill your side of the contract and pay me."

Tornay turned to look at Darmelkon. "What?"

"Y...

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MiP Chapter 16: Delved

Enchanter Tornay and Lord Merchant Darmelkon stared at the dimly lit dungeon entrance in the cliff face in front of them. Darmelkon broke the silence first. "Any chance it's another dungeon they ju...

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MiP Chapter 15: Found

Carlos woke much earlier than usual that morning, full of excitement to continue building soul structures. He quickly choked down a portion of trail rations, then turned toward Purple, but paused a...

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MiP Chapter 14: A System, of Sorts

Carlos meditated again, focusing once more on the feelings of mana moving into his soul and etching itself into a structure. This time, the concept he focused on for what the structure should do wa...

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MiP Chapter 13: Making Soul Structures

Carlos frowned and put a hand on his chin, thinking. "Hmm. A dungeon core making a soul structure. Amber, do you know any reason why it might not work?"

"Um. Well, dungeon cores don't have mo...

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MiP Chapter 12: Cave

Carlos cast the light spell many times, paying careful attention to the sensations he could feel from using mana, as he waited for Amber to return. He was pretty sure he'd learned all he could from...

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MiP Chapter 11: First Spell

Carlos yelped as something pointy dug into his side and he jerked awake. He blinked repeatedly as he sat up and rubbed sand from his eyes, his heart slowing back to a resting pace.

"Wow, no w...

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Carlos's soul structures plan

Soul structures list

  1. Comprehension aid: My first wish from Purple, but embedded into my soul. This will help me understand whatever I might need to understand, whether that's the spee...

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MiP Chapter 10: Soul Computer

Building a computer made of mana in his soul was not an easy or simple thing to do, of course, but at least he could start from concepts higher level than transistors and binary logic, Carlos refle...

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MiP Chapter 9: Soul Development

In a remote wilderness area, most definitely not a capital city, Carlos anxiously held a dimly glowing purple crystal in his hands, frowning as the glow fitfully fluttered a few times. "Are you ok,...

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MiP Chapter 8: Hunted

Amber turned and began marching briskly along the road, much faster than the casual walking pace they had been using, and Carlos rushed to keep pace.

"Ok, I know one hundred gold is a lot, bu...

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MiP Chapter 7: Bear

The bear prowled forward menacingly, approaching from the side of the road, and Carlos frantically scrabbled for his sword, heart pounding in his chest. He tried to remember if he'd read any advice...

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MiP Chapter 6: Learning

"So that armor fits? Great, we'll take it!"

"That will be 8 silver."

"Done."

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"Uh, is bargaining not a thing here?"

"No time, we need to go!"

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"The e...

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MiP Chapter 5: Secrets

"Wait, what? Magic is programming?"

Amber stared at Carlos, and raised an eyebrow. "There's more to magic than just crafting spells, but of course crafting spells is part of it. How ...

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