Chapter 15 – My Adventures in Super Hell
“Badgelor lived through this,” I growled as we continued walking. We were out of immediate danger. Super immediate danger at least. We were just off the beach follo...
2023-10-15 23:12:36 +0000 UTC View Post
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Chapter 14 – Preparations are Finished.
“Here’s what I think happened,” said Shart preparing for another discussion. “When Filly, he’s one of my best friends, realized he lost his hat he must have started looking for...
2023-10-08 22:48:46 +0000 UTC View PostHealthscare updates
Sarah is doing better. Quite a bit, but unfortunatly she was at an EXTREMELY low point so that doesn't mean she's doing well. Without going into too much detail, she has an acute kidney...
2023-10-01 21:57:26 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 13 – The invincible wall
Julia had never thought it could be that bad. When she was a child she had awoken one day with the certainty that in her lifetime Grebthar would be reborn and the battles with the ...
2023-10-01 21:53:21 +0000 UTC View PostWhat's going on with me
So, fun week. Wake up on Monday and my wife thinks she's dying so we go on a quick trip to the ER where they informed us that she was, in fact, dying.
Fortunatly, they could handle that...
2023-09-25 03:49:55 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 12 – Hallway at the edge of nowhere.
“This passage between worlds is different than the last one,” I commented. There was an odd echo surrounding us. It was like I was in a long concrete hallway rather than ...
2023-09-25 03:46:05 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 11 – The Utmost Respect
“Keep moving,” yelled Shart. I didn’t need to be told twice. Honestly, I didn’t really need to be told the first time. I continued racing as fast as my badger-power assisted legs could carr...
2023-09-17 22:21:16 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 10 – Fast Time at Trenton
I dropped back into Trenton the moment I was able. The demon attendant glanced over at me as I started to awaken. They were a totally genderless octopus-like ball of tentacle...
2023-09-10 22:36:34 +0000 UTC View PostNo chat this week but something to tide you over
I'm going to be at a labor day function tonight, so no chat but I have been working on a side project with an old writing buddy of mine. We've gotten quite a few chapters done so I figured I'...
2023-09-03 15:55:22 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 9 – The Surrender
“Hold your arms up! It's better that way,” yelled Shart. The roller coaster suddenly banked sharply, and we twisted down a series of curves and bends. Without me physically bei...
2023-09-03 15:52:03 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 8 Windfall Blues
Fenris was positive that whatever Jim was doing had to be far more important than what he himself was doing. It just had to be.
“As acting mayor, I dedicate this statue to ...
2023-08-27 14:35:52 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 7 - In Limbo
They did, in fact, have a mortal rig. The inside of the shop looked like a cyberpunk nightmare right out of the Matrix. Sometimes a human who couldn't summon demons would make his way down he...
2023-08-20 22:47:25 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 6 - For Johnathan - The Hentai School
“Boys have a penis, and girls have a vagina,” I began, in my lesson in hentai school. It was a lesson I never thought I’d have to give.
“This should be fun,” said Shart w...
2023-08-13 22:21:01 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 5 – Welcome to Trenton
(Short chapter this week, next week should be interesting through.)
“Welcome to Trenton,” said Ben as we entered the city proper. There were nodes at the outskirts of the town where...
2023-08-06 22:49:02 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 4 – Journey to Newark
(Final stage pre editor)
“And that’s the soul cleanser,” said Ben as we walked by the main tower, surrounded by dozens of confused demons.
“So, all mortal souls get processed th...
2023-07-30 22:52:20 +0000 UTC View PostFifth Era Book 2 is out now!
Book 2 in the fifth era series. Ever want to see what an actual game of DnD is like with me, this is it.
2023-07-26 04:34:03 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 3 - Meat and Greet
(Another week, another chapter)
I exhaled loudly, slamming my foot down on the massively armored demon’s detached head. Removing that hadn’t killed him though, it turned out ...
2023-07-23 22:45:34 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 2 – A Banner’s Purpose
(Note, these are final revised chapters, they are still in the editing process but that takes more time, and I kind of promised chapter releases a while ago. So here is this chapter, in a...
2023-07-16 22:29:10 +0000 UTC View PostBook 8: The War For Noobtown, Chapter 1
Chapter 1 - Jim Goes Down to Jersey, Looking for a Soul to Steal
“I expected this to be a bit more of a challenge,” I stated nonchalantly, stepping through the portal to Jersey. Wel...
2023-07-09 14:20:03 +0000 UTC View PostSlow going on the edits
So, I'm 1/3rd of the way through after both massive expanding and editing the first part of the book. Good stuff. Very neat story covering two sections of Ordinal that have not yet been...
2023-06-25 22:45:49 +0000 UTC View PostEditing, or what was I thinking Part 1
So I'm slowly going through book 8, adding in bits and pieces I missed and filling out sections that were not detailed enough. Good news, doing that adds a bunch of words. Bad news is t...
2023-06-18 23:01:50 +0000 UTC View PostNoobtown 8: War for Noobtown's first draft is done
That's great, but this is just the first stage of getting a noobtown book completed. I'll have to go through it at least 2 more times to actually get it up to a standard that is not a total e...
2023-06-11 23:40:13 +0000 UTC View PostFinishing an arc
I am still working on 8, far longer than I initially expected but I keep running into quality issues that I feel are worth some rewrites. At this point I'm to the final bit though, so once mo...
2023-06-04 22:46:16 +0000 UTC View PostConnective Tissue
Book 8 is an ending and I find those harder to write than even a book in the middle of a series. Actually writing out endings is something I do not enjoy because any errors you make are somew...
2023-05-21 22:42:38 +0000 UTC View PostNoobtown 8 - Too much
So utlimatly Noobtown is the story of Jim, and I think one of the problems is that I like ensemble novels a bit too much. My initial ending focused too much other other characters and that wa...
2023-05-15 16:25:14 +0000 UTC View PostI blame my alphas
So I thought Book 8 hit a speedbump lot wise and sent it over to several of my alpha readers to determine if I had. I did.
So I'm losing a week plus worth of work and revising it. ...
2023-05-07 22:50:16 +0000 UTC View PostWorking on Noobtown again
So life is back to Noobtown and I'm going to try to have it wrapped up in the next week or two. We'll see if my writing training to expand my bandwidth was at all useful.
The book is cu...
2023-04-30 22:55:52 +0000 UTC View PostFirst Drafts
So I just finished a first draft. What happens now? Well, first you go through and figure out what the book does well, what it does poorly, and what needs worked on. S...
2023-04-14 01:53:57 +0000 UTC View PostSword of Justice part 12 (and finished with teh first draft)
First draft done, I'll discuss what happens next in another post.
Chapter 42: Which witch is which?
I returned to the dungeon and began searching around for another path back...
2023-04-14 01:45:25 +0000 UTC View Post